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This will be the last song for the album..

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_13328503

BB: Dirty electric for bass, organ and electric guitar
BB: Pop Rock for and guitar
EzKeys Piano

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Nice Lyrics Paul!

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This song is amazingly mysterious. I love the piano and your voice most of all, I see what you are trying to say by this song. I have done this and taken each thing day by day. I lived with some pretty serious learning disabilities and I had to take things one at a time before I graduated from college. This song speaks volumes to me.


Music is an expression that is a universal language, Never criticize anybody to harshly. They need time to grow but when they do, they do. Always be kind in what you say and do because the man upstairs is watching.
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Thanks guys.. wasn't sure if I could pull this song off... the idea has been floating in my mind now for about 2 weeks .. I finally sat down and wrote it this evening... Its a good 1st draft...I think it maybe something I can build on as my skills get better...

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Great message. Cool sound.
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Paul,
This is really nice. I really like the feel of the song. Mix is really well done (with exceptions I'll mention later). Bass is balanced well. I can hear the snare, ride, hats, well.

I love the chorus - great melody and feel. vocals are excellent! you have a great voice for this music.

Love the organ (I might bring that up in the mix a tad!)

now what I don't like as much:
needs less reverb. This one isan't quite as bad as the other of yours listened to, but it's still over done. everything has too much on it.

I'd like to hear more thump out of the kick and the toms.

Your music is very very good, your vocals are excellent, your lyrics and songwriting is excellentt. I think you're so close to being really good, but you need a little work on your mixing is all.

good luck man, I am becoming a fan!

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Nothing to dislike here . . . great song and an excellant performance.

You can SANG!

Later,

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