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Posted By: Torrey Bliss APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/25/17 02:04 AM
https://youtu.be/5wDDRT2vEFU
https://soundcloud.com/torrey-bliss/apple-of-gods-eye

For this track I used several realtracks to get the feel I needed. This is a song of encouragement for someone who has placed very little value on their self worth. I hope it is an encouragement to someone! Lyrics are in the YouTube video. Thanks for listening, Torrey.

BIAB
Bass 683 Electric Pop Half Notes Push EV 120
Organ 686 B3 Background Pop Ev 120
Drums Praise/Worship Shine
Acoustic Guitar 405 Strumming Ev 120
Electric Guitar 798 Rhythm Southern Snappy Clean Ev 90
Electric Guitar 1030 12String Electric Fingerpicking Ev 120

Me
Vocals
12 String Electric Guitar
Carvin Electric Guitar
Percussion
Synth's
Posted By: Al-David Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/25/17 05:32 AM
Hi Torrey,

Another excellent production from you. There's a lot going on here but it all fits in perfectly. Good message! Your technical skills equal your performance skills. That's a great combination. Super classy all the way.

I saw you mentioned you used a Carvin electric guitar for one of your personal tracks. You may recall when I PMs you about my friend, Buddy Keele who lives in your home town. Buddy is his nickname but his real first name is Carvin ... and yes, his father named him after the Carvin Music Company. I thought that was pretty cool to see you mention that as I thought about my friend.

Again, super job on this. loved the video, too! Wishing you the very best,

Alan & Di
Posted By: Scott C Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/25/17 09:41 AM
You have another very cool tune Torrey. Love the effects you used with your voice. Gave it a Dire Straits vibe for me. Super vocal and guitar was excellent...
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/25/17 04:35 PM
Thanks for the kind words Al & Di. I appreciate it! T
Posted By: David Snyder Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/25/17 05:35 PM

Torrey,

That was awesome man!!! Great song!

Production question: how did you get that full on Tom Sholz Boston guitar sound? That was killer!! What effects did you use??
Posted By: floyd jane Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/25/17 06:05 PM
Torrey,

This is terrific music. A solid write. Extraordinary melody! So "musical". Really enjoyed the listen.

Super arrangement and production. As David said it has a "Boston feel" to it - really well done.

There are a few places where the vocal gets "swamped" by the instrument tracks. Might just need the vocal to be raised a bit at that point. Otherwise, this is extraordinary. Really enjoyed it - an excellent listen...

fj
Posted By: 44kfl Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/25/17 07:23 PM
So when did Tom Sholz record with George Harrison?

This sounds like a beautiful Harrison song

This is a beautiful Torrey Bliss song

great uplifting message, warms my heart

just to hear this genuine caring for others

thanks for sharing

Kenny
Posted By: Steve Young Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/25/17 09:46 PM
Torrey,

Really good song here. Good message. Well produced. Keep em coming!

Steve
Posted By: PeterF Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/26/17 06:01 AM
Torrey

Really nice progression - great production - loved the guitar on "Your Valley" section and really pretty solo. An excellent song.

Peter
Posted By: rsdean Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/26/17 06:22 AM
Torrey,

Great song - really enjoyed your vocal on this one. Excellent mix as well.

Bob
Posted By: RnAM Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/26/17 09:10 AM
gospel rock, or pop?
Well, you sure make it sound like a pro.
Very nice chord progression, and cool vocals as always.
In the mid-regions your voice often reminds me of one of the singers of Toto.
should be a compliment I think ;-)

Rob
Posted By: F.M.M. Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/26/17 09:52 PM
hi torrey very engaging vocal excellent great write mix everything perfect thanks for sharing eric
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/26/17 10:15 PM
Scott, thanks for taking time to listen and comment. I appreciate it. T
Posted By: Pat Marr Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/26/17 11:24 PM
Wow, Torrey, that was quite impressive! All of the personal touches you added really work together to give the song a cohesiveness that I don't hear in every song!

Regarding the guitar harmonies... did you play the parts separately? Or did you use a harmonizer? I'm impressed either way, because in my opinion it's not easy to get good-sounding auto harmony. But on listening again, I'm guessing you played both parts because the two notes don't always go in the same direction as a scalic harmony tends to do.

Parts of the song reminded me of George Harrison's style.

I'm always happy to see songs of faith, and to see people using their talent as a ministry. Good job, and I look forward to hearing more from you!
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/27/17 06:12 AM
Thanks for the comment David! For the solo guitar parts I played twin leads and double tracked the primary line with about a 10 millisecond delay on it.
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/27/17 10:05 AM
We like what Kenny and Pat mentioned...George Harrison.

The lyric is of course spiritual but that element of
spirituality carries through with your vocal and in
our opinion Harrison was a master of that.

The guitar and vocal effects were, well, effective smile
Love those soaring guitar licks.

Pat used the word "cohesive" and that's a good choice
for describing the production. Everything fits so nicely.

Excellent list and watch!

J&B

Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/27/17 08:11 PM
Thanks Floyd for listening and giving welcome advice. Actually I had already noticed that some of the lines were covered up a little with everything else going on in the song and I have put a revised mix up (same link) on Soundcloud. Your advise is always welcome here!! Thanks again, T
Posted By: Froi Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/28/17 04:42 AM
Wow!!! This is a great song! I love the message, the tune and the voice. I don't know if it's just me but it has this George Harrison type of feeling and I like it.

Is it okay to use your song in our church related activity?

Thanks!
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/28/17 04:22 PM
What a tune, Torrey! Really enjoying the twin guitars, and the mix is superb. Not to mention the vocal delivery is absolutely on point! A very engaging listen indeed - thanks so much for sharing smile
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/28/17 07:56 PM
Thanks Kenny for those kind words! I'll take a George Harrison comparison any day! He was /is one of my all time favorites.
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/28/17 08:09 PM
Thanks Froi for your kind words! I appreciate it! As for the song you can certainly play/sing it in your local church. Hopefully it will be a blessing to someone. Thanks,T
Posted By: Froi Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/28/17 08:57 PM
Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Thanks Froi for your kind words! I appreciate it! As for the song you can certainly play/sing it in your local church. Hopefully it will be a blessing to someone. Thanks,T


Thanks a lot, Torrey!
Posted By: Hugh2 Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/28/17 09:06 PM
Hi Torrey
Thats really great and upbeat ,super production.
Could I ask if you dont mind ,Did you come up with the lyrics first or the music?and did you find any particular difficulties that needed work?
Love it,
Hugh
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/29/17 05:09 AM
Thanks Steve for listening and commenting. I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/29/17 10:18 PM
Peter, thanks for taking time to listen and comment on my song! I truly appreciate it! T
Posted By: animarorecords Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 06/29/17 11:18 PM
Hello, Torrey

Very pop tune as always!
I like the chord progression to go back and forth between C major and A major.
Guitar tone is very fitted to this tune.
Your vocal performance is also splendid.
Very enjoyable listen.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/01/17 12:03 AM
Thanks for listening Bob! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/01/17 07:45 PM
Thanks Rob for your comments! They mean a lot to me! T
Posted By: Biglad Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/02/17 09:16 AM
Great write torrey ,to me sounds like a mix of ELO and George Harrison .brilliantly put together and strong melody
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/02/17 04:24 PM
Eric, thanks for listening and commenting on my song! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/03/17 07:37 PM
Thanks Pat for listening and commenting! As for the harmony parts on guitar, I did play separate lines. This always takes some time for me figuring out how certain harmony notes blend well with the chords played behind these parts. Torrey
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/04/17 07:02 PM
Thanks, J&B for listening and commenting! Appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/04/17 07:03 PM
Thanks, Deryk!
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/04/17 07:10 PM
Thanks Hugh! This is a song I've had in mind for a long time and honestly can't remember if the lyrics or chord/melody came first on this one! The main difficulty for me on this one was working with the 12 string electric guitar realtrack (getting it to fit with the rest of the mix without off color notes popping up. I panned that track to one side and panned my 12 string electric I played to the other. Thanks, T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/04/17 07:13 PM
Thanks for listening Shigeki! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/04/17 07:14 PM
Thanks for listening and commenting Biglad! Appreciate it! T
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/08/17 11:52 PM
GREAT STUFF!! I hear so many elements that I love here- Harrison, Toto, Ambrosia! It's like a mix of all my favorite sounds! Wonderful!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: Sundance Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/09/17 11:14 AM
Wonderful song and sounds Torrey!
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/09/17 09:14 PM
Thanks for stopping by and listening/commenting Greg! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: MarioD Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/09/17 09:54 PM
I almost missed this one. Everything that I wanted to say already has been said. Great backing tracks, super lead guitar work, outstanding vocals and lyrics all perfectly mixed.

Two thumbs up!
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/10/17 09:25 PM
Thanks Sundance for those kind words! Appreciate it! T
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/11/17 07:14 PM
Thanks Mario for your comments! I appreciate it! T
Posted By: Noel96 Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/29/17 03:40 AM
Torrey,

Your arrangement and production chops are outstanding. Everything you do sounds really excellent to me.

As the others above me have indicated, this is a really worthy listen and a huge testament to your music making ability.

All the best,
Noel
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: APPLE OF GOD'S EYE - 07/29/17 09:00 PM
Noel, thanks for those kind words! They are very much appreciated! T
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