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#400507 - 03/13/17 07:17 PM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: HearToLearn]
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Originally Posted By: HearToLearn
I was trying to think of a way to say this, so PLEASE hear me out. I know this song was well written because I felt sorry for YOU!

I literally thought to myself "How awful to have that happen to such a great guy!"

Then I remembered this was just a song!

*If this is from personal experience, just let me believe it's "just a song" wink

Great job!

LOL, no way I'll ever 'fess up to personal experience or not - To be clear, you can say these kind of things any way you choose and I'll gladly hear you out...

I appreciate your thoughtful comments.

Charlie
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#400510 - 03/13/17 07:22 PM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Torrey Bliss]
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Originally Posted By: Al-David
Hi Charlie,

We loved it! Although it's traditional country, it still has an element of a more contemporary song. That's a good combination, in our opinion. As has been said previously ... great backing tracks! Superb in every way! Wish we heard from you more often!

Alan & Di


So glad to see you guys hanging around with us here on the forum again and thanks for taking time to take this one for a spin.

Originally Posted By: tommyad
Charlie, This is without a doubt your best vocal. Very comfortable and confident. A good write that is very well produced. Nice going. Tom


Thanks Tom. Glad to see you're feeling better. I appreciate your comments.

Originally Posted By: Guitarhacker
Charlie... this is good. Reminds me of PPL and that's a good thing.

Nice work. Good job on the song and the vocals.



Thanks for the PPL comparison. They were the bar I set for myself very early in my songwriting. Just being close feels good.

Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Everything sounds really good Charlie! Such an smooth flowing backing track with a great vocal! Thanks,Torrey


Torrey, thanks for listening.
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#400543 - 03/14/17 12:13 AM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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Hello, Charlie

You have a very good voice.
The chord progression is unique and new.
This is a contemporary Country.
As Noel said, you sound really comfortable singing against the great backing track.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi

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#400556 - 03/14/17 02:21 AM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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Charlie,
You put together a nice band to back you on this excellent song.
Some really nice musical moments and very well performed.

Peter

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#400580 - 03/14/17 05:26 AM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: PeterF]
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Originally Posted By: animarorecords
Hello, Charlie

You have a very good voice.
The chord progression is unique and new.
This is a contemporary Country.
As Noel said, you sound really comfortable singing against the great backing track.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi


Thanks for your gracious comments. I've always liked how that chord progression flows on uptempo songs. It doesn't work so well in ballads I think.

Regarding my vocals, I ended up using an old Nady RM-2 Ribbon mic and it seemed to have a better tone than the first mic I used that made my voice sound thin. Must have helped a bit this time.

Thanks for listening and taking time to comment.
Originally Posted By: PeterF
Charlie,
You put together a nice band to back you on this excellent song.
Some really nice musical moments and very well performed.

Peter


Thanks Peter. This was a fun project. It all came together rather quickly.


Edited by Charlie Fogle (03/14/17 05:27 AM)
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#400652 - 03/14/17 11:54 AM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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Charlie,

This is a terrific listen. A solid country rock write with nice imagery and emotion (sad as it might be). (Ralph has a way of "hitting the nail on the head" in his concepts - and a sweetheart of a guy). The repeat of "every time" works really well (every time!).

A really nice collection of instruments - all used at appropriate times - for a full, smooth sound. Excellent mix. There are elements of a "modern sound", but overall, for me, harkens back to the best of the beginnings of country rock - Flying Burrito Brothers, Poco, Graham Parsons, early Eagles...

As others have noted, your vocal on this is excellent... really "in the pocket" for the sound...

Nice.

floyd
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#400730 - 03/14/17 05:56 PM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
Greg Johnson Offline
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Great song Charlie!! This is so easy to listen to. Very engaging lyric, and such a pleasant, slightly retro vibe (little Grateful Dead). Your vocal is so nice. I'm conflicted about the stops (maybe too many in succession) but everything else absolutely knocks me out. Awesome!! Take care. Greg

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#400738 - 03/14/17 06:38 PM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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The song has been around awhile but you've really put some energy into the performance and made the song sound new to me. Personally I think this is your best performance to date.
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#400765 - 03/15/17 04:49 AM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Jim Fogle]
Charlie Fogle Offline
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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Charlie,

This is a terrific listen. A solid country rock write with nice imagery and emotion (sad as it might be). (Ralph has a way of "hitting the nail on the head" in his concepts - and a sweetheart of a guy). The repeat of "every time" works really well (every time!).

A really nice collection of instruments - all used at appropriate times - for a full, smooth sound. Excellent mix. There are elements of a "modern sound", but overall, for me, harkens back to the best of the beginnings of country rock - Flying Burrito Brothers, Poco, Graham Parsons, early Eagles...

As others have noted, your vocal on this is excellent... really "in the pocket" for the sound...

Nice.

floyd

Thanks for listening Floyd. Yea, I spent some time watching Mr. Ralph's YouTube lecture. It seems he takes the #1 hits from Pop and Country each year and analyzes them to determine what common elements they share. It was really worth the time. This song encompassed several of his 'sure hit' elements so I thought I'd float it out on the forum. I'm blaming my ribbon mic for my vocals having tone this time....

And for "in the pocket", I'm pleased that you and several others have picked up the vibe this song falls into the Country Rock genre. It's my favorite place to be.


Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Great song Charlie!! This is so easy to listen to. Very engaging lyric, and such a pleasant, slightly retro vibe (little Grateful Dead). Your vocal is so nice. I'm conflicted about the stops (maybe too many in succession) but everything else absolutely knocks me out. Awesome!! Take care. Greg


Hi Greg. Thanks for listening and taken time to comment. The stops were one area of the song I wasn't completely satisfied with in the end. I would have preferred that each would be a bit more abrupt and have more pop to them. I didn't spend a lot of time trying to correct that, but the time I did spend never yielded any satisfaction. The succession of five was the best sounding out of all that I tried. I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the song. I always appreciate your analysis and suggestions.

Originally Posted By: Jim Fogle
The song has been around awhile but you've really put some energy into the performance and made the song sound new to me. Personally I think this is your best performance to date.


Thanks Jim. This is a personal favorite of mine as well. Maybe it caused me to put a bit more into my performance. I've always liked the song but felt it could be improved on, especially the lyrics. The Ralph Murphy video helped motivate the lyrics rewrite. Glad you enjoyed it.


Edited by Charlie Fogle (03/15/17 04:51 AM)
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#400869 - 03/15/17 11:10 AM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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Love the feel of this one,

backing tracks sound really good

good write, nice flow

Enjoyed my listen Charlie

Kenny

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#400940 - 03/15/17 04:53 PM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: 44kfl]
Charlie Fogle Offline
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Originally Posted By: 44kfl
Love the feel of this one,

backing tracks sound really good

good write, nice flow

Enjoyed my listen Charlie

Kenny


I'm glad you enjoyed it Kenny. Thanks for stopping by.

Charlie
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#401243 - 03/17/17 11:09 AM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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Really great song Charlie.

Excellent country vibe, great lyrics. This is one my favorites of yours.
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#401310 - 03/17/17 05:18 PM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: David Snyder]
Charlie Fogle Offline
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Originally Posted By: David Snyder
Really great song Charlie.

Excellent country vibe, great lyrics. This is one my favorites of yours.


Thanks David. Glad you stopped by. Try to keep Little Jimmie Waits on track and don't let him wander too close to the bus station or he'll be moving on.

Charlie
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#401699 - 03/20/17 07:16 AM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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Excellent tune Charlie. Vocal was super. Loved the violin.
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#401800 - 03/20/17 02:45 PM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Scott C]
Charlie Fogle Offline
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Originally Posted By: Scott C
Excellent tune Charlie. Vocal was super. Loved the violin.



Thanks Scott. I appreciate the comments.
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#403772 - 03/26/17 02:46 PM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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Hi, there, "Charlie Fogle"...

I think the term "country" in "country music" is a misnomer. Let's put the word "truth" in front of the word "music", and then we'll be closer to describing what we're getting when we listen to it...

Mr. Fogle, from the opening verse of "Every Time" and all the way through to the end, a series of images connected to some universally experienced feelings rolls right on by our ears like a big, battered and road-dusted rig carrying a heavy cargo of painful memories. And if I didn't know the song was a product of BIAB, I'd ask you who your "sidemen" were. Your chord changes reflect the bitter taste of your lyrics.

Your singing voice has that quality of long-accepted sadness that sounds quite authentic to me, which makes it all the more easier to understand why forum member “HearToLearn” commented:

“I literally thought to myself, ‘How awful to have that happen to such a great guy! Then I remembered this was just a song!”

I’m hearin’ him loud n’ clear! “Every Time” is like a monologue of wistful recollections set to music.

I’d put another quarter in that jukebox, anytime…

LOREN (a.k.a. “bluage”)
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#403775 - 03/26/17 02:53 PM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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Hi, Charlie !:))


Like this tune and the
way you treat it !:))
Great Country with a
big C

Can see you performing this
at some Honky Tonk with
all people dancing !

Cheers
Dani

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#403786 - 03/26/17 03:39 PM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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Great, Charlie! This is easily my favorite of yours. Love the backing, and your vocals fit it well. Good job on the lyrics as well. Really enjoyed it!

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#403878 - 03/27/17 05:36 AM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Steve Young]
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Originally Posted By: bluage
Hi, there, "Charlie Fogle"...

I think the term "country" in "country music" is a misnomer. Let's put the word "truth" in front of the word "music", and then we'll be closer to describing what we're getting when we listen to it...

Mr. Fogle, from the opening verse of "Every Time" and all the way through to the end, a series of images connected to some universally experienced feelings rolls right on by our ears like a big, battered and road-dusted rig carrying a heavy cargo of painful memories. And if I didn't know the song was a product of BIAB, I'd ask you who your "sidemen" were. Your chord changes reflect the bitter taste of your lyrics.

Your singing voice has that quality of long-accepted sadness that sounds quite authentic to me, which makes it all the more easier to understand why forum member “HearToLearn” commented:

“I literally thought to myself, ‘How awful to have that happen to such a great guy! Then I remembered this was just a song!”

I’m hearin’ him loud n’ clear! “Every Time” is like a monologue of wistful recollections set to music.

I’d put another quarter in that jukebox, anytime…

LOREN (a.k.a. “bluage”)


Loren, thank you for such a gratifying and encouraging post. I can't think of anything that can put a bigger smile on my face today than your comments. I truly appreciate it.

Charlie

Originally Posted By: dani48
Hi, Charlie !:))


Like this tune and the
way you treat it !:))
Great Country with a
big C

Can see you performing this
at some Honky Tonk with
all people dancing !

Cheers
Dani


Thanks Dani. I'd just hope that honky tonk is beach front somewhere so you can come join us when you're done surfing...


Originally Posted By: Steve Young
Great, Charlie! This is easily my favorite of yours. Love the backing, and your vocals fit it well. Good job on the lyrics as well. Really enjoyed it!

Steve


Thanks for stopping by for a listen and taking time to comment. Glad you enjoyed it.

Charlie
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#403880 - 03/27/17 05:48 AM [User Showcase] Re: Every Time [Re: Charlie Fogle]
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Love this one! Nice vocal, and the "every time" refrain is very effective. Enjoyed the listen!
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