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Here's a little song for the season...  This is called Snow. All BIAB RTs - recorded and mixed in GarageBand. Thanks for listening! Bob
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Hey Bob,
I kind of miss snow. We rarely get it down here except for a dusting once in a blue moon.
Nice sound.
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Bob - I liked your imagery in this one.
"Snow, turns the birds to the south
Turns your words into clouds..."
That was nicely phrased. - floyd
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Bob - I liked your imagery in this one.
"Snow, turns the birds to the south
Turns your words into clouds..."
That was nicely phrased. - floyd
Ditto! Great line. Later,
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Hey Josie, Thanks. I'd go for that dusting... Bob
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Floyd,
Thanks - much appreciated.
Bob
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Danny,
Appreciate the listen and kind words.
Bob
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Hello, "rsdean"...
First of all, I have a "thing" for songs composed in 3/4 time, especially at slow tempos. It lends a graceful air, and suggests also (to me, at least) a feeling of circularity, of things returning to their source.
Secondly, I agree with the comments made concerning the imagery conjured up by the lyrics. What you observe about the snow -- "Sinking like a stone / covering his footprints as he makes his way home"..."Turns the birds to the south / turning words into clouds" -- seems mundane at first, until you realize that not all of us pay that kind of attention to such common sights, so the effect is like seeing them for the first time.
I didn't truly appreciate poetry until I started looking into song lyrics more closely. The words in this song blended with the music make it a beautifully bittersweet listening experience.
This is a fine, twilight kind of song.
bluage
P.S. The simplicity and the color scheme of your website is very appealing.
"Music is what feelings sound like."-- borrowed from a Cakewalk Music Creator forum member, "Mamabear".
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Lovely song, it makes snowfall sound nice, as when we were kids.
In my neck of the woods it causes chaos with just an inch or two as it is always described "as the wrong kind of snow"
I much prefer your imagery
enjoyed
Alyn
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Hi Bob,
This is beautiful. The images that you create with these lyrics are so very real, so very believable. As I journeyed through your song, it was almost like I could reach out and touch every picture you painted. The descending bass line in the chorus was a great touch of arrangement.
This is my new Robert Dean favourite.
All the best,
Noel
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bluage,
Thanks for the kind words and feedback. Also, for the compliment on the website.
Bob
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Alyn, I prefer this image of snow as well...Living in NY, we get our fare share. Thanks for your kind words. Bob
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Noel,
Thank you - I really appreciate that!
Bob
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Very nice job.... Your strength is certainly in crafting lyrics. The secret to good lyric, aside from the rewriting and reducing to the basic essence, is to look at things that everyone else just "sees" and ignores.....
I really like the chorus:
Snow, it keeps coming down Lays a blanket on the ground
Without making a sound Snow, turns the birds to the south
Turns your words into clouds As the breath leaves your mouth
And the silence gets loud
I catch a Tom Waits sort of vibe when you sing.... also mixed with some Dylan....
The solo needs something in there besides the guitar strumming....mandolin or a simple acoustic picking a gentle melody.
I'd rework the ending.... let it resolve to the root. It's just kinda hanging in the air the way it is now.
You can find my music at: www.herbhartley.comAdd nothing that adds nothing to the music. You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both. The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.
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Herb,
Thanks. Appreciate the listen and review. I was on the fence about the break and the ending, but decided to leave as is. I see your point though.
Thanks again - always good to get different points of view.
Bob
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Hi, Robert !
I am a little late,due to
computer problems and my
barbershop singing group !:))
Bob, I think this is a vercy nice tune
that could have done well with
some harmony voices too added here
and there ? :))
Cheers
Dani from Winterland
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Dani,
Thanks - appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment.
Bob
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Beautiful song. Loved the lyrics. Can totally relate as we get the odd dusting up here in Northern Alberta :-)
Thanks for sharing..
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Scott,
LOL! Thanks very much.
Bob
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Great production Bob. I enjoyed it. can't say we see too much of a dusting of any snow where I live but I do love to go skiing so know the feeling
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