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This is song about people that fell in love and hurt each other in many unintentional ways. They started out as the best of friends, and ended up not being able to work things out in their life, or life that they thought that they should have been able to work things out but never could find true happiness with each other. I was kind of new at writing songs at this point. I created the music with a program called "Band in a Box" , So please be kind in the comment's. Suggestions welcome. Here are the Lyrics and the link.

You Should Have Been Mine

Intro Electric Guitar:

You told me that you loved me,
but I found out that was a lie.
Well you pushed and shoved me,
till you pushed me right out of you
pushed me right out of your life.
Couldn't you see by the hurt look on my face
that my heart was lying on the floor
When I said I promised to love you
I said I'd love you forever more

Solo Electric Guitar

Now your with someone else,
and it really cut's me like a knife
I thought I found a true love,
that would last for the rest of my life
You should have been mine through thick and thin
now we're going our separate ways
you should have been mine all the time
but you just turned me away

long solo electric guitar

all the memories that we made
well you just threw them away
now your with someone else so I'll just look away

you should have been mine till the very end
and someday you'll find that's true
you should have been mine till the end of time
so now I'll just forget you.

Solo

Oh you should have been mine
M,M,M


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Excellent lyric. Super vocal and backtrack.


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Nice tune good lyric.

A few little things - the vocal gets really loud (perhaps a touch of compression) and the guitar solos are mixed a bit far back.

Good work overall.

Peter

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Really nice tune, trapper456 smile I particularly enjoyed the vocal performance. It is full of emotion, and sounds very sincere and heartfelt. I really liked the choice of backing tracks too - it helped breathe life into the whole track.

Very well done- thanks for sharing!


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Hi trapper456, Love the sound of that guitar, very bright sounding. Crunchy guitars too and great vocals. Well done!


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Originally Posted By: PeterF
Nice tune good lyric.

A few little things - the vocal gets really loud (perhaps a touch of compression) and the guitar solos are mixed a bit far back.

Good work overall.

Peter


I agree with Peter on this one. This is a really good song that needs to be remixed IMHO.

You have a strong vocal, great lyrics and backing tracks that would improved with a remix IMHO. Again this is just my opinion and others may not agree.


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