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Posted By: rsdean Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 12:14 AM
Hi All,

Here's something new. This is called Gone Like April Showers.

All BIAB RTs - recorded and mixed in GarageBand.

Thanks for listening!

Bob
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 01:35 AM
Hey Bob,

This is great. The instruments, the rhythm, the melody - all great. This is my new favourite song of yours. I loved the lyrics. To me they were about coming through on the other side of a broken relationship. That was something I found it very easy to relate to.

Excellent work!
Noel
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 02:33 AM
Bob,

Good to see ya back around. I really like the sound in the first verse with just you and the guitars - a fresh, clean sound that fit your lyrics nicely. The organ threw it off a little for me... would have liked that early sound to continue throughout...

As always, an interesting listen.

floyd
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 03:14 AM
Hey Noel,

Thanks so much. I've been so busy lately - not much time for music. Appreciate the kind words.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 03:15 AM
Floyd,

Thanks very much - appreciate the listen and feedback. I was going for a Garth Hudson type backing... smile

Bob
Posted By: cubanpete Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 04:59 AM
Great lyrics, very good all around. Thanks

Mike b.
Posted By: gibson Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 02:26 PM
Good to hear you are back, Bob.

A great song but the verse really hooked me, beautiful and simple.

My favourite so far I think

Alyn
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 03:20 PM
Mike,

Thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: JoanneCooper Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 03:34 PM
Hi Bob
As has been said, nice to see you back on the forums. Nice song. I especially enjoyed he more acoustic verse but I loved the lyrics in the chorus "so gone baby gone"
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 04:07 PM
Alyn,

Thanks. So glad you liked it. Appreciate the feedback.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 04:09 PM
Hey JosieC,

Thanks so much. I think you and Floyd made the right call on this one - sounds better as an "all acoustic".

I just uploaded a new acoustic version. Thanks again for listening and commenting.

Bob
Posted By: JoanneCooper Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 06:01 PM
Nice one Bob. I like the acoustic feel now.
Posted By: sixchannel Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 07:13 PM
Hi Bob
A nice acoustic country song. Great lyrics - some time you gotta move on and Gone like April Showers is a neat way to put it.
cheers
ian
Posted By: tommyad Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 08:36 PM
Bob, I always like the imagery in your songs. This one is especially good. I heard both versions and this one is much better. With the organ gone you might drop back the vocals a bit. I am used to your unique style after all these years and I always look forward to your posts. Don't stay away for so long. I really liked this. Good write and good vocals.
Posted By: PgFantastic Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 09:11 PM
Great song, well song and written! Thanks for sharing!
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 09:32 PM
Hey Tommy,

Thanks so much for the kind words. I agree on the vocal - I dropped it back a bit. Thanks again for listen and helpful feedback.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 09:32 PM
Thanks again Joanne! smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 09:44 PM
Ian,

Always so nice to hear from you. Thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/02/14 10:12 PM
Bob - that is a much nicer presentation of that lyric! An enjoyable listen. floyd
Posted By: dani48 Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/03/14 12:47 AM
Hi, Bob !


This is my favorite Bob tune !:))
I think you have really got
everything to fall perfectly
in place !:)) I enjoyed everything
about this tune !:))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: Al-David Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/03/14 03:23 AM
Hi Bob...

Really nice! We like the hook a lot! And the percussions are fabulous! Everything about this is great! We loved it!

Al & Di
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/03/14 11:05 AM
Robert,

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this one. Always look forward to hearing your new songs as well.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/03/14 11:05 AM
Thanks Floyd!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/03/14 11:06 AM
Dani,

Thanks. Very much appreciated - glad you liked this one.

Bob
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/03/14 01:03 PM
really nice.

I think the acoustic was the right decision. I didn't hear any others since I've been kinda busy and haven't been here like I would like to be.


Nice work on the lyrics.

I like it



I think the vocals are a bit too loud. I listened on 2 devices, and yeah, I'd back them off a small amount ... just a few db should make them fit the mix better.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/03/14 01:28 PM
Thanks Herb - I did back the vocals off a bit in the last mix. Appreciate the kind words and feedback.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/03/14 01:29 PM
Al & Di,

Thanks very much. So glad you enjoyed it.

Bob
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/03/14 01:48 PM
Good to see you. We've been missing the cool imagery and, man, this one doesn't disappoint.

"Gone are the shadows
Across the bedroom door
Gone are the footsteps
Bare feet on the floor"

You can really say a lot in a couple of lines. We much enjoyed this one.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/04/14 11:06 AM
Janice & Bud,

Thanks for those kind words - very appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: gruverider Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/04/14 11:27 PM
very good write! I liked your choice of BIAB style too
Posted By: Sundance Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/05/14 03:30 AM
Good stuff Bob. I like this one a lot.


Josie
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/05/14 10:50 AM
Gruverider,

Thanks for listening and the kind words.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/05/14 10:51 AM
Josie,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: Steve Young Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/05/14 06:35 PM
Bob,

I always look forward to any songs that you post on here. You always expand my imagination regarding lyrics. I just like the way you put things. It challenges me to be a better writer. This one is no exception!

Thanks for sharing this one.

Steve
Posted By: rsdean Re: Gone Like April Showers - 03/06/14 01:51 AM
Steve,

That is so kind of you. It means a lot - very appreciated.

Bob
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