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Posted By: Rob4580 Keep On Beating - 04/02/12 06:37 AM
Hey guys.
Here is my latest song.

Comments invited.

Sound Cloud

Keep on beating

Never go where the rain dont fall and
the moon dont light your eyes.

My heart will go on dusty rods towards those southern skies.

I know you said that you wont be long.
But I feel my heart could die.

I want you here within my arms, Im not one for long good byes.

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Dont be still my heart keep keep on beating.
Take me back to the one that I greive

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Never Brave the miday sun , it may cause
your skin to burn.

To soothe your lips with water is some thing that I yearn.

How I pine for better days and your youthful smile.
To lay beside the river and rest up for a while.

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Dont be still my heart keep keep on beating.
Take me back to the one that I greive

Please call for the one that Im needing.
Take me back to the place i belong
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Ther's an old man in the mirror I have no recollection of.

All I know is you cared for me and healed me with your love.



****** Song Summary *************
Title: keep on beating
File:keep on beating.SGU
Key=C , Tempo 100, Length (m:s)=2:43
No intro. 64 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 64. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Style is _BALADE.STY (Ctry Ballad w/ el. guit (85 RS))
Style MIDI Instruments are :
RealTracks in style: 366:Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065
RealTracks in style: ~~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~~362:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~~542:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm Dreamy Ev 085
RealDrums in style: NashvilleEven16^5-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride
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Vocals and keyboard me myself and I

Music producer 6
Posted By: MarioD Re: Keep On Beating - 04/02/12 03:21 PM
WOW what a fantastic song!

Everything about this is top shelf!

I hope you have this copyrighted.

Two thumbs up.
Posted By: seeker Re: Keep On Beating - 04/02/12 06:35 PM
Rob,

Ditto on Mario's comments.

What a tear jerk-er that is.

Thanks for sharing!
Posted By: Steve Young Re: Keep On Beating - 04/02/12 09:15 PM
Rob,

Very nice! Well written, very touching. And I only counted 3 "p's" in it! Very nice job here!

Steve
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Keep On Beating - 04/02/12 09:35 PM
Hey all.
Thanks for your support and encouraging comments.

Regards Rob.
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Keep On Beating - 04/02/12 10:13 PM
Hey MarioD.
Just sent you a pm.
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Keep On Beating - 04/03/12 11:26 AM
Hi MarioD.

Got the link.
Much appreciated.

Rob
Posted By: Tommyc Re: Keep On Beating - 04/04/12 04:13 PM
Great Lyrics, no more Pea Poppers for you Iron Bark Bob! Thanks for sharing Rob!
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Keep On Beating - 04/05/12 09:45 PM
Hey Tommy.
Just about got rid of those cursed pops.
Thanks for listening.

Rob
Posted By: toucher Re: Keep On Beating - 04/06/12 02:18 PM
cool song Rob, it has some nice imagery in the lyrics.

Rob
Posted By: Westside Steve Re: Keep On Beating - 04/08/12 03:02 PM
Nice 50s feel. Good job.
I'd have mixed the vocals a little more up front.
WSS
Posted By: Danny C. Re: Keep On Beating - 04/08/12 04:23 PM
Very nice work.

Later,
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Keep On Beating - 04/08/12 09:59 PM
Hello toucher.
Thanks for listening.
Regards Rob
Posted By: Westside Steve Re: Keep On Beating - 04/09/12 02:37 AM
Hey downunder guy
I am enjoying everything on your soundcloud page so far.
Love the retro feel all around. A touch of Chris Isaac and the Jordanaires.
WSS
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Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Keep On Beating - 04/09/12 06:21 AM
Hi DannyC.

Thanks for dropping bye and commenting.
Regards Rob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Keep On Beating - 04/10/12 12:33 AM
Hey WestSide Steve.
Thanks for the complament regarding Chris Isaac and the Jordanaires.

Im a big fan of Chris Isaac.

I will have a new tune posted soon.

Regards Rob
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