Any who:

The vocals sounded OK but a little thin after awhile. So, I enhanced them to give them more punch.

If you've nothing better to do, give the new mix a listen.

All the best,

Dave

https://soundcloud.com/davebrooksmusicfactory/on-my-way-back-home

This is the first time I've heard this.....

Not at all what I expected.

Dave, honestly, the falsetto just doesn't fit this song. Some songs and some artists have made a career from singing falsetto, but this isn't one of them. Sing this at least one octave lower.

Man I don't mean to sound insulting because it's not meant to be at all.... I think there's a good song in there.... you just need to sing that good song. Save the falsetto for a song that works in falsetto.

That's all I can say for right now. scrap the vocal and record it lower.

Wow!

I like it! I'm guessing you don't. =D