A little while ago I was suffering from depression.
While I was trying to get back on top of things a well meaning friend kept dropping by.

Unfortunately having no understanding of mental illness he only made matters worse.
Arriving on my door step seven days in a row.

I didn't want to offend him so I tolerated his visits.
May sound a little selfish on my part but if you have
ever experienced this illness you will know what I am talking about.

Any way I wrote this song as a form of therapy.
By the way the gentleman referred to is still my good friend.

https://soundcloud.com/ironbarkbob/your-coming-round

Your coming round

You keep coming to my door and Im not even dressed.
Your conversation disturbs my mind and I havnt had breakfast.

Your coming round Yes your surely coming round.
I steel my mind and take some pills cos I heard that your coming round.

Youl be here wasting time as the clock ticks by.
Contradictions cloud my head makes me wanna sigh.

Your coming round Yes your surely coming round.
I can feel it in my bones.

If you keep on coming round Im up and gonaa sell my family home.

Chorus

I just want to run away and find some distant place to hide.
When I think of where to go this country doesnt seem so wide.

Fill


Chorus

I just want to run away and find some distant place to hide.
When I think of where to go this country doesnt seem so wide.

Put a notice on the door where under quarantine.
Drastic measures it must sound and a little mean.

Your coming round Yes your surely coming round.
And you say you are amune.

I gonna join the space program and take my whole famil to the moon.


You keep coming to my door and Im not even dressed.
Your conversation disturbs my mind and I havnt had breakfast.

Your coming round oh no your coming round.
I steel my mind and take some pills cos I heard that your coming round.
I steel my mind and take some pills cos I heard that your coming round.
I steel my mind and take some pills cos I heard that your coming round.

Voiceover intro vocals fill and harmonies my self. Voice over my daughter.
Written in BB edited with reaper

Excellent tune. Real life lyrics. Awesome to be able to craft songs lyrics from life events. A talent that escapes me totally. Well done..

Thank you Scott.
Rob

I completely read it as a personification of illness as the visitor.

It's brilliant on that level weather you wrote it that way consciously on unconsciously.

and love the intro with the voice over too

much enjoyed!


Would like to know the BIAB instruments that you used.

Sorry gruverider my exsternal hardive crashed and Im unable to open the original files.
Rob

Hi Rob,

We think this is very well done, especially the backing vocals. Did you record them yourself?
The song has got a nice groove.

Rob and Anne-Marie

HI guys, yes I do all my own backing.
Thank you for your interest.
Rob

Nice job on writing and performance. I enjoy your contributions to the forum.


Charlie

Very cool song!! Interesting writing, very natural delivery, and another excellent vocal. Since that gent is still your friend, I'm assuming he hasn't heard the song. Probably better to keep it that way. Great stuff!! Take care. Greg

Clever write, nice mix, well sung. Fun listen.

Hi Greg thats exactly how I felt after writing the material.
Thanks for your comments.
Rob