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Posted By: RichMac Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/19/18 03:31 AM
Hi, had been thinking of something like this for a while and Dave Brooks 'On My Way Back Home' reminded me to get on with it.

Shirley-Louise just turned 82 and this song has a few of the things she sometimes says in it. The idea was for her to sing the chorus but it was a bit much for her although we used some of her vocal.
(She's not going just yet)

Drums - Nashville Classic Waltz
Bass- RT 1122 - Acoustic Country Waltz
Autoharp - RT 1109 - Old Time Slow Waltz
Guitar - RT 828 - Country waltz

Hope you enjoy it.
Comments and criticism welcome.

https://soundcloud.com/tuigorge/please-wont-you-let-me-go-home

Please Won't You Let Me Go Home

please | E let me go | home to my | mother |
I | don't like it | here any | B more |
| Let me go | home to my | brother |
| why can't i | open the | E door |
| let me go | home to my | little son | john
i | A loved him so | much but he | died |
and i | E cried and i | cried and i | cried |
| B please won't you | let me go | E home |

she | dances like | sun on the | water |
| A sings the sweet | song of the | stars |
the | E little girl | runs too | B enchanted to | walk
but | she's run so | fast and so | far |

please | E let me go | home to my | mother |
I | don't like it | here any | B more |
| Let me go | home to my | brother |
| why can't i | open the | E door |
| let me go | home to my | little son | john
i | A loved him so | much but he | died |
and i | E cried and i | cried and i | cried |
| B please won't you | let me go | E home |

she | sits looking | out of the | window |
| A waits for the past to app | ear |
she | E lives it | again sweet | B memories | flow
then | peacefully | sleeps in her | chair |

please | E let me go | home to my | mother |
I | don't like it | here any | B more |
| Let me go | home to my | brother |
| why can't i | open the | E door |
| let me go | home to my | little son | john
i | A loved him so | much but he | died |
and i | E cried and i | cried and i | cried |
| B please won't you | let me go | E home |
| B please won't you | let me go | E home A | E |
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/19/18 10:57 AM
Wow - this is a great tune, RichMac smile There are some incredible lyrics in this one, and it sounds so hauntingly beautiful paired with the gentle music. I enjoyed everything about this. Your mother's vocals were a great addition too.

Fantastic job on this - thanks for sharing!
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/19/18 01:59 PM
Richard & Shirley-Louise...

Beautifully done. Loved hearing the two of you singing together!

A sad song.

Sounds like Shirley has been threatening to leave for a long time... smile

This really sticks in your head...

fj
Posted By: dcuny Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/19/18 02:40 PM
Really touching lyrics, and great tune.
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/19/18 07:33 PM
Rich, as others have noted, you have some nice lyric content here and I like your instrumentation choices! Thanks, Torrey
Posted By: David Snyder Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/19/18 10:01 PM

Man I love this!

The vocals from Shirley-Louise really make it.

Thanks for doing this. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Posted By: PeterF Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 01:39 AM
Rich

Very touching and well done. As floyd said it sticks n your head. Nice vocal interplay.

Peter
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 04:58 AM

Hi Deryk,

I'm delighted that you enjoyed this.
The lyrics are all part of my wife Shirley-Louise's story.
She's 82 and i'm 78. Old people.
Thank you for your support.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 05:06 AM

Hi Floyd

Thanks for your sympathetic comments.
Shirley's become a child again and needs most of my time and energy.
Thank goodness she's still mainly a happy person.
Frustrating at times though.
Ah well, we all get old if we don't die first.

Cheers.
Posted By: Rob4580 Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 06:20 AM
Lots of sentiment in those lyrics. Great effort both you. Rob
Posted By: Tano Music Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 07:50 AM
So glad I decided to listen in on this, and to understand the story behind it!
Loved the autoharp component.
Also loved how lyrically you approached the topic.
I'll bet Shirley loves hearing what you've done together.
Your project will stick with me.
Posted By: Ember - PG Music Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 12:42 PM
The lyrics are so beautiful! It sounds like they were really thought out. Really fantastic job!
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 03:41 PM
Man, does that ever pull at the heartstrings. We're glad for you, for her and all of us that you "got on with it" because it resulted in a very touching production that gives us all pause for reflection.

"Thank goodness she's still mainly a happy person." Indeed.

Thanks for sharing this with us....

J&B
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 04:04 PM
Cool tune. Very folk orientated. Good job to both of you.
Posted By: Scott C Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 05:00 PM
Very cool tune Richard. Love the feel of the backtrack. Very emotional lyric. Super vocals. Well done..
Posted By: tommyad Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 05:51 PM
Richard, I bet Shirley will enjoy singing along with this in the future so it’s a good thing you got it down on tape. You handled the content well. You definitely have a knack for that sort of thing. I enjoyed my listen and I hope you both remain happy, Tom
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 06:34 PM

Hi David,

Thank you for listening.
We're glad you enjoyed it.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 06:36 PM

Thanks Torrey

Your comments are appreciated.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 06:41 PM

Thanks David

Shirley gave up singing quite a few years ago but happy to say she enjoyed this little song so I must try to write some more for her.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 06:44 PM

Hi Peter

Been trying to write more memorable songs for a while now.
It seems simplicity and repetition are the key.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 06:53 PM

Thanks Rob,

We appreciate the nice comments.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 06:56 PM
Thank you for listening Tano.

The song has given Shirley quite a boost.
She is chuffed with the lovely comments. So am I.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 07:00 PM

Hi Ember

Tried to stick to reality with the lyrics.
Thanks for your lovely comments.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 07:06 PM

Hi J&B

Always thanks for your support.
It is indeed a privilege to have such a wonderful audience listen to
and comment on our efforts.

Cheers.
Posted By: Robertkc Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 08:31 PM
Richard,

Very moving - probably one of the most personal songs I`ve ever heard on this forum.Your duet with Shirley is wonderful; thank you for sharing those moments with us.

Robert
Posted By: rsdean Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 08:48 PM
Rich,

Very beautiful and touching... You have something really special here.

Bob
Posted By: MarioD Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/20/18 09:22 PM
WOW this is fantastic!

This the most heart felt that I have ever heard. The duet was an added attraction!

Super job on this!
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/22/18 03:07 AM
Thank you Herb.

Was a good project for both of us.
Be nice if Shirley would sing a bit more.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/22/18 03:11 AM

Hi Scott,

Thanks for the support.
Hadn't noticed the autoharp before.
May use it again.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/22/18 03:14 AM

Hi Tom,

Thanks in particular for your good wishes.
Happiness is a bit of a roller coaster but we certainly have our moments.
And yes we are both very pleased with this one.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/22/18 03:22 AM

Hi Robert,

I wondered about putting it up but Shirley was ok with it and her son Peter was also so we went ahead.
I hope others can relate to it.
Thanks for listening.

Cheers.
Posted By: animarorecords Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/22/18 04:58 AM
Hello, Richard

This song has a really nostalgic melody.
I feel as if I heard it somewhere when I was a child.
And your instrumentation choices have ingenuity as usual.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/25/18 04:57 AM
Thank you Bob,

We enjoyed it.
Now to try and think of more ways to involve Shirley-Louise.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/25/18 05:00 AM

Hi Mario.

Thanks for your touching comments.
I'm a little surprised this one went so well.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/25/18 05:07 AM

Hi Shigeki.

We are delighted that you enjoyed this effort.
There's and old country waltz 'Give you a daisy a day'
A favourite of mine.
Tried to capture some of the feel of it.

Thanks and Cheers.
Posted By: Jim Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/28/18 07:03 PM
You've done a terrific job on this little waltz... it really pulls on the heart...
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/29/18 04:01 AM

Thanks for that Jim.
Much appreciated.

Cheers.
Posted By: Noel96 Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 03/29/18 07:34 AM
Richard and Shirley-Louise,

I absolutely loved this!

I'm a big fan of waltzes and really enjoyed travelling along with you on this one. The lyrics are sad but they so aptly reflect the essence of life. There's a very timeless quality in your writing. Even now, nearly 10 minutes after listening, I can still here the song really clearly in my mind.

I thoroughly enjoyed listening.

All the best to you both,
Noel
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 04/02/18 07:46 PM
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Richard & Shirley-Louise...

Beautifully done. Loved hearing the two of you singing together!

A sad song.

Sounds like Shirley has been threatening to leave for a long time... smile

This really sticks in your head...

fj


I agree with my friend Floyd. Very well done, but very sad. Very well written RichMac!! Enjoyed this melancholy song! Take care. Greg
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 04/07/18 07:04 PM

Noel

Thank you for such kind words my friend.
we both appreciate them.

Cheers.
Posted By: RichMac Re: Please Won't You Let Me Go Home - 04/07/18 07:07 PM

Hi Greg and thanks for the comments.
it's autumn and a little melancholy here.
Glad you enjoyed it.

Cheers.
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