Ha, I love the lyrics, Dewey. Not sure how the deer would feel about the cleverness.
Thanks Marty
Some of the lines are about a girl, others are about grilling some venison.... the only issue I see is the continuity or disconnect, between the two different things.
Good tune, I just think it needs more work....
Thanks Herb! My intent was to make it sound like a love song but, twisted from guy-gal to hunter-deer. I'll for sure review line by line to make sure it's clear that he is all along talking about hunting a big buck and not sweet on a gal. Na zdrowie!
It's a good lyric but I agree about the girls and grilling meat association.
Vic
Vic, I appreciate your feedback as well!
Dewey,
Man you are a heck of a songwriter! Every tune you post is always high quality work with a catchy and memorable chorus! Love the acoustic driven backing you chose! Great vocals!
Thanks, TB
You are too kind, Torrey! Good stuff to encourage me...bad stuff for inflating my ego!! LOL