My Sweet Bunny

Posted by: jannesan

My Sweet Bunny - 12/03/17 01:28 AM

My Sweet Bunny

This time a merrier song than my usual work, made for a special occasion. I'm singing the lead vocal and the extra bassline in the chorus. It was fun to write the lyrics and to sing, and BIAB really gave many nice folky instruments to choose from. I hope it brings you joy and summer feelings smile

Based on your feedback on my previous song, I tried to cut the low frequencies and lift up some higher frequencies (4khz) of my voice in the mix more, do you think it is enough or do I still need to work on it?

RealDrums: GypsyJazz, MotownFunkyTriplets
RealTracks:
Acoustic Bass: #2126
Electric Bass: #2362
Acoustic Piano: #2225
Electric Piano: #2363
Acoustic Guitar: #938
Electric Guitar: #651
Pedal Steel: #2672
Ukulele: #1142, #1143
Fiddle: #1117

Lead vocal, 'bass': Janne
Backing vocals: Vocaloids (Ruby, CyberDiva, CyberSongman)

Mixed in Adobe Audition 2017

Lyrics:

My sweet bunny
sing me a song
snuggle in my armpit
all night long.
My sweet bunny
sing lullabies
remind me what we have done
under the skies
there was a cozy
warmup in May
then fire at the sunset of the
beautiful day.

Thanks to my angel
I feel alive
my sweet bunny, catchy smile
My bambi eye from the woods
my matching part
my sweet bunny, lionheart.

My sweet bunny
put potatoes to boil
in your hair I smell
the coconut oil.
My sweet bunny
pass me a wing
use the napkin, wipe the
grease off my chin
picnic on the isle
green moss in the sun
remember people walking by
they saw our fun.

Thanks to my angel...

My sweet bunny
pour me some wine
give me a long kiss
my valentine.
My sweet bunny
here's a pint of pale beer
your coaster has my name
you're so special and dear.
Lean on me tight
I'll walk you to my house
I'll lend you my old toothbrush
you can sleep in my blouse.

Thanks to my angel...

My sweet bunny
so important to me
my inspiration
my Calliope.
My sweet bunny
my gifted muse
I have perfect time
on a lifetime cruise
with you.


-----
Janne
Posted by: Jon Thomas

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/03/17 06:20 AM

Sweet, funny song. I enjoyed!!
The mix sounds good, Janne. I would just increase a bit the volume of your vocals, but overall the mix sounds really nice and balanced, to my ears at least. Thumbs up!
Posted by: dani48

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/03/17 08:44 AM

Hi, Janne !:))


Very nice song indeed !

Did not find any problem
with the mix !

Cheers
Dani
Posted by: Rob4580

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/03/17 11:08 AM

Fun song. Thanks for posting. Rob
Posted by: Scott C

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/04/17 07:15 AM

Very enjoyable song. Cute lyrics. Well done
Posted by: Deryk - PG Music

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/04/17 08:34 AM

Nice work here, jannesan smile It's a really cute song, and really fun as well! I like the groove it's got going - it's really playful, and easy to nod along to.

Great job, and thanks so much for sharing!
Posted by: furry

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/04/17 08:42 AM

Good fun song thanks for posting
Posted by: bluage

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/04/17 11:45 AM

Dear "jannesan"...

"My sweet bunny
pass me a wing
use the napkin, wipe the
grease off my chin
"

Love, even at its best, can be messy emotionally, and sometimes physically, even. So, when I encounter lyrics that speak so honestly of the mundane, not-so-very-romantic aspects of loving relationships, they just ring more true than the most passionate exclamations of "Baby, I love you/need you/want you/can't live without you..." and so on.

Enjoined to the rollicking music, the lyrics for "My Sweet Bunny" are a testimonial to people who aren't afraid to "get their hands dirty" when it comes to expressing what they find truly endearing about their loved ones.

LOREN
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/04/17 12:58 PM

Originally Posted By: Jon Thomas
Sweet, funny song. I enjoyed!!
The mix sounds good, Janne. I would just increase a bit the volume of your vocals, but overall the mix sounds really nice and balanced, to my ears at least. Thumbs up!


Thanks Jon, I appreciate your kind words smile I'm glad to hear the mix is good. The volume of my vocal was bit difficult to decide, because on headphones it sounds bit too loud, but on speakers maybe not loud enough.

Janne
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/04/17 12:59 PM

Originally Posted By: dani48
Hi, Janne !:))
Very nice song indeed !
Did not find any problem
with the mix !
Cheers
Dani


Thanks Dani for listening and your positive words about the song and the mix smile

Janne
Posted by: Sergio Guarneri

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/04/17 01:16 PM


Very enjoyable song. Out of your usual production but great at the same time.
Very nice for Christmas time too.

Sergio
Posted by: Al-David

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/04/17 06:45 PM

Hi Janne,

Sounds good to my ears ... don't think I'd change anything. It's real nice to hear you singing your own songs.

A really sweet tune and you sounded excellent on the vocals. That was a fun listen! Wishing you the very best,

Alan
Posted by: Greg Johnson

My sweet bunny - 12/06/17 10:46 AM

Cute song Janne!! And, I must say the vocal EQ and processing sounds very good on this. Enjoyed! Take care. Greg
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/06/17 12:58 PM

Originally Posted By: Rob4580
Fun song. Thanks for posting. Rob


Thanks Rob, I appreciate your comment smile

Janne
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/06/17 12:59 PM

Originally Posted By: Scott C
Very enjoyable song. Cute lyrics. Well done


Thanks Scott for your kind comment, I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the song smile

Janne
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/06/17 01:02 PM

Originally Posted By: Deryk - PG Music
Nice work here, jannesan smile It's a really cute song, and really fun as well! I like the groove it's got going - it's really playful, and easy to nod along to.

Great job, and thanks so much for sharing!


Thanks Deryk for your positive words smile

Janne
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/06/17 01:11 PM

Originally Posted By: furry
Good fun song thanks for posting


Thanks Graham for your nice comment, fun was the main motive to do this song smile

Janne
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/07/17 07:31 AM

Originally Posted By: bluage

Love, even at its best, can be messy emotionally, and sometimes physically, even. So, when I encounter lyrics that speak so honestly of the mundane, not-so-very-romantic aspects of loving relationships, they just ring more true than the most passionate exclamations of "Baby, I love you/need you/want you/can't live without you..." and so on.

Enjoined to the rollicking music, the lyrics for "My Sweet Bunny" are a testimonial to people who aren't afraid to "get their hands dirty" when it comes to expressing what they find truly endearing about their loved ones.

LOREN


Thanks Loren for your really beautiful words smile I'm really glad you appreciate the mundane aspect of my lyrics blush I agree that you don't need big words to express certain feelings, touching moments are many times in small friendly details.

Janne
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/07/17 07:37 AM

Originally Posted By: Sergio Guarneri

Very enjoyable song. Out of your usual production but great at the same time.
Very nice for Christmas time too.

Sergio


Thanks Sergio, I'm glad you liked also this type of song from me smile Nice to hear that you also find some Christmas feeling in it smile

Janne
Posted by: animarorecords

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/08/17 12:08 AM

Hello, Janne

It is a very fun and cute song.
Even in simple, there is ingenuity in the chord progression as usual, I feel your usual composing style.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Posted by: VideoTrack

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/08/17 12:18 AM

Janne

Hoppingly good.

I really liked the choice of instruments and orchestration.

The fills slotted in very nicely. The whole song - a lot of fun.
Posted by: gruverider

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/08/17 04:59 PM

A fun song and great use of realtracks!

and your vocals fit in very well
Posted by: Torrey Bliss

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/09/17 07:15 PM

Excellent work Janne as always!! Everything in this sounds great!! I like what you did with the b sections of the song with all the neat chord changes! Thanks, Torrey
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/09/17 11:49 PM

Originally Posted By: Al-David
Hi Janne,

Sounds good to my ears ... don't think I'd change anything. It's real nice to hear you singing your own songs.

A really sweet tune and you sounded excellent on the vocals. That was a fun listen! Wishing you the very best,

Alan


Thanks Alan for your nice comment and encouragement to continue singing smile

Janne
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My sweet bunny - 12/09/17 11:53 PM

Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Cute song Janne!! And, I must say the vocal EQ and processing sounds very good on this. Enjoyed! Take care. Greg


Thanks Greg for enjoying, glad to hear that my EQing is ok smile

Janne
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/09/17 11:58 PM

Originally Posted By: animarorecords
It is a very fun and cute song.
Even in simple, there is ingenuity in the chord progression as usual, I feel your usual composing style.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi


Thanks Shigeki for your kind words smile And always nice to get your positive feedback on the chord progression smile

Janne
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/09/17 11:59 PM

Originally Posted By: VideoTrack

Hoppingly good.
I really liked the choice of instruments and orchestration.
The fills slotted in very nicely. The whole song - a lot of fun.


Thanks VideoTrack for your kind words smile

Janne
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/10/17 12:00 AM

Originally Posted By: gruverider
A fun song and great use of realtracks!

and your vocals fit in very well


Thanks gruverider for your positive words smile

Janne
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/10/17 12:02 AM

Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Excellent work Janne as always!! Everything in this sounds great!! I like what you did with the b sections of the song with all the neat chord changes! Thanks, Torrey


Thanks Torrey for your kind words smile

Janne
Posted by: JoanneCooper

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/10/17 05:48 AM

Ha! You had me with the title of this one. So sweet and I just knew I was going to enjoy it from the intro. Cute.
Posted by: jannesan

Re: My Sweet Bunny - 12/11/17 08:52 AM

Originally Posted By: JoanneCooper
Ha! You had me with the title of this one. So sweet and I just knew I was going to enjoy it from the intro. Cute.


Thanks Joanne, I appreciate your cute comment, I'm glad you enjoyed my song smile

Janne