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Posted By: rsdean Letter To John - 08/21/16 04:30 PM
Hi All,

Here's a song I've been meaning to put together for some time…

This is called Letter To John.

All BIAB RTs:
Style: DNCFOLK.STY
2474: Bass, Acoustic, Held Ev 085
2494: Piano, Acoustic, HeldChords 120
1683: Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm Pop Promise Ev16 100
525: Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 190
2444: Soloist, Guitar, Baritone Electric
Drums: PopModernGrooveSync16

Thanks for listening! smile

Bob
Posted By: David Snyder Re: Letter To John - 08/21/16 08:30 PM
"Letter to John
There’s movement along the fault-line
A ghost is holding up a stop sign
Guess it’s borrowed time by the by"

Bob, oh Bob. You did it again man!! Awesome! Totally you, and great lyrics.

You have an album almost I think. All these songs form a whole. They have a thru-line. I think you are about ready for a release.

Posted By: Robertkc Re: Letter To John - 08/21/16 09:06 PM
Bob

An inspired idea for the song - wouldn`t we all like to know how he`d see the world now!
The production is excellent - I like the rhythmic but relaxed feel of the backing and the conversational tone of the lyrics.
Another keeper!

Robert
Posted By: PaddyG Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 06:02 AM




Bob

This song had me completely mesmerized, that off beat drumming and tremolo on the guitar, especially that deep boss sound all wrapping around solid hard storyline,,, Excellent

Paddy G
Posted By: PeterF Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 06:17 AM
Bob
Great song - a very interesting structure with a arresting clever lyric.
Truly well done.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 06:56 AM
David,

Thanks so much. I've actually been releasing some 4-song EPs. I find it much easier and quicker than doing full albums.

As always, looking forward to your next song. smile

Bob
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 08:23 AM
This is such a good listen. A lot of things going on and some of your best lyrics I think.

Enjoyed this.


Charlie
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 11:57 AM
Robert,

Much appreciated - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: ROG Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 12:50 PM
Hi Bob.

A bit of Dylan, a bit of Lou Reed, a lot of your own magic.

A very infectious backing with your usual interesting lyrics and super vocal delivery.

Super.

ROG.
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 03:38 PM
Originally Posted By: David Snyder
"Letter to John
There’s movement along the fault-line
A ghost is holding up a stop sign
Guess it’s borrowed time by the by"

Bob, oh Bob. You did it again man!! Awesome! Totally you, and great lyrics.

You have an album almost I think. All these songs form a whole. They have a thru-line. I think you are about ready for a release.



I agree with David. This is vintage RSDean!! Love the vibe. Really creative idea the way you use the first line as a hook to start each verse-never seen that before. Love the tremolo guitar-perfect for this tune! Another really cool song!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 06:34 PM
Originally Posted By: Robertkc
Bob

An inspired idea for the song - wouldn`t we all like to know how he`d see the world now!
The production is excellent - I like the rhythmic but relaxed feel of the backing and the conversational tone of the lyrics.
Another keeper!

Robert


This says almost word for word what I felt.

Kenny
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 06:44 PM
Cool write, Bob.

Terrific production. You keep coming up with new band combinations that work perfectly for your lyric and style...this is yet, another...

Enjoyed it.

floyd
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 07:17 PM
Paddy,

Thanks so much!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 08:39 PM
Thanks Peter!

Bob
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Letter To John - 08/22/16 09:16 PM
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Cool write, Bob.

Terrific production. You keep coming up with new band combinations that work perfectly for your lyric and style...this is yet, another...

Enjoyed it.

floyd


Bob,

I agree with floyd. You're developing quite a flair for getting the best out of BIAB and accompaniments that complement your style perfectly. I liked this a lot.

Regards,
Noel
Posted By: animarorecords Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 04:41 AM
Hello, Bob

The tremolo guitar sounds that reminds 60's British Rock are nostalgic and very effective on this tune.
Very enjoyable listen.

Best Regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 06:34 AM
Thanks very much Charlie.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 06:39 AM
ROG,

Much appreciated - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 06:41 AM
Greg,

Thank you. The baritone guitar RT has some really great sounds - all I did here was just tweak it a bit.

Bob
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 11:29 AM
"Letter to John
Music still begins and ends with rhyme
A digital wave came down the coastline
Nobody told me but we’re still getting by"

We don't use the word much but....AWESOME!

Concise and to the point. Nothing to add and nothing to take away.

You have an amazing feel for what can be done with BiaB to support
your writes and vocals.

It sounds tremendous on the monitors and, man, we enjoyed it!

J&B
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 12:55 PM
Thanks Kenny!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 12:56 PM
Floyd,

I appreciate that - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: gibson Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 01:50 PM
Bob,

I do like the tremelo guitar.
You have a style that is always a treat to listen to.
Really enjoyed that

Alyn
Posted By: Sundance Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 02:43 PM
What a cool song Bob. Terrific feel - love that arrangement!
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 06:39 PM
Noel,

Thanks for listening and the kind words.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 06:40 PM
Shigeki, thanks very much!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/23/16 06:41 PM
Janice & Bud,

Thanks - I really appreciate the kind review. smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/24/16 10:56 AM
Alyn, much appreciated - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/24/16 07:54 PM
Hey Josie,

Thanks so much. smile

Bob
Posted By: tommyad Re: Letter To John - 08/27/16 10:09 AM
Bob, As always I'm in awe of your lyric writing. Your band tracks keep getting better and better. Excellent job. Tom ( Sorry I meant to comment on this song instead of posting two comments on Chelsea Girl.)
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/29/16 09:56 AM
Tom,

I really appreciate that kind review - thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: Sergio Guarneri Re: Letter To John - 08/29/16 07:11 PM


Nice song, with great real tracks.
Excellent lyrics and melody.

Sergio
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/30/16 06:31 AM
Thanks Sergio!

Bob
Posted By: Scott C Re: Letter To John - 08/30/16 11:55 PM
Very cool lyric Bob. Excellent vocal and guitar
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/31/16 07:36 AM
Scott,

Much appreciated! Thanks.

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Letter To John - 08/31/16 09:30 AM
Love this one Robert. Folk rock at it's bset!



Regards,

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/31/16 12:43 PM
Bob,

Appreciate the listen and kind comments. Thanks!

Bob
Posted By: RnAM Re: Letter To John - 08/31/16 02:04 PM
Cool song Bob!
Very good lyrics and we love the baritone.

Rob and Anne-Marie
Posted By: Alyssa - PG Music Re: Letter To John - 08/31/16 04:15 PM
Great submission Bob!
LOVE the original hook idea. Those electric baritone guitar accents give the song a vintage feel-good vibe.

Thanks so much for sharing smile
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/31/16 07:34 PM
Rob and Anne-Marie,

Thanks very much!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Letter To John - 08/31/16 10:16 PM
Alyssa,

That is very appreciated - thanks.

Bob
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