Rock/Pop song with video (+Lyrics question) - 07/29/22 12:22 PM
Title: Don't raise me on a wall
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T7tvbWoWOlg
SoundCloud link:
https://soundcloud.com/eleanorlennox/dont-raise-me-up
Some background info:
when someone falls in love with you (especially at a young age) he or she only wants to see you in a positive way, and raises you on a pedestal of which you're probably not worthy of.
It's your responsibility to fix this.
Now, the word "pedestal" has too much syllables and an unfortunate flow to properly fit into my song, so I changed it to "wall", which coincidentally rhymes perfectly to "fall"
Makes perfect sense in my mother language, but might be complete nonsense in English.
If the latter I'm gonna kill me.
Softly!
With this song...
Anyway, I'd appreciate your feedback on this because I'm not a native speaker, and I could not find any reference whether it's correct or not.
And this song (like the last one) was unfortunately also already finished and uploaded before I found this forum to ask someone....
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T7tvbWoWOlg
SoundCloud link:
https://soundcloud.com/eleanorlennox/dont-raise-me-up
Some background info:
when someone falls in love with you (especially at a young age) he or she only wants to see you in a positive way, and raises you on a pedestal of which you're probably not worthy of.
It's your responsibility to fix this.
Now, the word "pedestal" has too much syllables and an unfortunate flow to properly fit into my song, so I changed it to "wall", which coincidentally rhymes perfectly to "fall"
Makes perfect sense in my mother language, but might be complete nonsense in English.
If the latter I'm gonna kill me.
Softly!
With this song...
Anyway, I'd appreciate your feedback on this because I'm not a native speaker, and I could not find any reference whether it's correct or not.
And this song (like the last one) was unfortunately also already finished and uploaded before I found this forum to ask someone....