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Here is a slow love song. Style is _CTRSLBM.STY RealTracks in style: 366:Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065 RealTracks in style: ~~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085 RealTracks in style: ~~362:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 085 RealTracks in style: 1705:Guitar, Electric, Soloist CountryBrent Ev 085 RealTracks in song: ~1126:Pedal Steel, Rhythm CountryWaltz Sw 085 RealDrums: RealDrums in Style: NashvilleEven8^2-a:Sidestick, HiHat , b:Snare, HiHat ******************* Recorded in Logic Pro9 and mastered in Ozone5. Thanks in advance to all who take the time to listen and comment. Your feedback is always welcome. https://soundcloud.com/tommyad/if-angels-dancehttp://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12545536©2013 Thomas Adams
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Tommy, Nice song. I guess you had to get out of the doghouse with your wife, so this one was due.  I enjoy your work. Steve
Steve Young Music"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of." - Robert Schumann
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Loved the song. Well sung and well played. Very enjoyable
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That's a very nice song Tommy. Great use of realtracks and a fine mix. The vocals sits right where it ought to and sounds fine. The steel background and fills are sweet....but, hey, can you write a commercial country song nowadays and still use steel
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Tom,
I liked your original introduction/explanation...Welcome to the dark-side!
This is a very good write.
The opening is really well done. Opening licks often feel like "they were jut put there because" and don't necessarily fit the song. Yours fits (but I would eliminate the very beginning "big hit" (the cymbal crash, I think) - so the guitar is the focus.
I hesitate to talk about specific lyrics, but I really like this one, so I'm "gonna stick my nose in where it don't belong.."
The word "even" reduces the impact of your (very cool) hook (IMO, of course)...
"I don't know.... If Angels Dance..."
would be stronger. It is a BEAUTIFUL chorus (either way).
The middle lead guitar is as nicely done as the opening.
I'm stickin' my nose in again... (insert all the usual disclaimers...)
The structure is a bit odd.. Verse-Chorus-V-C-solo-C-Bridge-V-C-tag.
I think the song would be more effective going to the bridge right out of the solo and then to the chorus-tag. You might even do the chorus twice. "Going back to the story" in the last verse made my attention wander (And I really like the song!). It is nice information, but I think the song would be better without it...
All that being said... I like it! This is my favorite tommyad song!
Best tommyad write. Best tommyad vocal. Excellent mix. Excellent harmonies.
Well done...
floyd
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Floyd made some great points I would have never thought of but all in all this was a very good song and production.
Later,
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Steve, You are correct about the doghouse, but I have a few more in the pipeline that will put me back in there. Thanks
Scott, Thanks for the listen and comments.
Bud, You're right. Not enough steel today. I get obsessed with it. Thanks for listen and comments.
Floyd, This is exactly why I post these songs. Great observations!! I think you're on the mark on all of it. I'll redo the entire song and repost it. Thanks so much for taking
the time to help. It will make this write much better.
Danny, Thanks for listening and commenting. Tom
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This is one great country song and I loved it. The mix was spot on IMHO. Your vocal was strong and that chorus is simply fantastic. I also think that this is your best to date!
Although Floyd made some good points I think that this version is super and I wouldn’t change a thing.
Me, it's not about how many times you fail, it's about how many times you get back up.
Cop, that's not how field sobriety tests work.
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very strong lyrics and outstanding lyrics in the chorus!
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Hey Tommy,
Just great! You got the voice for it.
Dean Clark (aka Aleck Rand)
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Really nice song and sound Tommy. For me, I would have liked a little more reverb on the vocals. I like love song vocals a little more dreamy sounding. Just my taste. You do great work on your productions.
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Hi Tommy,
Try as I might, I just can't shake the word "Wow" from my head. This is so very very good.
When I read the title, I tried to work out what kind of song could be written around "If Angels Dance". I didn't anticipate what you came up with. It's incredibly clever. To quote floyd "This is a very good write."
What a great song!
All the best,
Noel
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Nice job I just started playing around with recording and have a lot to learn, this is amazing I am hoping to get to this level one day.
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Cant believe I havent posted on this - I've listened to it a few times.
I'm a sucker for a Love Song and this is one of the best.
The middle guit solo just fits right - I had to check your post to see if you had played it or if it was that chap, Brent.
The Outro is a bit wonky, sounds like two different Outros one on top of the other but thats a minor crit. (Still not convinced that PG has put enough thought / effort into real sounding Endings.)
Loved it, Tommy
cheers
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Hi Again, Tommy...
Very nice, indeed! We really like this one a bunch. Like the deep reverb on the lead guitar. When used properly, that extra reverb can really fill out a track. This a winner in our book! Wishing you a very Merry Christmas!
Al & Di
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Nice song ... nice mix... great lyric
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