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#454262 - 01/28/18 03:12 PM [User Showcase] Something's Wrong
RichMac Offline
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Ever wake in the morning with a vague feeling something's wrong?

https://soundcloud.com/tuigorge/somethings-wrong

Something's Wrong

RD - Jazz Funk Pop
Bass - RT 7429 Acoustic held
Synth - RT 2275 Disco
Piano - RT 2762 Brit pop
Piano - RT 2495 Electric held
Fiddle - RT 618 Allis


| E | A | F#m7 | B7


| E Woke up this | C#m morning | F#m7 feeling somethings | B7 wrong

| E Skys are grey but | C#m that's ok be | F#m7 sunny before | B7 long

We | E kissed and cuddled | C#m morning friends | F#m7 kept each other | B7 warm

| E Still the feeling | A follows me | E causing this a | B7 larm

| E | A | F#m7 | B7


| E It's not me and | C#m it's not you | F#m7 it's not where we | B7 live

| E Somethings displaced | C#m somewhere and | F#m7 somethings got to | B7 give

| E Could it be the | C#m climate or sad | F#m7 stories in the | B7 news

Or | E something hidden | A in the past | E givin me the | B7 blues

| E | A | F#m7 | B7


Theres a | E ghost walking | C#m on my grave | F#m7 I'm not even | B7 in it

The | E search for reasons | C#m seems so strange I | F#m7 just can't be | B7 gin it

| E Maybe the re | C#m ciever is | F#m7 tuned a touch too | B7 fine

And the | E feelings I'm re| A ceiving are not | E mine | B7

| E | A | F#m7 | B7


| E Got to push on | C#m got to move | F#m7 got play the | B7 game

| E Got to see the | C#m good things | F#m7 never mind the | B7 blame

There's | E so much light and | C#m so much shade and | F#m7 so much in be | B7 tween

And | E life is so much | A better now | E than it's ever | B7 been

| E | A | F#m7 | B7


| E The morning grows | C#m cloud comes in we | F#m7 light the | B7 fire

| E Warm and cozy | C#m write a song and | F#m7 aim for something | B7 higher

| E Now we're under | C#m way and there's | F#m7 nothing more to | B7 say

Except good - | E day | A | E | A | E | A | E ||

Good day.
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#454267 - 01/28/18 03:34 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: RichMac]
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"There's a ghost walking on my grave I'm not even in it"

Now, there's a line! Nice

Enjoyed that, Richard. A sensitive write... you, poet, you!

Nice BAND. Good mix. Nice vocal.

fj
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#454268 - 01/28/18 03:39 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: floyd jane]
RichMac Offline
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Thanks Floyd.

Nice comments.
Made my day.

Cheers.
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#454271 - 01/28/18 03:42 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: RichMac]
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Hi Rich,

I agree with Floyd - this is a really nice song and performance. And yeah, that line he pointed out is stellar!

Alan
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#454272 - 01/28/18 03:44 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: RichMac]
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Hi Rich,

I agree with Floyd - this is a really nice song and performance. And yeah, that line he pointed out is stellar!

Alan
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#454278 - 01/28/18 03:58 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: RichMac]
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"There's a ghost walking on my grave I'm not even in it"

Now, there's a line! Nice (a Floyd quote)

I was thinking exactly the same thing! Rich, you have some lyrics here to think about! Good job! Thanks, Torrey
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#454326 - 01/29/18 12:19 AM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: Al-David]
RichMac Offline
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Thanks for the listen Alan.
Your comments are much appreciated.
Cheers.
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#454335 - 01/29/18 02:38 AM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: RichMac]
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Rich,

I think this is my favorite from you - great lyrics and production - I also really enjoyed the way you sung this. Really good stuff!

Bob
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#454354 - 01/29/18 06:46 AM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: RichMac]
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Really nice work here! I particularly enjoyed the vivid and descriptive lyrics in this one. The whole tune has a really nice sway to it. It is very pretty, and calming. It has a sincere quality that really draws me in.

Thanks so much for sharing smile
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#454383 - 01/29/18 08:10 AM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: RichMac]
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Hey man, I really enjoyed this!

I get this feeling all the time. Thought it was just me.

smile
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#454560 - 01/29/18 09:34 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: RichMac]
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Hello, Rich

It is a simple but nice song using the golden chord progression of pops. (I - VIm - IIm7 -V7)
Perhaps I believe thousands of songs have been composed with this chord progression, but I think that your originality is expressed exactly in this tune and it is wonderful.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

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#454720 - 01/30/18 12:52 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: RichMac]
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Rich,

Your approach is always so... YOU.
Always sparkling and original.
And that subtle touch of drama in your voice, that works great in this song.
So does the fiddle.

Rob and Anne-Marie
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#454777 - 01/30/18 06:09 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: Torrey Bliss]
RichMac Offline
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Hi Torrey.

Thanks for the comments.
It's surprising what pops into one's head.

Cheers.
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#455807 - 02/05/18 12:26 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: floyd jane]
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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
"There's a ghost walking on my grave I'm not even in it"

Now, there's a line! Nice

Enjoyed that, Richard. A sensitive write... you, poet, you!

Nice BAND. Good mix. Nice vocal.

fj


floyd expressed it so well. And yeah "there's a line!"

This is a fine write, arrangement mix and vocal performance.

There's a lot to like here...and we did.

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#455810 - 02/05/18 12:40 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: RichMac]
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The feeling I get from your songs Rich is that you are a poet the loves to put them to music! Your lyrics are fantastic!

Great mix with a strong vocal.

I really enjoyed this.
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#455819 - 02/05/18 12:57 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: MarioD]
RichMac Offline
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Thanks Mario.

Fantastic comments.
Made my morning.
Now I better go and do some jobs.

Cheers.
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#456052 - 02/06/18 03:37 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: RichMac]
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Artfully evokes a familiar melancholy mood. Well written and performed with some jewels lines.

Much enjoyed!

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#456116 - 02/06/18 10:47 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: rsdean]
RichMac Offline
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Hi Bob.

Sorry Iv'e got out of step up my replies.
Had a difficult week.
Thanks for your encouraging comments.
I'm slowly getting more confident with the productions.

Cheers.
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#456117 - 02/06/18 10:54 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: Deryk - PG Music]
RichMac Offline
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Hi Deryk,

I'm glad you like the lyrics.
It's a bit special when staff comment.
You must see & hear so many songs.
Glad you feel it's sincere also.
It is about real feelings.

Cheers.
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#456118 - 02/06/18 10:56 PM [User Showcase] Re: Something's Wrong [Re: David Snyder]
RichMac Offline
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Hi David dude.

Hope you don't feel this way too often.

Cheers.
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