You've got a nice voice, and the song pulled me right in from the start. I love how you started with the chorus. Harmony is a great addition. I like it at the start, although I can see how slowly adding it would help with the build.

I know the song is short, but it starts to drag at the banjo "instrumental" - perhaps it could be cut just a hair there?

I love the little "oohs" that you added in.

I initially mis-heard the word "hiker" as "tiger". Maybe it's just me, since I'm getting over a cold.

Thanks for the links! I spent way too much time going through them the other night. There's some great stuff in there.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?