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Posted By: Bernard Rasson collaboration anyone ? - 05/08/23 12:41 AM
Hi everyone,
I wrote some 200+ poems and lyrics along the way, but only in french

I just made an attempt to write one english lyrics

I would like to know what you think of it

here it goes:
Posted By: Bernard Rasson Re: collaboration anyone ? - 05/08/23 12:42 AM
What's another mile


I'm driving in the snow
everything is so slow
the weather is so bad
that it could drive me mad
it's been several weeks
that I haven't see you
and it's you that I seek
sometimes it gets to my head
in every room in sight
then i can't sleep at night
some days of the week




but what's another mile
if it's to see your smile

I'm staying in the cold
with no hope of rainbow
and my mood is so low
for me, no pot of gold
I'm feeling very sad
so far away from you
how happy I would be
If I could hold your hand
I know you understand
cause we are only one,
and made from the same stone


BRIDGE

there is a blocked road
I must take another
in this crazy winter
but I have got no choice
and I just won't give up
'cause what's another mile
if it's to see your smile

yes, what's another mile
if it's to see your smile

OUTRO

and as i get close
to your house
I think I made it and
while it might seem awful,
winter will be beautiful
Posted By: Planobilly Re: collaboration anyone ? - 05/08/23 01:28 AM
Bonjour Bernard, je suis heureux de faire votre connaissance. Je t'enverrai un message privé. Ce serait amusant de collaborer.

Billy
Posted By: Bernard Rasson Re: collaboration anyone ? - 05/08/23 06:32 AM
Hello Billy,
I'm glad to have an answer
I am beginning to get connections in french too
looking forward to work with you
best regards
Bernard
Posted By: Bernard Rasson Re: collaboration anyone ? - 05/09/23 09:17 AM
Hello Billy, here is a second lyrics:

Will you give me a ring ?


I'm walking in the streets
without a direction
it used to be so sweet
to be in our mansion
together, you and me
but now that you are gone
And I am all alone
where we were so happy
It is just to painful
And I prefer to be
In the middle of a full
street of our city

to forget what she said:
before every spring,
"will you give me a ring" ?


When I go for a walk
It means nothing to me
and I don't even talk
to people that I see
It's just a mean to feel
some warmth from the crowd
that seems to ease the pain
even when it gets cold
and now that it's over
I walk for a full day
to forget my lover
the way she used to say:

before every spring,
"will you give me a ring" ?

BRIDGE

I strongly remember
the time when we were together
I can think of nothing better
now, I am just a stranger

before every spring,
"will you give me a ring" ?
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