My Millennial Masterpiece - 10/23/19 02:34 PM
My Millennial Masterpiece
This time a simple pop song about writing a perfect pop song Most likely it's not a perfect masterpiece, but maybe there is a hidden message how to write such thing To keep the length close to 3 minutes, there are no solos.
RealDrums: Soul70sEv16
RealTracks:
VocalOohs #3064, #3069
Electric Bass #1398
Electric guitar #1398, #1236, #1401
Piano SynthLayer #1410
SynthPad #1543
Vocals by me
Mixed in Cakewalk by BandLab
Lyrics:
Sometimes I am trying just too hard
to create pure perfect art
even then when I am making love
mere technique
won't serve my sweetheart.
For many years I've been trying to write
my millennial masterpiece,
a tale to touch and delight
asking myself is perfection just a dream
or a flush of a swift gleam?
Sometimes I am trying by all means
to please the critics appetite
I can decorate the Christmas tree
full of frills
so it's no more in sight.
For many years...
Sometimes I am trying night and day
to resist all cute clichés
a euphemism after worn-out ones
I deny the truth
that love suits always.
For many years...
In the charming moment
of a three minute ride
my child awakens,
heavens open wide
clichéd or not,
still unique in my eyes
vulnerable, giving me
love with no ties.
For many years I've been trying to write
my millennial masterpiece,
a tale to touch and delight
asking myself is perfection just a dream
it's a flush of a gleam.
-------------
Janne
This time a simple pop song about writing a perfect pop song Most likely it's not a perfect masterpiece, but maybe there is a hidden message how to write such thing To keep the length close to 3 minutes, there are no solos.
RealDrums: Soul70sEv16
RealTracks:
VocalOohs #3064, #3069
Electric Bass #1398
Electric guitar #1398, #1236, #1401
Piano SynthLayer #1410
SynthPad #1543
Vocals by me
Mixed in Cakewalk by BandLab
Lyrics:
Sometimes I am trying just too hard
to create pure perfect art
even then when I am making love
mere technique
won't serve my sweetheart.
For many years I've been trying to write
my millennial masterpiece,
a tale to touch and delight
asking myself is perfection just a dream
or a flush of a swift gleam?
Sometimes I am trying by all means
to please the critics appetite
I can decorate the Christmas tree
full of frills
so it's no more in sight.
For many years...
Sometimes I am trying night and day
to resist all cute clichés
a euphemism after worn-out ones
I deny the truth
that love suits always.
For many years...
In the charming moment
of a three minute ride
my child awakens,
heavens open wide
clichéd or not,
still unique in my eyes
vulnerable, giving me
love with no ties.
For many years I've been trying to write
my millennial masterpiece,
a tale to touch and delight
asking myself is perfection just a dream
it's a flush of a gleam.
-------------
Janne