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Posted By: 44kfl Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 08/30/16 05:57 PM
https://soundcloud.com/kfl44/wont-you-stay

love this style, made it a favorite after one listen.
Kenny

Won’t You Stay
© 2016 K Leverett

Boxcar.sty (from country styles)

RealDrums NashvilleEven8^5 HiHat,Ride
995 Bass Elec HardRockLA
2499 Guitar Baritone PopCountryBrentEV
1681 Guitar 12 String Acoustic FingerPickingEV
1948 Mandolin PopUpliftingAndyEV
669 Guitar Slide Background EasySouthernEV


Well girl I hear you talk about leaving
Please don’t think that I don’t understand
We’re both stuck here as the summer’s fading
It’s not like we’ve got any bigger plans

But won’t you stay, I wish you’d stay
Maria I’ve just been longing to tell you
You’re on my mind when I wake in the morning
You’re in my heart for the rest of the day
Won’t you stay, I wish you’d stay
Girl won’t you stay, now I wish you’d stay

There’s that place down on main where we had coffee
And you talked about family and dreams
All of the things that you want to accomplish
And I see myself wanting all the same things

So won’t you stay, I wish you’d stay
Maria I’ve just been longing to tell you
You’re on my mind when I wake in the morning
You’re in my heart for the rest of the day
Won’t you stay, I wish you’d stay
Girl won’t you stay, now I wish you’d stay

So won’t you stay, I wish you’d stay
Maria I’ve just been longing to tell you
You’re on my mind when I wake in the morning
You’re in my heart for the rest of the day
Won’t you stay, Maria stay
Girl won’t you stay, now I wish you’d stay

Posted By: Noel96 Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 08/30/16 07:23 PM
Nice one, Kenny!

I agree with you, it's a great style.

Regards,
Noel
Posted By: David Snyder Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 08/30/16 09:04 PM
Love this man. See my post on the forum.
Posted By: JoanneCooper Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 08/31/16 01:06 AM
Love love these styles. Great submission Kenny
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 08/31/16 08:06 AM
Enjoyed the harmonies and the style was a good choice for the song.


Charlie
Posted By: AudioTrack Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 09/01/16 09:51 AM
Kenny

Nice job with the backing.

The harmonies / doubling has given the song more fullness.
Posted By: RnAM Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 09/01/16 04:34 PM
Very nice this one Kenny!
Did you use autotune (or similar freeware vst) on your voice?
I like that subtle robotic effect on it.

Good work.

Rob
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 09/03/16 02:32 PM
Thanks Noel
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 09/03/16 02:32 PM
Thanks David
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 09/03/16 02:33 PM
Thanks JosieC
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 09/03/16 02:33 PM
Thanks Charlie
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 09/03/16 02:34 PM
Thanks Video Track!
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Won't You Stay Pop/Rock Song - 09/03/16 02:46 PM
Originally Posted By: RnAM
Very nice this one Kenny!
Did you use autotune (or similar freeware vst) on your voice?
I like that subtle robotic effect on it.

Good work.

Rob


Thanks Rob,

I have laryngitis because of a medication that I have to take, I even wrote the song with a limited vocal range but when it gets to the chorus it needs to go up a little to avoid boredom, so my voice was wavering and cracking ( a little bit like Cher/vocoder sound maybe) I'm usuing Logic Pro on a Mac and am pretty new to trying the flex pitch built in app (think Melodyne) since my voice is weak it wavered out of pitch more than usual so I set flex pitch to correct pitch to all lead vocal at about 90%. I think that's where you're hearing the effect, it's mostly unintentional, it's just the most in tune I could make myself at this time.
Hope that wasn't too long winded. I'm sure this could be used for great effects but any that I made but by accident.
Kenny

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