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Rob4580 #467906 04/18/18 10:36 AM
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Originally Posted By: Rob4580


Your work always stands out Floyd. Great song. Rob


Appreciate that, Rob...

tommyad #468020 04/19/18 03:13 AM
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Originally Posted By: tommyad
There are certainly no mistakes in this one. The sum total of all your talents is on full display. Arrangement, vocal, playing, production and editing chops are at 100% full power. And of course none of that means anything without the song. This is songwriting at a level that makes you sit up a little straighter and really pay attention. Beautifully executed in every regard. It has gotten to the point where it’s a sure bet when your latest song pops up on this forum. You surely know what you’re doing, Tom


Tom - I really appreciate such nice comments - especially from you, someone at the top of their game...

Thanks!

floyd jane #468120 04/19/18 07:34 PM
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Floyd, you are SO good at story telling in song. This is just really great, catchy, great production quality and performances. A little Jimmy Buffet (well, maybe a lot Jimmy Buffet). Definite keeper, kudos, well done!

animarorecords #468253 04/20/18 02:53 PM
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Originally Posted By: animarorecords
Hello, floyd

It's a very catchy sound again.
The combination of bass drums and rim shots throughout the song is very comfortable.
Your productions are very stable. Always at a high level, they will not fall below that.
Your vocal and lead guitar are also very nice as usual.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi


Shigeki Adachi - glad you enjoyed this. Thanks.

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Originally Posted By: rayc
No nits to pick: ace writing, performing, mixing etc.


Thanks, ray.


Originally Posted By: Deryk - PG Music
You did an unreal job with this one, Floyd! A big stand out to me here is how vivid the lyricism is. It really does a great job in painting a picture, and really makes the listener feel connected - well, this listener at least! That aside, your vocals are full of charisma and that chorus is excellent. It showcases a very proper songwriting ability.

Great work, and thanks for sharing smile


Deryk - I really appreciate that...

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Originally Posted By: Ember - PG Music
Wow. Just, wow. This song is so personal and really says a lot. I like the choices you've made for this song. It has a bit of that sorrowful nostalgia, but it also has a bit of this upbeat sound to it at the same time. I feel that works really well considering that they "weren't mistakes at all".

Love it!


Ember - Thank you. I really appreciate that nice review...

dcuny #468541 04/23/18 04:09 AM
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Originally Posted By: dcuny
I've been reminding myself to use more alliteration in my own lyrics, and then I hear it done excellently here.

Your verses are always great, but the way the chorus wraps everything up in bow and tugs at the heart knocks me out. As PeterF says, a "songwriting class".

And a great arrangement to boot! Nice solo and rhythm guitar parts.

As usual, good music done right. smile


Thanks, David. I've been considering doing a post in the Songwriting forum about using alliteration. It is a valuable tool that only a handful of songwriters have in their arsenal...

floyd jane #468548 04/23/18 04:22 AM
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This is still really really good. grin


Regards,


L

floyd jane #468727 04/24/18 04:21 AM
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Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Mine would require an opus...until I met Janice.

Is there any subject one could bounce off you for which you could not create a great lyric?

Other than the write what stood out for us were the, as always, fine vocals and the piano...man, it sounds like you and the player sat down and worked out the arrangement.

As Josie said, “personal and universal plus romance...” Yeah!

J&B


Thanks, y'all!

floyd jane #469023 04/24/18 05:49 PM
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Hi Floyd.

Nice and relaxed.
Like the Jimmy Buffet I used to listen to at sea.
Enjoy the more personal aspect of the song and
"that was just silly".

Cheers.

Steve Young #469130 04/25/18 05:59 AM
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Originally Posted By: Steve Young
Wow, this is good! I've been out for a couple months (again)! Been working way too many hours. Fell at work and hurt my back the other day, so I've got some down time for a few days while recovering. Getting caught up on some of the great tunes on the forum.

Every time I hear a new song of yours, I think it's my new favorite. They're all good. This one is especially good. Great write. Great job on the vocals. Great job on the production. Other than all these harsh criticisms, I think this is really good!

Steve


Steve - Coming from you, that means a lot - you knock me out with every song you post... Thanks.

Phil Leith #469325 04/25/18 05:12 PM
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Originally Posted By: eddie1261
Another example of great composition. Story told clearly, supporting parts tasteful.

And you have that voice....


Thanks, eddie. Nice of you to stop by...


Originally Posted By: Phil Leith
Yup, this is right up my alley. Well done.

Got a bit of that Gulf and Western attitude, combined with the humble wisdom that age can bring.

Sounds great!


Appreciate that, Phil...

floyd jane #469442 04/26/18 07:30 AM
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Mr jane, welcome to the forums!

For a first post, you should be REALLY proud of the work you've done.

The writing, production and performance are of a high standard, in my opinion. This makes me excited for your future works. I hope it's not too far between before we hear more of what you have in store?

At any rate, I see you have gotten a few number of comments already. I'm thinking it's because of cleverly starting out your chorus with the word "bump." Brilliant subliminal worked cleverly into the lyrical content.

On a different note, is your wife "Mary" by chance? If she is, I hear she's smokin'. smile


(I am clearly running out of ways to say how great your songs are!)

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Originally Posted By: HearToLearn


At any rate, I see you have gotten a few number of comments already. I'm thinking it's because of cleverly starting out your chorus with the word "bump." Brilliant subliminal worked cleverly into the lyrical content.

On a different note, is your wife "Mary" by chance? If she is, I hear she's smokin'. smile


(I am clearly running out of ways to say how great your songs are!)
Carron, That thar is Funny!!! I’m still laughing, Tom

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Great.
I wish I could get within an inch of your production.
Loved every second of it!

floyd jane #469718 04/27/18 11:42 AM
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Originally Posted By: kybordr
Floyd, you are SO good at story telling in song. This is just really great, catchy, great production quality and performances. A little Jimmy Buffet (well, maybe a lot Jimmy Buffet). Definite keeper, kudos, well done!


Thanks, kybordr... appreciate that you stopped in for a listen...


Originally Posted By: 90 dB
This is still really really good. grin


Regards,


L


And I still really really appreciate you saying so! Thanks, Lefty!



Originally Posted By: RichMac

Hi Floyd.

Nice and relaxed.
Like the Jimmy Buffet I used to listen to at sea.
Enjoy the more personal aspect of the song and
"that was just silly".

Cheers.


Glad you enjoyed it, Richard...

Phil Babylon #469725 04/27/18 11:46 AM
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Originally Posted By: HearToLearn
Mr jane, welcome to the forums!

For a first post, you should be REALLY proud of the work you've done.

The writing, production and performance are of a high standard, in my opinion. This makes me excited for your future works. I hope it's not too far between before we hear more of what you have in store?

At any rate, I see you have gotten a few number of comments already. I'm thinking it's because of cleverly starting out your chorus with the word "bump." Brilliant subliminal worked cleverly into the lyrical content.

On a different note, is your wife "Mary" by chance? If she is, I hear she's smokin'. smile


(I am clearly running out of ways to say how great your songs are!)


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

smile smile smile smile

Thanks for the Welcome! And the Laugh! And the nice sentiment!...



Originally Posted By: tommyad
Originally Posted By: HearToLearn


At any rate, I see you have gotten a few number of comments already. I'm thinking it's because of cleverly starting out your chorus with the word "bump." Brilliant subliminal worked cleverly into the lyrical content.

On a different note, is your wife "Mary" by chance? If she is, I hear she's smokin'. smile


(I am clearly running out of ways to say how great your songs are!)
Carron, That thar is Funny!!! I’m still laughing, Tom


Ditto.



Originally Posted By: Phil Babylon
Great.
I wish I could get within an inch of your production.
Loved every second of it!



Thanks, Phil. I'd say you have a pretty good handle on things yourself...

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