Saw a guy carrying roses from a store and the first line of this came to me. It is done with all realtracks, all comments and suggestions welcome!

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The First Valentine's Day

Excellent vocal. Guitar has a neat tone

Now, Robert !

I think this is the best
of you we have heard so far ?
A very strong and solid vocal
to a passionate tune !
Thank you Robert !

Cheers
Dani

Thanks for the comments!

Okay, what am I not doing? The link takes me your Fawm page and there's a Soundcloud icon, but no audio streams....?

Olemon is having trouble with this link, It works for me and a few of you have commented on it. Could someone who has not commented on it see if the soundcloud player works for you. Here is the link;

The First Valentine's Day

Really interesting take on the crucifixion and the Valentine's day angle. Good work!! Take care. Greg

Robert,

I really, really like this one! A good, creative arrangement. And great reminder of ultimate Love, on the day we celebrate love.

Thanks for sharing it!

Steve

A BIG +1

I think this is your best to date!

PLUS 2!! I really can't add to the above.

Yes, an interesting interpretation. Connecting past to present in a whole new way. Thought provoking lyrics. Excellent song and mix.

Robert, Great all around. Excellent vocal. Love the rhyme violence and silent. Your best to date. Keep em coming.

I appreciate all the kind words! Thanks!

Robert,

Excellent writing. Excellent production. Excellent mix. Excellent vocal. Seems like each new song is better than the last - in all regards...

Really well done.

floyd

Thanks floyd, much appreciated!

Sung from the heart., it really shows

+1
I love the drum break in the middle and the "silent" bit. Good job

Thanks JosieC!