Here's my latest song. I've been playin around with the progression for the last month, but just got the lyrics done last week. I got my recording done yesterday... and I'm still listening to the mix for tweaks.
All comments welcome.
Hope you enjoy!

Greg

http://achordmusic.mymusicstream.com/track/seasons-of-your-life

All vocals are me. My Martin Acoustic "Dean" has a couple of brief appearances, at the intro & before the 3rd verse.
All "my" recording & mixing are done in Reaper.

Here are the RealTracks used:

Drums_NashvilleEven16^5
Bass_RT366
Cello_RT1856 Background
Guitar_RT364 Acou Fingerpk
Guitar_RT702 Acou Strum
Guitar_RT1002 Acou 12str Strum
Guitar_RT803 Elec Rhythm
Guitar_RT806 Elec Rhythm
Piano_RT894


©2013 Words & Music: Greg Achord


Seasons Of Your Life


I wish I’d known way back when the things that I know now
It seems that wisdom’s lost on youth they’re just headstrong & oh so proud
Think you’ve got it figured out you must be right ‘cause you can’t be wrong
Oh to be so young and strong

When I was young time moved so slowly at least it seemed that way
So many rules for children that I didn’t want to obey
Looking back I realize that innocence is lost
Growing old it has it’s cost


The seasons of your life pass by there’s no stopping time
Spring turns to summer then the leaves fall from the vine
The winter’s coming quickly now who knows how long it will last
Forget the things that you can’t change hold onto the love
It all goes by so fast


Don’t forget your days of youth the memories should always be there
Filled with love & laughter and the one’s for whom you’ve cared
It’s all just a journey now from the beginning to the end
Chances are not what you planned

(Chorus)

Hi Greg,

I enjoyed this one a great deal. The reflective / philosophical nature of the lyrics was supported very skilfully by the melody and harmony. Great arrangement, too. It sounded fine to me. I don't think too much in the way to tweaking is needed.

All the best,
Noel

Hi Greg,

I absolutely agree with Noel.
And I like the backing oohs.

Guenter

Greg,

I absolutely agree with Guenter.
Who absolutely agreed with Noel, but added the thing about the oohs. +1 to that.
You're on a roll, there, buddy... keep it up!

floyd

Hi Greg
I love the reflective lyrics and the guitar work. Excellent production. Thanks for sharing

Excellent work throughout, Greg! Thanks for sharing.

What they all said. It is, indeed, reflective. Not a similar song but it put me in the same mood that occurs when I listen to Bob Seeger's "Like A Rock." Thanks for sharing.

Noel,
Thanks so much for the listen and the comments. I've decided I have to re-do the intro guitar part as I keep hearing where I muted right before the vocal, when it should ring out.
My wife doesn't think it's big deal,... but it's drivin' me crazy.

Guenter,
Thank you for agreeing with Noel and for noticing the Ooo's. I think that's two in a row now.

Floyd,
Of course, thank you for agreeing with those who were in agreement on what to agree on!

jo,
Your welcome and thanks for listening.

Don,
Thank you too.

Bud,
Thank you for the comments. It makes me happy that my song can affect your mood!

Thank you all again,

Greg

It's all been said, all I'll add is that you hit a homerun with this song!

Later,

Agreed. Enjoyed it Greg.

Very nice Greg. Song, production, everything works.


Regards,


Bob

I always enjoy your songs Greg, and this one is no exception. You really manage to achieve clarity and cohesion in your mixes. We must have grown up listening to the same music because your songs sit easy on my ears

Very nice work, great lyrics and music production. Love the harmonies and guitar work! Thanks for sharing!

Danny,
Thank you so much... It's good to park one occasionally!

Thank you Josie.

Bob,
Thanks for the comments.

Pat,
Thank you for the kind words, and we probably did. I was born in 1961.

Robert,
Thanks so much for listening and your comments.


Thanks you all again, I appreciate it!

Greg