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Posted By: rsdean Paper Plane - 01/15/18 09:04 PM
Hi All,

Here's a simple little song called Paper Plane.
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Paper plane
Sailing high at midnight
Silver stars
Lighting our way
Take your seat
Say goodbye to the Apple
Close your eyes
We’re on our way
 
Painted words
All around the city
It takes time
Graffiti fades
Lift our wings
Up and over the Hudson
Close your eyes
We’re on our way
 
Paper plane
This is Captain Midnight
All the stars
Fading to grey
Feel the rain
It’s summer in the mountains
Close your eyes
We’re on our way
 
Paper plane
We’re on our way
La La La La
We’re on our way
La La La La
We’re on our way
Paper plane
We’re on our way

All BIAB Tracks:
366: Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065
362: Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 085
362: Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085
2446: Guitar, Baritone Electric, Background Ev 065
RealDrums: NashvilleEven16 Sidestick HiHat

Thanks for listening! smile

Bob
Posted By: sslechta Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 12:10 AM
Nice, laid back tune sir. I really like that tremolo effect on guitar.
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 06:37 AM
Great production on this Bob. Really enjoyed the story behind the lyrics.
Nicely done. Rob
Posted By: PeterF Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 06:37 AM
Bob

Evocative and beautifully composed and arranged. Sounds great and a really enjoyable tune.

Peter
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 06:50 AM
Steve,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 07:12 AM
Good song!

Is the tremolo guitar you? Sounds great.
Posted By: tommyad Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 02:43 PM
Bob, I always enjoy your lyrics. You have a gift for transporting the listener to a different reality. Well done, Tom
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 03:18 PM
Rob,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: Scott C Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 04:00 PM
Very cool tune Bob. Super vocal and lyric. Just loved the guitar. Super clean tone and that tremolo. Just awesome
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 04:42 PM
Enjoyed that, Bob. Your songs are always like miniature movies...

That is a great band to carry it, too... good mix.

fj
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 05:09 PM
cool stuff. I like the song.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 06:32 PM
Peter,

Much appreciated - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 08:23 PM
You continue to make great use of that baritone RT!

We absolutely loved this song...it took me (Bud) way back to the Captain Midnight I knew as a kid and wondered about at night looking at the stars...and of course I wore the decoder ring smile If we could only decode things so easily nowadays...

Wonderful!

J&B
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/16/18 09:07 PM
Dave,

Thanks - I appreciate that.

The tremolo sounding guitar is a Baritone RT - a great sounding instrument.

Bob
Posted By: 44kfl Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 12:38 AM
Your imagery is always so good

paints a great scene

like the choice of instruments that help set the mood

enjoyed,

Kenny
Posted By: dcuny Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 05:20 AM
There's a spareness to this arrangement that compliments the wistful lyrics.

I'm always impressed how you can bring a poetic feel to your songs, but still keep them melodic and unforced.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 06:59 AM
Tom,

That's very kind - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 07:12 AM
Scott,

I appreciate the kind words - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 09:37 AM
Floyd,

Appreciate that - thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: David Snyder Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 10:57 AM

Man, this is great Bob. I love your stuff man. Really takes me back in time.

Awesome lyrics and vocals.

I may borrow that Captain Midnight thing if I have permission, spin it out a bit....

smile
Posted By: edshaw Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 11:44 AM
Seems to me, Bob, I oughta be able to have a whole CD of songs like Paper Plane. I mean spin offs -- same voice, backing, guitar.
The lyrics are inspired, yet simple. Simple enough to be the basis of other songs. Then, what do I know?
I'm describing a CD you could just put on and let it play,
happily.
Posted By: David Snyder Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 05:01 PM
Ok Bob,

Captain Midnight is done and am doing vocals.

Will be up tomorrow.

This one is for you man.

Get ready.

smile
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 05:08 PM
David,

Thanks so much. Of course, take whatever you need. smile

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 05:09 PM
I'm ready! Can't wait to hear it!

Bob
Posted By: MarioD Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 05:30 PM
Bob, this is absolutely fantastic! Your mix and vocals are excellent but you lyrics took it over the top for me. This arrangement is also outstanding.

Two thumbs up.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 06:13 PM
Herb,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 07:49 PM
Janice & Bud,

Thanks. I'm so glad you liked this one. I appreciate the great feedback - means a lot.

Bob
Posted By: Robertkc Re: Paper Plane - 01/17/18 08:17 PM
Bob,
The good Captain was unfortunately not part of my upbringing, but no matter - this has a lovely wistful feeling that is simply uplifting!
Super vocal and production too.

Robert
Posted By: RichMac Re: Paper Plane - 01/18/18 03:00 AM
Hi Bob.
Great title.
Great lyrics and atmosphere and of course lovely use of the baritone.
Thumbs up.
Cheers.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/18/18 07:02 AM
Ed,

I really appreciate that - very kind of you. Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Paper Plane - 01/18/18 09:54 AM
Originally Posted By: tommyad
Bob, I always enjoy your lyrics. You have a gift for transporting the listener to a different reality. Well done, Tom


Bob,

I fully agree with Tom. He's said what I've felt so many times when I listen to your songs but the words have never appeared in my mind. You really do have a gift for transporting the listener to another place. By anyone's definition, that explains what "skill" is all about!

All the best,
Noel
Posted By: Icelander Re: Paper Plane - 01/18/18 11:29 AM
The lyrics have that irresistible nostalgic vibe to them, nicely done cool
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: Paper Plane - 01/18/18 11:55 AM
Great work on this Paper! It is a stunning tune, and I love how you didn't over complicate it. The sparseness of it really gave it room to breathe, and allowed for the vocals and guitar to really strike hard. It's a very well written song, and the arrangement is seriously on point too.

You should be proud of this one - thanks so much for sharing smile
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/18/18 01:25 PM
Mario,

Thanks for listening and commenting - it is very appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Paper Plane - 01/18/18 02:57 PM
Originally Posted By: tommyad
Bob, I always enjoy your lyrics. You have a gift for transporting the listener to a different reality. Well done, Tom


Exactly the way I feel!! I love the abstract, visual lyrics you put together Bob. Dreamy! This is one of my faves of yours!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/18/18 08:54 PM
Robert,

I appreciate that - thanks very much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/19/18 07:08 AM
Rich,

Thanks so much!

Bob
Posted By: Al-David Re: Paper Plane - 01/19/18 09:30 AM
Hi Bob,

The imagery in your lyrics is always so vivid. Nice trip back in time. Great arrangement - super in all respects.

Alan
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/19/18 01:00 PM
Noel,

Thanks for listening and the kind words - I appreciate that.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/19/18 06:52 PM
Eddie,

Much appreciated - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/20/18 08:38 AM
Deryk,

Thanks so much - I appreciate that.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/20/18 02:13 PM
Greg,

Much appreciated - thanks.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/21/18 09:24 AM
Alan,

Thanks very much!

Bob
Posted By: gruverider Re: Paper Plane - 01/21/18 03:11 PM
Wonderful songwriting. I love that baritone guitar as well. I want to use it in almost every song I record LOL!

The rest of the realtracks are spot on as well.

And the production is very clean.

Sounds great!
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/21/18 04:39 PM
Lawrence,

Thanks so much - very appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: Paper Plane - 01/21/18 06:32 PM
Bob, your lyrics are always so good! The style and instruments you have chosen work very well in this! Vocals are excellent as always! Take care, Torrey
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/21/18 08:56 PM
Torrey,

Much appreciated - I am enjoying your new one as well.

Bob
Posted By: Steve Young Re: Paper Plane - 01/21/18 10:40 PM
Bob,

Another winner. Once again, you have inspired and challenged me to write better lyrics!

Love it!

Steve
Posted By: rsdean Re: Paper Plane - 01/22/18 07:11 AM
Steve,

Thanks so much - glad to hear your songs again.

Bob
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