Hi Josie,

Great stuff. See where you're coming from with the Spector comment, but it stands on it's own as a good fun Christmas song!


The only suggestion I have, and it is a minor one and purely my own opinion.


I think if you added the word "please" to the hook, as in:

"Santa santa, santa ...please stop here" it would make the line sing a lot better as you would lose the sibilant alliteration of "Santa Stop..." which sings a little clumsily.

Or even " Santa, santa, santa...Santa please stop here!"

Also, it would reiterate how desperate - not to say polite - our little boy is in wanting Santa to stop!!


Anyway, great job guys!!

Martin


Music is what feelings sound like.