Hi Steve,

You know I'm a big fan of yours. I really like the hook - chorus of this song alot.

But for me, and this is just my two cents, the lyrics could be better with a rewrite especially the second verse. It's not that they are bad just imo not up to your usual writing. The sax I thought was a little busy for the "dreamy" emotion the song was talking about. Kind of a prosody thing going on for me here with the arrangement.

Still good work and you can take my two cents for what they're worth - two cents.