Hi Everyone,

Here's a song I wrote some years back and have finally recorded. The track is all BIAB/RT. Thanks for listening - hope you enjoy.

Bob

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10020696

These Days

Sometimes it’s a mystery
What she ever saw in me
And some days it’s a fall from grace
When I close my eyes and see her face

Chorus:
These days wash over me
Like the waves on a hurricane sea
These days the angels have fallen
These nights the rain keeps pouring

Every day is a memory
When I wake up it’s her I see
Each night is a new reminder
That when I dream I try to find her

Chorus: repeat

She walks into my night
I feel her spirit and I hold it tight
I know it will soon be morning
And she’ll be gone upon the dawning

Chorus: repeat

In my heart I can’t be free
I’m chained forever hopelessly
So goodbye my love for now
I can’t leave cause I don’t know how

Chorus - end

I enjoyed it, thanks for posting.

I noticed that the last chorus between 3:00 and 3:12 there's a bit of distortion on the right side. I think it's coming from the vocal part.

David, thanks for listening - I appreciate it. Yes, I also heard that distortion upon a closer listen. I'll fix that before it goes up on my website. Thanks again.

Bob

Great song, super lyrics and vox.

I also noticed some slight distortion in all of the choruses. You might want to check those out also.

Mario, thanks for the listen and feedback. Yes, agree - I am remixing. The choruses (which are doubled) and especially the last chorus was a bit hot in the mix.

Thanks,
Bob

I enjoyed it Bob. Did hear the distortion you're fixing.

Hey Josie, thanks for listening. Yes, there was some slight distortion in each chorus - it was a bit heavier in the last one. Here's the remixed version...

http://robertdeanwordsandmusic.com/music-7.html

Bob