Hi occ,

Wow! This is a terrific song. My impression is that you have all the right ingredients in exactly the right mix. There was an occasional lyric that I couldn't quite catch but overall, I really liked the way your lyrics moved and your skillful use of rhyme. This is a well assembled work; my compliments to you.

All the best,
Noel


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