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Posted By: 90 dB Jesse's Gone Away - 06/09/17 07:04 PM
A song about liberation.



https://soundcloud.com/90-db/jesses-gone-away


https://90dbband.bandcamp.com/track/jesses-gone-away



Jesse's Gone Away

©2008 Robert Randall Burke


Sunday morning
She's all alone
Never called
And he never came home
Guess the honeymoon is over
Like they say.

Friends told her
He would never change
All this time
And it's still the same
Now all she wants to do is get away.

Jesse isn't gonna cry no more
Jesse's headin' out that old front door
Jesse's startin' on a whole new life today
When he asks you where she's gone
When he finds that he's all alone
Just tell him
Jesse's gone away.

Jesse's always been a small town girl
Now she's headin' out to see the world
Never liked this small town anyway
There's a better life out there somewhere
This old Chevy's gonna take her there
Left a note sayin “Jesse's gone away”.

Jesse isn't gonna cry no more
Jesse's headin' out that old front door
Jesse's startin' on a whole new life today
When he asks you where she's gone
When he finds that he's all alone
Just tell him
Jesse's gone away.

Tell him there ain't nothin' more to say
But Jesse's Gone Away.



Thanks for listening.



Regards,

Bob
Posted By: ROG Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/09/17 07:15 PM
Beautiful song, Bob.

A heart-rending tale, but with a message of hope. A classic piece of writing.

Every bit as polished and professional as ever, with your signature vocal delivery.

Loved the whole thing.

Cheers, ROG.
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/09/17 08:09 PM
Bob,

As is so often the case (with your songs)... this is a "beautiful write". No wasted words, everything in the right place... moving in the right directions at all times...

"Jesse's always been a small town girl
Now she's headin' out to see the world
Never liked this small town anyway
There's a better life out there somewhere
This old Chevy's gonna take her there
Left a note sayin “Jesse's gone away”.

Jesse isn't gonna cry no more
Jesse's headin' out that old front door
Jesse's startin' on a whole new life today
When he asks you where she's gone
When he finds that he's all alone
Just tell him
Jesse's gone away."



GOOSEBUMPS.



Damn! This is good.


Who cares if the production is good (It's perfect). It's such a dang fine write - what else matters...


Ah.


GOOSEBUMPS.



fj
Posted By: Al-David Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/09/17 08:45 PM
HI Bob,

Fabulous song. Definitely my fave from you in quite some time. Your vocal is exquisite and the song is a great vehicle for it. An economy of words and a surplus of story. A tip of the hat to you.

Alan & Di
Posted By: lambada Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/09/17 09:04 PM
I enjoyed this. Nice catchy chorus.
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/10/17 03:26 PM
Really nice one Bob!! Very well crafted song. Arrangement is perfect for the song, and you vocal is beautiful (a bit of Gordon Lightfoot)! Love it!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/10/17 03:44 PM
Fantastic song, 90 dB! I have a feeling this one's going to be stuck in my head for a while. The vocal delivery, the subject matter, the production - all on point! You should be very proud of this one.
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/11/17 10:01 AM
ROG,

Thanks for the kind comments. Appreciate the listen.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: tommyad Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/11/17 01:01 PM
Bob, Great chord changes in the chorus. Beautifully written and presented. Loved it! Tom
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/11/17 02:23 PM
love the music and chord changes in this

very nice melody, great write

love your vocal in this too!

Kenny
Posted By: rsdean Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/11/17 02:49 PM
Bob,

Absolutely beautiful... Outstanding vocal and mix. So well done.

Bob
Posted By: Brian Cadoret Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/11/17 05:47 PM
Really nice words Bob I'm sure many people out there can relate to it, great chord change (B7)? coming into the chorus.

Brian
Posted By: RnAM Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/12/17 08:50 AM
Beautiful song Robert!

Rob
Posted By: Scott C Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/12/17 11:50 AM
Very cool tune Bob. Super vocal and lyric. Excellent hook to the chorus. Have it playing in my head now. :-)
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/13/17 08:04 AM
Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Really nice one Bob!! Very well crafted song. Arrangement is perfect for the song, and you vocal is beautiful (a bit of Gordon Lightfoot)! Love it!! Take care. Greg



Greg says it perfectly.....

This is such a well crafted song because you are a true craftsman.

Charlie
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/13/17 08:17 PM
fj,

Thanks for the kind words. Appreciate it.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/13/17 08:33 PM
Alan & Di,


Appreciate the kind words.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/13/17 08:35 PM
lambada,


Thanks.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: HearToLearn Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/13/17 09:21 PM
I have to tell you that when I see you post a song, I ALWAYS listen to it. It's strange how I have an expectation for your music, and yet await the surprise. You somehow manage to set a high standard in my mind, and have the ability to both keep that standard AND take it in a different way then I expect. I like that.

Lyrically, this is a song you can get lost in. NOT lost, just a sit back and drink it in. Your production, which is so clean, creates the environment for all the rest to sit in.

Another great share. Thanks!
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/15/17 12:04 AM
Greg,

Thanks for the kind comments.


Regards,


Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/15/17 12:06 AM
Deryk,


Appreciate the listen.

Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/15/17 12:08 AM
Tommy,


Thanks. Lovin' your stuff lately!


Regards,


Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/16/17 11:04 AM
Kenny,


Thanks for the kind words.


Regards,


Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/16/17 11:05 AM
Bob,


Appreciate the listen.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/17/17 09:08 AM
Brian,

Thanks. Appreciate the listen.


Regards,


Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/17/17 09:09 AM
Rob,

Thanks for the listen.


Regards,


Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/17/17 09:10 AM
Scott,

Thanks for the listen.


Regards,


Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/17/17 09:12 AM
Charlie,


Appreciate the kind words.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/17/17 09:13 AM
Caaron,

Thank you for the kind words.


Regards,


Bob
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/18/17 05:46 PM
Janice's first comment was that your song sounded like something Glen Frey would have sung - both the performance and the write.

The melody is lovely and well delivers the sad story without being overwrought.

Janice also said to mention the exceptional vocal and the steel.

Bud agrees with her smile

And the production is very strong.

As they say across the pond, brilliant,

J&B
Posted By: Sergio Guarneri Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/20/17 06:06 PM


Beautiful as usual
Sergio
Posted By: Steve Young Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/21/17 12:05 AM
Very nice, Bob! I always enjoy your vocals, and this is no exception. Very good write. Sounds like something Glen Campbell would have done. Really like it!

Steve
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/23/17 09:49 AM
Bud,


Thanks for the kind words.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/23/17 09:50 AM
Sergio,


Thanks for listening.


Regards,


Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/23/17 09:51 AM
Steve,

Thanks for stopping by.


Regards,


Bob
Posted By: Pat Marr Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/24/17 06:09 PM
Hey Bob,

I agree with what everybody is saying... mighty fine song you've written and performed here!

Your voice is just phenomenal too... it fits the songs you write so well. There is a "just enough" quality to this song... the background instruments are clear but not overpowering, and they work together to support the vocals as close as anything could come to being perfect.
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/25/17 03:33 PM
Bob, you've done a great job with this song. Such a great clean sound and full of feeling. Vocal is great! Thanks, Torrey
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/26/17 09:42 AM
Originally Posted By: Pat Marr
Hey Bob,

I agree with what everybody is saying... mighty fine song you've written and performed here!

Your voice is just phenomenal too... it fits the songs you write so well. There is a "just enough" quality to this song... the background instruments are clear but not overpowering, and they work together to support the vocals as close as anything could come to being perfect.



Pat,

Thanks for the kind words. Appreciate it.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/26/17 11:18 AM
Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Bob, you've done a great job with this song. Such a great clean sound and full of feeling. Vocal is great! Thanks, Torrey




Torrey,


Thanks for listening. Appreciate it.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/26/17 01:03 PM
Edit:

Original sound link broken. Actual link:

https://soundcloud.com/90-db/jesses-gone-away-1


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: dcuny Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/27/17 12:22 AM
I'll just agree with all the superlatives that have already been said.

This perfectly captures the feel of some of those great 70s songs.
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 06/29/17 12:36 AM
David,


Thanks for the kind words.

Regards,

Bob
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 07/17/17 09:07 AM
Bob,

What a wonderful listen! Like floyd.... GOOSEBUMPS.

You've put together a highly polished arrangement that sparkles. As others have noted, the chord changes are excellent. And your singing is superb. On top of this, everything sits snugly within an incredibly clean sound. I would love to be able to write and produce songs like this! You've definitely got the knack for creating quality.

All the best,
Noel
Posted By: lambada Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 07/17/17 11:11 AM
What a great song. Nice production too.
Posted By: Ember - PG Music Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 07/17/17 12:54 PM
I love, love, love the sound of your voice. It's so easy to listen to and sounds really smooth. I could easily see myself putting this song on my iPod and walking around town listening to it.

The soundcloud link no longer seems to work, but luckily the second one did!
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 07/18/17 10:26 AM
Originally Posted By: Noel96
Bob,

What a wonderful listen! Like floyd.... GOOSEBUMPS.

You've put together a highly polished arrangement that sparkles. As others have noted, the chord changes are excellent. And your singing is superb. On top of this, everything sits snugly within an incredibly clean sound. I would love to be able to write and produce songs like this! You've definitely got the knack for creating quality.

All the best,
Noel



Noel,

Thanks for the kind words. That whole song began with an up-sweep on my guitar (you can hear it throughout the song). Took a long time before I had a version I was happy with.

I finally just gave up. grin


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 07/19/17 10:18 AM
Originally Posted By: lambada
What a great song. Nice production too.




lambada,

Thanks for the listen.


Regards,


Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 07/19/17 10:19 AM
Originally Posted By: Ember - PG Music
I love, love, love the sound of your voice. It's so easy to listen to and sounds really smooth. I could easily see myself putting this song on my iPod and walking around town listening to it.

The soundcloud link no longer seems to work, but luckily the second one did!




Ember,

Thanks for the kind words.


Regards,



Bob
Posted By: David Snyder Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 07/19/17 12:29 PM

Sounds great Bob.

Hope you are feeling better!
Posted By: Paul Haynes Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 07/19/17 02:47 PM
I like the clear and pro sounding vocals.
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 07/20/17 10:07 AM
Originally Posted By: David Snyder

Sounds great Bob.

Hope you are feeling better!




David,


Thanks.


Regards,

Bob
Posted By: 90 dB Re: Jesse's Gone Away - 07/21/17 10:28 AM
Originally Posted By: Paul Haynes
I like the clear and pro sounding vocals.




Paul,


Thanks for the listen.


Regards,


Bob
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