After a stroke jan2020, my musical capabilities gone from bad to worse. Thx to Band-in-a-Box I can stil enjoy songwriting.

https://m.soundcloud.com/frans-brink/liaw-mp3

Right, Frans. Life is a wheel, songwriting the spokes and BiaB is the valve stem. Really good song. Well sung. Stay well, and keep writing.

Fran, so sorry to hear about your stroke; but very glad to hear that you have found BIAB as a way to continue exercising your musical talents. Very nice song you've crafted here. Never give up.

Frans,
I`m glad you are finding a way to continue making music.
This is a very personal ballad- most lyrics I got but it would be helpful to post them.

Robert

Hi, Frans.

I enjoyed the sound, but had to go back a second time to hear the lyrics.

Nice write, but Like Robert, I'd suggest posting the lyrics, as they're hard to hear in the current mix.

Frans,

First off, so glad you’re still writing and sharing music. Not sure where your musical capabilities are coming from, but given this engaging piece, I’m just gonna guess you have lost much on your fastball. The music and instrumental mix is really engaging; the vocal is sincere and emotional. From a technical production standpoint, I agree the vocal could be a little crisper in spots . . . but it falls well on the ear as is. Nicely done!!

All my best,

Deej

Really, really beautiful song. Yes, I had trouble hearing the lyrics in places, too ... would love it if you posted them up ... but what a beautiful, sensitive, well-written and well-sung song. Please keep writing if you can ... this is one of the songs on here that really got to me, more than many.

Frank, sorry about your stroke. I'm glad it didn't stop you from making music and posting songs. Like others I had trouble hearing some of the words and posting the lyrics might help. Still this is an excellent song.

Take care my friend.