Done a backing track for a song but I feel there is something missing(Melody?) in the choruses(verses)
the 1st chourus starts at aprox 38 seconds in after the lead guitar.

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Any comments welcome.

Thanks

Pete,

The link provided is not working.

Later,

Not my place to post anything really, not being a Country player and all, but it struck me that the Chorus was too long. Its got a great hook in the chords (G,D,A) that I'm sure someone could put words to but they play over too many times. I cant tell then when the "verse" is starting - didnt seem the same as the opening 38 secs.
Bounces along beautifully as a BT though and with a bit of discipline and some decisions on what starts where, this could be the makings of a good tune.
Feel free to tell me to go play - -
Ian

Yep, the only thing missing is a melody.

Hi Pete.

I agree with Mario - only needs a tune and lyrics.

As a backing track it's first rate. I know it's work in progress, but when you do the final mix you could maybe bring the bass up a little. Other than that, no problems.

ROG.

I agree with Mario.
Nice background.

Guenter

I had a hard time figuring out where I was in the song. It needs some sort of melody to keep you on track.

In a song, it should be easy to know by listening where you are in the song. The verse and chorus sounded similar enough that I was wondering verse? or chorus?

maybe it's just me, but that;s my take

Thanks for the comments everyone.
But What I want to know is can you dance to it?


Full Song
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Yep, the only thing missing is a melody.

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+1 the link worked fine tonight, .

later,