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https://soundcloud.com/user-564042721/its-better-that-wayOk, let me in here. This style was a very snug fit with the song. The only changes I made were to take out the background fiddle & add a shaker percussion loop. I even use the "Longing" style name in the lyrics! Style is _LONGING.STY (Longing Ambient Songwriter Folk) RealTracks in style: 1929:Synth, Bass, EuroDance VerseBass Ev 120 RealTracks in style: 1948:Mandolin, Rhythm PopUpliftingAndy Ev16 120 RealTracks in style: ~522:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 120 RealTracks in style: 2541:Pedal Steel, Background ModernPopCountry Ev 110 RealTracks in style: 1943:Synth, Rhythm, EuroDance Strings Ev 120 RealDrums in style: NashvilleEven8^6-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, HiHat Open Its Better That Way ( Robert Cordrey, Aug.2016) You arrive looking back to that far bright star big-eyed with wonder your father tells you where you are then you`re swept down a river your mother`s prayers can`t make straight through a land of grace and danger the hidden angels of your fate and its strange not knowing this hanging by a thread of dreams and faith and longing from the precipice of breath could lead you to say its better that way will you live looking forward to that far bright star send your message in a bottle I`ll find where you are I would write your story to the future a chain of words no harm could break but I`ll let you go on that river with a note to stay awake and its strange not knowing this hanging by a thread of dreams and faith and longing from the precipice of breath could lead you to say its better that way you arrive looking back to that far bright star
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Robert,
This style has such a wonderful, relaxing feel. You've done it justice with you presentation.
I enjoyed listening.
Regards,
Noel
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Hi Robert. The start of this song is just mesmerizing.
Loved it.
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Hi Robert, I like what I hear. Nice choices in arranging this style/this song.
Beautifull vocal.
Rob de Klerk, Dutch singer-songwriter https://www.robdeklerk.nlBiab 2023, Cakewalk, N.I. Komplete 14, Win 10,64, Ozone 9 elements suite, Presonus studio 24c
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Noel - The combination of those EuroDance strings with pedal steel give it that nice laid back feel,I think. Glad you enjoyed!
Josie - Thank you for that comment ...I did feel I got the beginning right.
Rob -I appreciate the listen. Worked hard on the vocal, so thanks for that.
Robert
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Robert,
I really enjoyed your song. I thought the lyrics were well written and loved the uneven verse structure.
The style choice and additional RTs were also a perfect fit for your song.
Overall congratulations on a worthy competition entry.
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Nice song. I thought you did good arranging in the way you staggered the instruments in the intro to add interest and movement.
I've had good results with some songs alternating between the fiddle and pedal steel, wondered how it would have sounded in your song especially early in the song when the PSG first comes in.
I enjoyed this and think you did a solid job all around.
Charlie
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I liked this a lot, Robert. Thanks for sharing in the contest.
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Receder - Many thanks for that!
Charlie - Thanks for your comments- glad you enjoyed the song.
I liked the way the P.Steel fit with the first verse so didn`t look further... there probably is a fiddle track that would work there too.
John - Thanks for listening...I have another entry in the pipe!
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