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Posted By: Rob4580 *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/18/17 06:42 PM

Co wrote this a little while back with a friend Darren Harrold.
All Band in a Box except the vocals of course.

All comments welcome.
Spare Change For Coffee
Posted By: Ember - PG Music Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/18/17 06:45 PM
Hello Rob,

Fantastic song as always. I wish the lyrics had been posted up so that I could read them along with the song, but luckily the vocals were clear enough that I could still hear them.

Thanks for the share!
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/18/17 06:49 PM
Hi Ember. I will post the lyrics. Sorry bout that smile
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/18/17 07:20 PM
Spare Change for Coffee Lyrics

It’s a Sunday morning I’m feeling dead.
Maybe I should just stay in bed.
I fumble with my clothes and I stumble cross the room.
Into the kitchen I’ve got no food.
I look everywhere but it wrecks my mood.
And there’s no kind of coffee to be brewed.

Chorus
I got spare change for coffee or maybe a slice of cake.
Some spare change for coffee and that will be my fate.
Bridge
Chorus
But I got spare change for coffee or maybe a slice of cake.
Some spare change for coffee and that will be my fate.

My heads kinda cloudy I’m also lost.
Bills piling up in the letter box.
I look down the road and the bus is running late.
Leave me more time to contemplate.
Why I didn’t stay in bed more late.
Fed-up facing all the pressures that I dread.

Chorus
But I got I got spare change for coffee or maybe some ice-cream cake.
Some spare change for coffee and that will be my fate.
But I got some spare change for coffee or maybe some Madeira cake.
Some spare change for coffee and that will be my fate.
I got some spare change for coffee or maybe some Madeira cake.
Some spare change for coffee and that will be my fate.
I got spare change for coffee or maybe some chocolate cake.
Some spare change for coffee and that will be my fate.
Posted By: beatmaster Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/18/17 07:41 PM
Sounds really good with brilliant lyrics and vocals.

You should do some serious mixing with this as it is a hit.

Vocals are far too loud and the instruments track too clinical should have some space, ambience , because if it was good enough to write then its good enough to produce, would look forward to hearing this with a bit more work on it.


just my critique . best
Posted By: Scott C Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/19/17 10:25 AM
Cool tune Rob. Guitar was excellent. Cool mix.
Posted By: ROG Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/19/17 10:56 AM
Hi Rob.

I've just realised that I'm gonna be singing that chorus for the rest of the day!

And that says it all, really.

Fabulous.

ROG.
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/19/17 12:19 PM
Infectious that one is...really sticks with you.

Cool lyric, vocal performance and production.

Kudos!

J&B
Posted By: floyd jane Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/19/17 05:21 PM
You did a good job on that, Rob. Having the bass carry the load worked really well. Nice technique - haven't heard anyone do that before.
Posted By: David Snyder Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/19/17 06:53 PM

Cool song man!
Posted By: Robertkc Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/19/17 09:03 PM
Rob,
Love the bass line and the infectious chorus- cool collaboration.
Some funny images in the video too.
I enjoyed that pick me up!

Robert
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/20/17 02:16 AM
Originally Posted By: beatmaster
Sounds really good with brilliant lyrics and vocals.

You should do some serious mixing with this as it is a hit.

Vocals are far too loud and the instruments track too clinical should have some space, ambience , because if it was good enough to write then its good enough to produce, would look forward to hearing this with a bit more work on it.


just my critique . best

Hello Beatmaster. Thanks for the advice.
Rob.
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/20/17 02:17 AM
Originally Posted By: Scott C
Cool tune Rob. Guitar was excellent. Cool mix.


Thank you Scott. Rob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/20/17 02:18 AM
Originally Posted By: ROG
Hi Rob.

I've just realised that I'm gonna be singing that chorus for the rest of the day!

And that says it all, really.

Fabulous.

ROG.


Hey Rog. Thanks for the great comment. Rob
Posted By: RichMac Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/20/17 03:51 AM
Enjoyed it all.
Really good fun.
Like the video of the guitar playing in particular.
Thumbs up.
Cheers.
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/20/17 08:24 AM
Drinking coffee as this plays through. Great wake up song. Nicely done.

Charlie
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/20/17 12:40 PM
What a tune, Rob! You nailed this one - it is the perfect level of catchy here, and I found the arrangement on this tune to sound professional and well thought out. It reminds me of Asleep At The Wheel a little bit, but of course with your own touch.

Great work, and thanks so much for sharing smile
Posted By: Al-David Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/20/17 01:38 PM
Hi Rob and Harrold,

Great song. The vocals and backing tracks are terrific. I don't drink coffee (almost 71 years old and perhaps 10 cups of coffee in my life), but an ice cold Dr pepper would work instead. A real catchy song that stays with the listener. That's a good thing! Enjoyed this s a bunch - you have a great song and a great delivery of it.

Best to you,

Alan
Posted By: 44kfl Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/21/17 05:21 PM
A lot of output lately

and a higher register of vocals

catchy hook and a driving beat with the thumping bass

enjoyed the listen

Kenny
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/21/17 11:41 PM
Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Infectious that one is...really sticks with you.

Cool lyric, vocal performance and production.

Kudos!

J&B





Hello J&B appreciate your kind comment.
Rob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/21/17 11:42 PM
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
You did a good job on that, Rob. Having the bass carry the load worked really well. Nice technique - haven't heard anyone do that before.


Hi Floyd. Thank you. Rob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/21/17 11:43 PM
Originally Posted By: David Snyder

Cool song man!


Thank you David. Rob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/21/17 11:44 PM
Originally Posted By: Robertkc
Rob,
Love the bass line and the infectious chorus- cool collaboration.
Some funny images in the video too.
I enjoyed that pick me up!

Robert


Hi Robert. Glad you liked the video.
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/22/17 06:56 PM
Originally Posted By: RichMac
Enjoyed it all.
Really good fun.
Like the video of the guitar playing in particular.
Thumbs up.
Cheers.

\
Hi Rich. Thanks for looking mate. Rob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/22/17 06:56 PM
Originally Posted By: Charlie Fogle
Drinking coffee as this plays through. Great wake up song. Nicely done.

Charlie


Thank you Charlie. Rob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/22/17 06:58 PM
Originally Posted By: Deryk - PG Music
What a tune, Rob! You nailed this one - it is the perfect level of catchy here, and I found the arrangement on this tune to sound professional and well thought out. It reminds me of Asleep At The Wheel a little bit, but of course with your own touch.

Great work, and thanks so much for sharing smile


Hi Deryk. Thanks for the great complement. Regards Rob
Posted By: PeterF Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/23/17 03:54 AM
Rob

Nice catchy song and like floyd I'm impressed with the bass arrangement.

Peter
Posted By: Joe -PG Music Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/23/17 08:08 PM
Hi Rob4580, Thanks for sharing this with us! Really dig the guitar solo and the vocals. Excellent use of reverbs on the voice too. Well done! smile
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/23/17 10:01 PM
Originally Posted By: Al-David
Hi Rob and Harrold,

Great song. The vocals and backing tracks are terrific. I don't drink coffee (almost 71 years old and perhaps 10 cups of coffee in my life), but an ice cold Dr pepper would work instead. A real catchy song that stays with the listener. That's a good thing! Enjoyed this s a bunch - you have a great song and a great delivery of it.

Best to you,

Alan


Hi Alan. Thanks for your great comment. Rob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/23/17 10:03 PM
Originally Posted By: 44kfl
A lot of output lately

and a higher register of vocals

catchy hook and a driving beat with the thumping bass

enjoyed the listen

Kenny


Thank you Kenny. Rob
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/26/17 08:53 PM
Great sound Rob! One thing I've noticed in your material is that the chorus always has a nice hook in it! Your songs are enjoyable and catchy!! Thanks, Torrey
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/27/17 05:29 AM
Originally Posted By: PeterF
Rob

Nice catchy song and like floyd I'm impressed with the bass arrangement.

Peter


Hi Peter. Thanks for listening. Rob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/27/17 05:30 AM
Originally Posted By: Joe -PG Music
Hi Rob4580, Thanks for sharing this with us! Really dig the guitar solo and the vocals. Excellent use of reverbs on the voice too. Well done! smile


Hi Joe. Thanks for your comment.
Rob
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/28/17 04:18 AM
Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Great sound Rob! One thing I've noticed in your material is that the chorus always has a nice hook in it! Your songs are enjoyable and catchy!! Thanks, Torrey


Hi Torrey. Thank you for your kind words. Rob
Posted By: JoanneCooper Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/28/17 05:04 AM
Hi Rob. I always have spare change for coffee! Very nice write and a good video to go with it. Nice job
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: *New* Spare Change For Coffee - 11/28/17 08:51 PM
Great vibe and energy!! Song is really catchy and engaging. Mix is outstanding! Love the heavy verb for this style, and guitar solo really works great. I love the soundscape you created with this! Love it!! Take care. Greg
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