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The sum total of my mistakes is what got me here. A little history... MISTAKES man, i made a mess of montreal i fought and failed in philly denver was a dead end and jersey, hell, that was just silly nearly found that nashville rainbow until it all came undone somehow i landed here in paridise all sand and sea and sun bumps and bruises and bad breaks been bounced along the way but all and all I'd say I've had a ball the sum total of my mistakes is what got me here today so maybe they weren't mistakes at all teri really turned my head man i thought i was in love when that fell through i took up with tammy what the hell was i thinking of broken promises and broken hearts all played out in song figured i was destined for lonely and then... you came along bumps and bruises and bad breaks been bounced along the way but all and all I'd say I've had a ball the sum total of my mistakes is what got me here today so maybe they weren't mistakes at all it's been a great life... no mistake at all RealTracks in song: ~519:Bass, Electric, Pop HalfNotes Ev 120 RealTracks in song: 1262:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm PopShiningHeld Ev 120 RealTracks in song: 698:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm ElecRockDirty Ev 120 (A:muted) RealTracks in song: 646:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm PopRockBritEdgy Ev 120 (A:arp) RealTracks in song: ~522:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 120 RealTracks in song: ~686:Organ, B3, Background Pop Ev 120 RealTracks in song: 2604:Guitar, Electric, Soloist JazzRock8thsJon Ev 120 Royalty free loops vocals, harmonies, additional acoustic and electric gutiar: me Hope you enjoy the journey. (I have). Comments welcome. floyd
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Great writing as usual, Floyd, I love songs that tell a story. I think when you reach a certain age (I'm in my 60s), assuming your current life is good, you can look back at all the stupid stuff you did when you were younger and see how it shaped the person you are now. I'm the same, wouldn't change a thing. Well, maybe one or two things 
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This is really really good. Brevity is soul of wit, so allow my brief comment to suffice for an entire novel.
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Cool song, as usual Floyd! The unfolding story and chorus payoff work really well.
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Floyd,
A cool, catchy summing up of a life. I like the way you punch out the "what got me here today" line and then get reflective again on the last line of the chorus
Beautifully sung, arranged, mixed and all that stuff.
Excellent song!
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Floyd,
Excellent song and arrangement. I love the wistful feel of this - great vocal and the mix is stellar.
Awesome listen...
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Another super song Floyd. Excellent lyric. Super story telling. Excellent backtrack. Guitar was very sweet. Super vocal and harmonies. Instruments and vocals so we so well placed in the mix. You are a master at this. Well done
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Boy can we all relate Floyd!! A great song (again) from you that's just brimming reminders of our own realities of life! Very nice use of pushes and holds in this...you pulled this off in a great fashion with total fluid motion...not easy to do! Great effort again! Thanks, Torry.
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Another dandy, Floyd.
(How did you miss memphis? jus' askin')
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Hi, Floyd !:))
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mistakes taken you here !!!
Oh how I love that voice of yours
It shines on this as on all of
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specially on this one - my
new favourite of your tunes !
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Really nice song; a melodic country hit.
Everything goes well as usual.
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Another winner! This can get us all thinking about our past! I just refuse to tell my kids what I did long ago let alone do a song about it!
Everything, as usual, is perfect.
This is a keeper.
Me, it's not about how many times you fail, it's about how many times you get back up.
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I love this FJ! Terrific hook. Personal and universal plus romance to make the country ladies go ahh. Great vocal, arrangement and mix.
This is my new fav of yours.
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Another great track from the master, what else can I say.
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A songwriting class in a song. Stunning.
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I like this one.
Nice production chops. And just the slightest hint of Jimmy Buffet hiding in there too.
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Floyd, Another Floyd Jane classic, love the guitar solo. And the lyrical theme is incredible, a truly wise song about the path of life itself. Great job. Maybe every day wasn't so bad after all. 
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Quality delivery throughout.
Your phrasing is just so excellent, and the song has a fantastic powerful vibe.
Make no mistake about it.
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Great writing as usual, Floyd, I love songs that tell a story. I think when you reach a certain age (I'm in my 60s), assuming your current life is good, you can look back at all the stupid stuff you did when you were younger and see how it shaped the person you are now. I'm the same, wouldn't change a thing. Well, maybe one or two things Thanks, Dave. This is really really good. Brevity is soul of wit, so allow my brief comment to suffice for an entire novel.
Regards,
Lefty I appreciate the novel, Bob. Thanks! Cool song, as usual Floyd! The unfolding story and chorus payoff work really well.
Cheers
John
Thanks, John.
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Your work always stands out Floyd. Great song. Rob
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There are certainly no mistakes in this one. The sum total of all your talents is on full display. Arrangement, vocal, playing, production and editing chops are at 100% full power. And of course none of that means anything without the song. This is songwriting at a level that makes you sit up a little straighter and really pay attention. Beautifully executed in every regard. It has gotten to the point where it’s a sure bet when your latest song pops up on this forum. You surely know what you’re doing, Tom
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Hello, floyd
It's a very catchy sound again.
The combination of bass drums and rim shots throughout the song is very comfortable.
Your productions are very stable. Always at a high level, they will not fall below that.
Your vocal and lead guitar are also very nice as usual.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
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No nits to pick: ace writing, performing, mixing etc.
Cheers
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You did an unreal job with this one, Floyd! A big stand out to me here is how vivid the lyricism is. It really does a great job in painting a picture, and really makes the listener feel connected - well, this listener at least! That aside, your vocals are full of charisma and that chorus is excellent. It showcases a very proper songwriting ability. Great work, and thanks for sharing
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Wow. Just, wow. This song is so personal and really says a lot. I like the choices you've made for this song. It has a bit of that sorrowful nostalgia, but it also has a bit of this upbeat sound to it at the same time. I feel that works really well considering that they "weren't mistakes at all".
Love it!
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Floyd,
A cool, catchy summing up of a life. I like the way you punch out the "what got me here today" line and then get reflective again on the last line of the chorus
Beautifully sung, arranged, mixed and all that stuff.
Excellent song!
Robert
Appreciate that, Robert.. Floyd,
Excellent song and arrangement. I love the wistful feel of this - great vocal and the mix is stellar.
Awesome listen...
Bob Thanks for the nice comments, Bob...
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Another super song Floyd. Excellent lyric. Super story telling. Excellent backtrack. Guitar was very sweet. Super vocal and harmonies. Instruments and vocals so we so well placed in the mix. You are a master at this. Well done Scott - thanks for those very nice comments... really appreciate it..
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I've been reminding myself to use more alliteration in my own lyrics, and then I hear it done excellently here. Your verses are always great, but the way the chorus wraps everything up in bow and tugs at the heart knocks me out. As PeterF says, a "songwriting class". And a great arrangement to boot! Nice solo and rhythm guitar parts. As usual, good music done right.
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Mine would require an opus...until I met Janice.
Is there any subject one could bounce off you for which you could not create a great lyric?
Other than the write what stood out for us were the, as always, fine vocals and the piano...man, it sounds like you and the player sat down and worked out the arrangement.
As Josie said, “personal and universal plus romance...” Yeah!
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Boy can we all relate Floyd!! A great song (again) from you that's just brimming reminders of our own realities of life! Very nice use of pushes and holds in this...you pulled this off in a great fashion with total fluid motion...not easy to do! Great effort again! Thanks, Torry. Thanks, Torrey...always pleased to hear you enjoyed one of mine - as I enjoy yours as well... Another dandy, Floyd.
(How did you miss memphis? jus' askin') ed - nice of you to stop by... Memphis never really had a "gotta go there to do the music thing" for me - but that was a good question....
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Hi, Floyd !:))
I´d say that we are
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Oh how I love that voice of yours
It shines on this as on all of
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Cheers
Dani
Appreciate that, Dani! Thanks...
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Wow, this is good! I've been out for a couple months (again)! Been working way too many hours. Fell at work and hurt my back the other day, so I've got some down time for a few days while recovering. Getting caught up on some of the great tunes on the forum.
Every time I hear a new song of yours, I think it's my new favorite. They're all good. This one is especially good. Great write. Great job on the vocals. Great job on the production. Other than all these harsh criticisms, I think this is really good!
Steve
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Really nice song; a melodic country hit.
Everything goes well as usual.
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Sergio - glad to see you around! Thanks for having a listen... Another winner! This can get us all thinking about our past! I just refuse to tell my kids what I did long ago let alone do a song about it!
Everything, as usual, is perfect.
This is a keeper. Appreciate that, Mario...
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I love this FJ! Terrific hook. Personal and universal plus romance to make the country ladies go ahh. Great vocal, arrangement and mix.
This is my new fav of yours. Really appreciate those nice comments, Josie. Thanks. Another great track from the master, what else can I say.
Steve Thanks, Steve.
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A songwriting class in a song. Stunning.
Peter What a nice thing to say, Peter! Thanks - a bunch... I like this one.
Nice production chops. And just the slightest hint of Jimmy Buffet hiding in there too. Thanks for stopping in for a listen, Herb...
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Another example of great composition. Story told clearly, supporting parts tasteful.
And you have that voice....
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WHAT A SONG SHOULD BE!!! Catchy, fun, and meaningful...all woven together into a beautiful 4 minute package!! The groove is infectious from the first few bars. The drum part keeps your foot tappin' and the lyrics keep your mind engaged. BEAUTIFUL!! An instant CLASSIC!!! Congrats on this fine work Floyd!! Take care. Greg
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Floyd, Another Floyd Jane classic, love the guitar solo. And the lyrical theme is incredible, a truly wise song about the path of life itself. Great job. Maybe every day wasn't so bad after all. HA! Thanks for that! That solo guitar RT (2604:Guitar, Electric, Soloist JazzRock8thsJon Ev 120) is a GREAT RealTrack - it does different stuff all the time - generates some truly musical leads - sometimes a bit busy, so you have to edit things out to let it breathe, but it has become one of my favorites...
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Yup, this is right up my alley. Well done.
Got a bit of that Gulf and Western attitude, combined with the humble wisdom that age can bring.
Sounds great!
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Quality delivery throughout.
Your phrasing is just so excellent, and the song has a fantastic powerful vibe.
Make no mistake about it. Thanks, Trev... appreciate your continued support...
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Your work always stands out Floyd. Great song. Rob
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There are certainly no mistakes in this one. The sum total of all your talents is on full display. Arrangement, vocal, playing, production and editing chops are at 100% full power. And of course none of that means anything without the song. This is songwriting at a level that makes you sit up a little straighter and really pay attention. Beautifully executed in every regard. It has gotten to the point where it’s a sure bet when your latest song pops up on this forum. You surely know what you’re doing, Tom Tom - I really appreciate such nice comments - especially from you, someone at the top of their game... Thanks!
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Floyd, you are SO good at story telling in song. This is just really great, catchy, great production quality and performances. A little Jimmy Buffet (well, maybe a lot Jimmy Buffet). Definite keeper, kudos, well done!
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Hello, floyd
It's a very catchy sound again.
The combination of bass drums and rim shots throughout the song is very comfortable.
Your productions are very stable. Always at a high level, they will not fall below that.
Your vocal and lead guitar are also very nice as usual.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi Shigeki Adachi - glad you enjoyed this. Thanks.
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No nits to pick: ace writing, performing, mixing etc.
Thanks, ray. You did an unreal job with this one, Floyd! A big stand out to me here is how vivid the lyricism is. It really does a great job in painting a picture, and really makes the listener feel connected - well, this listener at least! That aside, your vocals are full of charisma and that chorus is excellent. It showcases a very proper songwriting ability. Great work, and thanks for sharing Deryk - I really appreciate that...
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Wow. Just, wow. This song is so personal and really says a lot. I like the choices you've made for this song. It has a bit of that sorrowful nostalgia, but it also has a bit of this upbeat sound to it at the same time. I feel that works really well considering that they "weren't mistakes at all".
Love it! Ember - Thank you. I really appreciate that nice review...
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I've been reminding myself to use more alliteration in my own lyrics, and then I hear it done excellently here. Your verses are always great, but the way the chorus wraps everything up in bow and tugs at the heart knocks me out. As PeterF says, a "songwriting class". And a great arrangement to boot! Nice solo and rhythm guitar parts. As usual, good music done right. Thanks, David. I've been considering doing a post in the Songwriting forum about using alliteration. It is a valuable tool that only a handful of songwriters have in their arsenal...
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This is still really really good.  Regards, L
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Mine would require an opus...until I met Janice.
Is there any subject one could bounce off you for which you could not create a great lyric?
Other than the write what stood out for us were the, as always, fine vocals and the piano...man, it sounds like you and the player sat down and worked out the arrangement.
As Josie said, “personal and universal plus romance...” Yeah!
J&B Thanks, y'all!
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Hi Floyd.
Nice and relaxed.
Like the Jimmy Buffet I used to listen to at sea.
Enjoy the more personal aspect of the song and
"that was just silly".
Cheers.
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Wow, this is good! I've been out for a couple months (again)! Been working way too many hours. Fell at work and hurt my back the other day, so I've got some down time for a few days while recovering. Getting caught up on some of the great tunes on the forum.
Every time I hear a new song of yours, I think it's my new favorite. They're all good. This one is especially good. Great write. Great job on the vocals. Great job on the production. Other than all these harsh criticisms, I think this is really good!
Steve
Steve - Coming from you, that means a lot - you knock me out with every song you post... Thanks.
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Another example of great composition. Story told clearly, supporting parts tasteful.
And you have that voice.... Thanks, eddie. Nice of you to stop by... Yup, this is right up my alley. Well done.
Got a bit of that Gulf and Western attitude, combined with the humble wisdom that age can bring.
Sounds great! Appreciate that, Phil...
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Mr jane, welcome to the forums! For a first post, you should be REALLY proud of the work you've done. The writing, production and performance are of a high standard, in my opinion. This makes me excited for your future works. I hope it's not too far between before we hear more of what you have in store? At any rate, I see you have gotten a few number of comments already. I'm thinking it's because of cleverly starting out your chorus with the word "bump." Brilliant subliminal worked cleverly into the lyrical content. On a different note, is your wife "Mary" by chance? If she is, I hear she's smokin'. (I am clearly running out of ways to say how great your songs are!)
Last edited by HearToLearn; 04/26/18 07:33 AM.
Chad (Hope that makes it easier)
TEMPO TANTRUM: What a lead singer has when they can't stay in time.
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At any rate, I see you have gotten a few number of comments already. I'm thinking it's because of cleverly starting out your chorus with the word "bump." Brilliant subliminal worked cleverly into the lyrical content. On a different note, is your wife "Mary" by chance? If she is, I hear she's smokin'. (I am clearly running out of ways to say how great your songs are!) Carron, That thar is Funny!!! I’m still laughing, Tom
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Great.
I wish I could get within an inch of your production.
Loved every second of it!
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Floyd, you are SO good at story telling in song. This is just really great, catchy, great production quality and performances. A little Jimmy Buffet (well, maybe a lot Jimmy Buffet). Definite keeper, kudos, well done! Thanks, kybordr... appreciate that you stopped in for a listen... This is still really really good. Regards, L And I still really really appreciate you saying so! Thanks, Lefty!
Hi Floyd.
Nice and relaxed.
Like the Jimmy Buffet I used to listen to at sea.
Enjoy the more personal aspect of the song and
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Glad you enjoyed it, Richard...
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Mr jane, welcome to the forums! For a first post, you should be REALLY proud of the work you've done. The writing, production and performance are of a high standard, in my opinion. This makes me excited for your future works. I hope it's not too far between before we hear more of what you have in store? At any rate, I see you have gotten a few number of comments already. I'm thinking it's because of cleverly starting out your chorus with the word "bump." Brilliant subliminal worked cleverly into the lyrical content. On a different note, is your wife "Mary" by chance? If she is, I hear she's smokin'. (I am clearly running out of ways to say how great your songs are!) HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Thanks for the Welcome! And the Laugh! And the nice sentiment!... At any rate, I see you have gotten a few number of comments already. I'm thinking it's because of cleverly starting out your chorus with the word "bump." Brilliant subliminal worked cleverly into the lyrical content. On a different note, is your wife "Mary" by chance? If she is, I hear she's smokin'. (I am clearly running out of ways to say how great your songs are!) Carron, That thar is Funny!!! I’m still laughing, Tom Ditto. Great.
I wish I could get within an inch of your production.
Loved every second of it!
Thanks, Phil. I'd say you have a pretty good handle on things yourself...
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