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Posted By: C. Dan Roberts "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/24/18 09:52 AM
I know I am a newbie here. But I am still a songwriter. My challenge is this...who can write the saddest song. Of course it would be cool to use Band in a Box in the making. And I am talking about coming up with a song that will just leave you emotionally destroyed because it is that sad. A song that will stay in a persons mind for like forever. One that rips the fiber of your heart right out. A song that can make even the toughest guy on the block ball his head off. Even cry in front of his best friends.
Or not....C. Dan
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/24/18 11:01 AM
Now this I can get behind! Sometimes about sad music was always inviting to me smile I've already heard some pretty sad tunes on the showcase, but I'm always eager to hear more.
Posted By: 90 dB Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/24/18 12:30 PM
"And I am talking about coming up with a song that will just leave you emotionally destroyed because it is that sad."



That could be said of most of my songs. grin



Regards,

Bob
Posted By: Samuel Davis Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/24/18 01:27 PM
I love sad breakup songs. My last album was comprised mostly of them. I'll have to see what I can come up with for this.
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/24/18 04:37 PM
Does it have to be a brand new write or could it be an existing song created with BB at some past point of time?


Quote:
Of course it would be cool to use Band in a Box in the making.
That's mandatory around here.
Posted By: Sundance Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/24/18 05:54 PM
Click on my songs link below and scroll down the list to Missing Me. It's been called a gut ripper. smile
Posted By: beatmaster Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/24/18 06:57 PM
That is a brilliant song from a brilliant singer do you do all your own producing/mixing etc.

I'm still going through your songs.

Top stuff some of them so far.
Posted By: Ember - PG Music Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/24/18 08:03 PM
I love sad music! Is that weird to say? I'd love to hear all the sad songs people want to write.
Posted By: Hugh2 Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/24/18 08:16 PM
Not Weird Ember just Sad!
Posted By: rayc Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 09:26 AM
Sad, mawkish, sentimental, heart string puller,tragedy recount? I'm not sure what I could offer other than sadly lacking.
Posted By: MarioD Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 10:48 AM
Here is one that I wrote a few years ago when I was in Pumping Station Road:

https://soundcloud.com/pumping-station-road/god-took-my-angel
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 11:17 AM
Yesss - all the sad songs, haha. If people start linking their sad tunes on here I will gladly listen smile
Posted By: eddie1261 Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 11:48 AM
This is one from my CD that people say fits that criteria.

And not just because it's me singing it!!!

The One That Got Away
Posted By: jford Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 12:18 PM
Not one of mine, but the flip side of Terry Jacks' 45 "Seasons In The Sun" hit (itself a sad song) is so sad that it's funny and awful:

Posted By: eddie1261 Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 12:42 PM
Here's one more for you. This is called Do It All Again. I wrote this and put it on my CD, but then asked a guy named Bobby Lee who sings in a great local country band to do a version. He absolutely nailed it.
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 12:57 PM
Here is one we did a couple of years back. Could use a remix as I listen to it now for the first time in ages.

The lyrics are about losing someone you really love.

GoodBye
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 01:10 PM
Originally Posted By: eddie1261
This is one from my CD that people say fits that criteria.

And not just because it's me singing it!!!

The One That Got Away


Originally Posted By: eddie1261
Here's one more for you. This is called Do It All Again. I wrote this and put it on my CD, but then asked a guy named Bobby Lee who sings ini a great local country band to do a version. He absolutely nailed it.


These are both actually great - I personally think I gravitate more towards the former. Straight forward and very relatable lyrics, but the delivery really cuts through. A great hook to boot.

More, more!
Posted By: Jim Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 02:17 PM
Several video songs come to find...







BTW... All 3 were created in Biab and mixed in Power Tracks


Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 03:22 PM
I'm still waiting for the OP to answer the dang question.

Are old songs that meet the criteria OK or is this a challenge to write something new that qualifies as the saddest song ever?
Posted By: eddie1261 Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 03:30 PM
Originally Posted By: Guitarhacker
Are old songs that meet the criteria OK or is this a challenge to write something new that qualifies as the saddest song ever?


I'm covered either way!! As long as women keep trampling on my heart (and bank account), I will have material!!
Posted By: C. Dan Roberts Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/25/18 03:57 PM
It's all cool old or new.....long as it is sad to the bone.
Posted By: floyd jane Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/26/18 06:09 PM
Here are a few...

Feeling Nothing At All

Still Drinking

Half

Bible On The Dresser - (a co-write with David Snyder)

Choking

Written (Janice on harmonies - of course...)
Posted By: Hugh2 Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/26/18 09:38 PM
Hi My song is so sad 1503 people drowned in the making of it !SOS TITANIC !https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vUQoUJNPDKs
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/28/18 08:19 AM
My song is so sad it's the first to have "Sad" in its title.....



My Sad Story


A few may notice this is a remix of the original that to add to the overall "sadness" of the song, was a finalist to a Taxi placement in a movie but was rejected due to some poor production decisions I made but have since corrected.
Posted By: 90 dB Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/28/18 11:11 AM
Here's one:


http://www.pgmusic.com/forums/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=268279&page=1



Regards,

Bob
Posted By: Jim Fogle Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/28/18 09:55 PM
Great subject for a song challenge.

+++ Lilly Cries +++ is not my song. However the song is co-written by and performed by a Band-in-a-Box user.
Posted By: David Snyder Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/28/18 10:04 PM
Well it made Me Cry:


Come Shining


http://www.pgmusic.com/forums/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=411964&page=1

And if you really want to shoot yourself...

Killing Time

https://soundcloud.com/davidsnyderchannel/killing-time

Killing Time

By David Snyder

V1

Well the hour glass says I’m running out
And the Holy Priest is full of doubt
And the warden won’t let me out
Until I’ve had my share
I been staring out
On the prison yard
And I see a guy who’s trying hard
To dig a hole
That will lead him to nowhere

PRE CH:

Yeah everything in the world has changed
But one thing remains the same

CH:

I will love you in the summer
And I will love you in the fall
I will love you in the winter
And when spring time comes to call
I will love you baby until they make me walk that line
I will love you ‘til that day
When they say
It’s killing time

V2

Well I am sorry for the killing I’ve done
Never wanted to hurt no one
But I know I’m not the only man
Who has ever sought revenge
Justice is mine
Saith the Lord
I wished I’d studied more on those words
Before I killed the man
who stole the life of my little girl

PRE CH:

Yeah everything in the world has changed
But one thing remains the same

CH:

I will love you in the summer
And I will love you in the fall
I will love you in the winter
And when spring time comes to call
I will love you baby until they make me walk that line
[And I will meet you in heaven on that day
When they say
It’s killing time x 2]
And Baby just so you know
Your Daddy’s feelin’ fine

Words and Music copyright 2017 by David Snyder
Produced and Engineered by David Snyder
Posted By: David Snyder Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/28/18 10:11 PM
Wow, Floyd, a bunch of great ones, ha ha!

man, I listened to Bible again and I need a drink!!!!!!! I'm so depressed I could shoot myself!!!

smile
Posted By: David Snyder Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/28/18 10:15 PM

Josie,

I got so depressed listening to that I had to listen to this just to cheer myself up!!

!!!!!

https://soundcloud.com/josie-beck-songs/i-dont-wanna-think-about-you
Posted By: David Snyder Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/28/18 10:17 PM
Mario,

I can't go on man. This is too much sad music.

It's great though.
Posted By: David Snyder Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/28/18 10:18 PM

Eddie,

I am so sad I need to go eat five pizzas. You guys are killing me.
Posted By: C. Dan Roberts Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/28/18 10:19 PM
Well I have a good sad song. I have the lyrics and melody and chords...but I am having trouble getting it into the box. I played this song with my granddaughter and she started crying before we even got half way through the song. I titled it "Little Dog's Girl". I have been checking out the new Real Tracks like "Real Tracks 278", which is Ooohs And Aaahs. And man.. right now is when I could use some of those real tracks. Has any one on this forum used them in a composition yet?
If you have ever listened to "He stopped Loving Her Today" by George Jones ...the Ooohs and aaahs along with the pedal steel and the harmonica alone make me feel like crying.
Anytime I cover this song around my Mom, she starts crying. Actually every time I do it she starts crying. I have to play "Boot Scoot Boogie" to get her to stop crying.
I know I seem like a meany for making them cry... but that is what a good sad song will do...but they love it and come back for more..
I would like to post my song but I haven't got it to fit "Band in a Box" yet. I may have to use a minimum of real tracks to get it to work.
And also I am digging the tunes that the rest you guys are posting.....really good songs coming in here.
Posted By: David Snyder Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/28/18 10:20 PM

Dave,

Do you have any Prozac you can send me? This one has pushed me over the edge.

I'm standing on the edge of a bridge.
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/29/18 07:35 AM
Originally Posted By: David Snyder

Dave,

Do you have any Prozac you can send me? This one has pushed me over the edge.

I'm standing on the edge of a bridge.



Beer is always the answer laugh

Thanks for giving it a listen, David smile
Posted By: eddie1261 Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/29/18 09:41 AM
Here's a new sad one I just posted to the songwriter showcase. Link is to the showcase post.

How To Forget
Posted By: the_blooze Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/29/18 03:31 PM
Here is one I wrote a while ago. My wife Marg sings it.

The Corner Of Goodbye
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/29/18 05:35 PM
My entry:

FOOTSTEPS IN THE HALL

Being haunted by someone who isn't there anymore.
Posted By: C. Dan Roberts Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/29/18 05:53 PM

Oh yeah I like this song...I got a tingle..This is the the best one I have heard on here in the "Sad Song" category so far. And there are some good ones. I could feel the lyrics..they spoke to a place I have been before. And the construction of instruments are well placed and timed just right to keep the feel alive. Good Job on this one. C. Dan
Posted By: David Snyder Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/29/18 07:35 PM

Yeah Herb, this is a really good song man.
Posted By: Ember - PG Music Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/29/18 08:06 PM
Is it bad to say that I am really enjoying these sad songs so far and that I want to see more? I feel like that's a bad thing for me to want, especially because some of them seem pretty personal. But they're just so good.
Posted By: C. Dan Roberts Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/29/18 09:52 PM

Check out the song by Jeff Bates called "Watching His Son Going Down"... Another sad song..
If you like Conway Twitty type vocals...check out the song "Somebody's Falling" Sung by Sarah Darling and Jeff Bates.

Both good tunes...

C.Dan
Posted By: Teunis Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/30/18 08:22 AM
Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Here is one we did a couple of years back. Could use a remix as I listen to it now for the first time in ages.

The lyrics are about losing someone you really love.

GoodBye



I don’t know about a remix but I must say this song I like. I think this is one song I would describe as bloody brilliant but I am an Aussie.

Tony
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/30/18 10:25 AM
Originally Posted By: Teunis
Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Here is one we did a couple of years back. Could use a remix as I listen to it now for the first time in ages.

The lyrics are about losing someone you really love.

GoodBye



I don’t know about a remix but I must say this song I like. I think this is one song I would describe as bloody brilliant but I am an Aussie.

Tony


Well Tony, it's a well known fact that Aussies have exceptionally good taste in music laugh

Thanks for the listen and kind words, I appreciate it smile
Posted By: eddie1261 Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/30/18 02:47 PM
I like this a lot. Was that real fiddle? It sounds almost like a guitar with an ebow. A lot of emotion in the vocals as well.
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/30/18 10:46 PM
Originally Posted By: eddie1261
I like this a lot. Was that real fiddle? It sounds almost like a guitar with an ebow. A lot of emotion in the vocals as well.


Eddie,

That is a guitar you are hearing. I ran it through an auto swell pedal that basically detects pick attacks and replaces them with a smooth volume swell. Makes it sound like a bowed instrument. Some guys can do it with a pinky on the volume knob, but I’m not that coordinated.

Re the vocal: She wrote the lyrics after losing a best friend to cancer, so yeah, she was feeling it when she did the recording.

Thanks for the listen and comment, I haven’t listened to yours yet but will do so soon.
Posted By: C. Dan Roberts Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/31/18 11:36 AM
https://soundcloud.com/countryjammer/cold-bricks-below
I haven't gotten the tune I wrote to put on here worked out yet...so here is this dark ballad I wrote about a cold winter day in Ft. Worth Texas.
Downtown Ft. Worth streets are made of bricks....
It Is called "Cold Bricks Below"

C. Dan
Bass-(midi)-34 finger Elec.
Piano-(midi)-acoustic
Drums-(midi)-drum patch #2
Guitar-372-Acoustic, hank sw 120
Fiddle-618-background, allis ev. 120
Guitar 2-522-acoustic finger picking ev. 120
Recorded thru line 6 spider jam amp onto sd card
Vocals me... chorus harmony..me with digitech harmonizer
And me playing acoustic guitar on line 6 variax acoustic position 1
Posted By: Robertkc Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/31/18 12:02 PM
A remix? It sounds brilliant to me... and this is a cool thread. Going out to pick up some kleenex and settle in to listen to the other songs here.
My two-hankie song; save one for Janice signing off with feeling...

Vacant Chair
Posted By: Jim Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 05/31/18 02:58 PM
Here is another sad song sample...
Composed in Biab using Blank2.sty with a Steel & Resonator Guitar Real Tracks added later

Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 06/01/18 07:29 AM
Originally Posted By: Robertkc
A remix? It sounds brilliant to me... and this is a cool thread. Going out to pick up some kleenex and settle in to listen to the other songs here.
My two-hankie song; save one for Janice signing off with feeling...

Vacant Chair


I've listened to most of the songs in this thread. This one gets to me! I remember it from when you first posted it. Hard not to like a brilliant write with Janice on vocals!
Posted By: Robertkc Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 06/02/18 01:55 PM
Thanks Dave,
I listened to most of the postings here too- as well as yours, Josie`s Missing Me, & Floyd`s Feeling Nothing At All got to me... and David`s Killing Time turned my insides to jello!

Robert
Posted By: Deryk - PG Music Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 06/05/18 10:25 AM
There's some true gems throughout this thread. Thanks for sharing guys smile Now we need another thread called "Uplifting Song Challenge" or something to balance it out!
Posted By: eddie1261 Re: "SAD SONG CHALLENGE" - 06/06/18 01:25 PM
Originally Posted By: Deryk - PG Music
Now we need another thread called "Uplifting Song Challenge" or something to balance it out!


So create it!
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