Seeking Lyric Critique - 08/23/12 04:37 AM
I've never written lyrics to a song. Everything I've tried my entire life wound up.."june moon croon spoon tune loon brigadoon"
I may have finally gotten beyond it! (fingers crossed)
I have a melody & will present it to our singer. (She's really good) She nails Whitney Houston & I picture the song as one she might have done. However, I would like some feedback from my forum friends. Please be gentle, this is my first time.
Whenever You’re Next To Me
My heart skips a beat
Whenever you’re next to me
I feel a song
I am in ecstasy
My skies are blue
When I’m with you
My love
‘Time I was lost
Now I am found
You give me hope
And turn me around
You bring me up
You fill my cup
Whenever you’re next to me
(bridge)(no words yet...)
This much is real
I finally feel
I am complete
I feel the earth beneath my feet
I am alive
And truly thrive
Whenever you’re next to me
I may have finally gotten beyond it! (fingers crossed)
I have a melody & will present it to our singer. (She's really good) She nails Whitney Houston & I picture the song as one she might have done. However, I would like some feedback from my forum friends. Please be gentle, this is my first time.
Whenever You’re Next To Me
My heart skips a beat
Whenever you’re next to me
I feel a song
I am in ecstasy
My skies are blue
When I’m with you
My love
‘Time I was lost
Now I am found
You give me hope
And turn me around
You bring me up
You fill my cup
Whenever you’re next to me
(bridge)(no words yet...)
This much is real
I finally feel
I am complete
I feel the earth beneath my feet
I am alive
And truly thrive
Whenever you’re next to me