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Posted By: Rob4580 You dont like me - 01/16/15 06:25 PM
Hey all.
This is a compilation of bad relation ships I've had and seen.

May be you'll find your self in this song.

Once again I apologies for the lack of info as my old hard drive gave up the ghost.

The intro fill outro and vocals are my self.
Made with BB and edited in Reaper


https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob/you-dont-like-me

Well you don't like me till I'm gone.
All my ambitions going wrong.

I come second last in the human race.
I gotta move on and get out this place.

Well you don't seem to like me till I'm gone.


Well I'm always running second best.
I'm standing miles behind the rest.

Talk to me like I've never been.
You much rather me far off this scene.

Well you don't seem to like me till I'm gone.


Chorus
Well you don't see or like the things I do.
Well you don't want to help me make it through.

Fill

Well your always saying to go home.
Though this the only place I've ever known.

You smile at me when there's others there.
And when their gone well you just don't care.

Well you don't seem to like me till I'm gone.

Well you use your toung like a sword.
It unfolds the three fold chord.

The best advice I can give to you.
Is do unto others as they do to you.

Well you don't seem to like me till I'm gone.

Chorus
Well you don't see or like the things I do.
Well you don't want to help me make it through.

Well you don't like me till I'm gone.
All my ambitions going wrong.

I come second last in the human race.
I gotta move on and get out this place.

Well you don't seem to like me till I'm gone.
Well you don't seem to like me till I'm gone.
Well you don't seem to like me till I'm gone.

Posted By: dani48 Re: You dont like me - 01/16/15 07:32 PM
Hey Rob !:))

This was really a nicely
produced tune ! Especially I liked
the vocal harmonies, there was
nothing wrong with your guitar
parts either !:)))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: You dont like me - 01/16/15 08:27 PM
Lot to like here. Good performance with the guitar, lead vocal and harmonies. Waiting on the sequel to this, "You want me back"

Charlie
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: You dont like me - 01/16/15 10:35 PM
Hey Dani48.
Thanks for your comment.
Love your ID pic.

Rob
Posted By: Pat Marr Re: You dont like me - 01/16/15 11:51 PM
I suggest calling your band the "STROLLING GROANS" wink

That was fun...

Good selection and use of real tracks, I thought you did a good job of creating an effective mood to match the sentiment of the song.. kind of a tongue in cheek lament.

I was afraid it would be a "heart on your sleeve" kind of song, but it wasn't that at all.. it was very smart and well delivered.

Good job! You must feel pretty good about that one!
Posted By: Scott C Re: You dont like me - 01/17/15 12:27 PM
Excellent tune. Well done
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: You dont like me - 01/17/15 06:17 PM
Originally Posted By: Pat Marr
I suggest calling your band the "STROLLING GROANS" wink


I like it, think I'm getting to that groaning age anyway.
Thanks for your comments Pat.

Rob
Posted By: MarioD Re: You dont like me - 01/17/15 07:18 PM
I liked everything about this one!

You did a fantastic job on the mix. You vocals were superb and your lyrics were outstanding. Did I hear a touch of the Beatles in the chorus? Great job on that!

Super job on this one!
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: You dont like me - 01/17/15 07:57 PM
Thanks MarioD.
I'm flattered that you compare the chorus to the Beatles as I am heavily influenced by them.

Regards Rob
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: You dont like me - 01/17/15 08:33 PM
Cool tune!! I enjoyed the sentiment. Music and lyric worked for me. Sometimes we all feel that way. Thanks for posting! Take care. Greg
Posted By: AudioTrack Re: You dont like me - 01/17/15 08:34 PM
Pretty good Rob, like the harmonies and the lyrics are well thought out. Real Tracks work well.
Trev
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: You dont like me - 01/20/15 10:57 AM
Thank you Greg.
Rob
Posted By: dcuny Re: You dont like me - 01/20/15 05:18 PM
I like it! laugh
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: You dont like me - 01/22/15 12:34 PM
Thank you again David.
Rob.
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