I need to get two things out of the way...
1-Oh God! This is is how you wrote the song? You are going to kill me!
Your version is SOOO good and SOOOOOOO different than mine.
2-The video addition is REALLY cool! I think seeing the drummer and instruments gave me more of a feeling that it was recorded in a studio. You are lucky you are so photogenic! I will maybe do that when they come out with "Real Singer" in version 53. So, you'll are safe for now.
NOW, I can concentrate a bit more on the song.
Wow! That is a REALLY cool version of your song. That sounds funny to say, but it's true. I'm not sure what it reminds me of...basically a lot of hits. That's what I'm comparing it to; and it seems to fit in just fine. To me, that's saying a lot.
What a great listen! Thanks for sharing this, and allowing us to use your lyrics. That is REALLY cool of you!