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Posted By: rsdean Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 01:40 AM
Hi All,

Here's something new from me and Josie (Sundance). This is called Come Across The River Border.

All BIAB/RTs - Mixed in GarageBand.

We hope you enjoy it. Thanks for listening!

Bob
Posted By: Charlie Fogle Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 03:38 AM
I did enjoy your song. Good job. Really enjoyed your lead vocal and harmony arrangement.

Regards,

Charlie
Posted By: gibson Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 06:11 AM
Rob and Josie,

bongos YEH lovely touch!!
AND then backing vox "cross the river border" harmonies BEAUTIFUL!

Nice to hear you 2 again.

Alyn
Posted By: dani48 Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 08:12 AM
Hi,Bob and Josie !

A very nice tune, so beautifully
performed ! I loved the harmony parts !
What a good and nice arrangement too !!:))

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: Scott C Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 11:25 AM
Beautiful song. Excellent singing and harmonies were very tasteful.. Heartfelt lyrics
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 11:39 AM
Charlie,

Thanks - much appreciated.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 11:40 AM
Alyn,

Thanks - we appreciate that! Yes, Josie has a magical way with those harmonies. smile

Bob
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 12:50 PM
"Is it dog-eared and battered
It's not torn beyond repair
One more journey on the water
Don't let your heart despair
I'll be waiting for you there"

What a chorus! That one will stick with you, indeed. Great vocals and a really cool supportive arrangement. The percussion is perfect. The ethereal sound of the harmonies really fit with the entire vibe. Great job all the way around!!
Posted By: JoanneCooper Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 01:27 PM
Wow wow wow!! Bob and Josie. That is just awesome. Especially loved the harmonies but the lyrics and the production are also excellent. So nice to hear you two back together again.
Posted By: Guitarhacker Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 03:18 PM
cool song..... I like it


You have a very cool style to your writing and singing. I'm a fan.

Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 04:11 PM
Dani,

Thank you so much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 04:12 PM
Scott,

Thanks for listening and the kind words.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 09:42 PM
Janice / Bud,

Thanks very much - we're so glad you liked it.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 09:43 PM
JosieC,

That's so nice of you - thanks for listening and commenting. We appreciate that!

Bob
Posted By: RichMac Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 09:57 PM
Beautiful lyrics! Great backing. Love the bass and percussion. And the voices. Listened to this one twice! Cheers.
Posted By: tommyad Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 10:25 PM
Bob, great poetic lyrics-check. Nice melody and well sung-check check. Very nice Josie part singing come across .... Big check. I liked it very much and always look forward to what you've cooked up. This is a good un . Tom
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/07/14 11:45 PM
Herb,

Much appreciated - thanks!

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/08/14 01:28 AM
Rich,

Thanks - we appreciate you taking the time to listen and post.

Bob
Posted By: Sundance Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/08/14 02:41 AM
I hope you all don't mind instead of responding to each of you who've commented since Bob has already done that and it's been a long work day for me that I just type this to thank you all very much for your comments. I appreciate all of you very much.

Bob was so sweet in giving me card blanche with his cool original lyrics and BB file on this song. I just loved the pictures he painted in this. So after a little rearranging of verses tweaking the overall arrangement and then a little rewriting of the chorus, I was really glad he related to the changes and we were on the same page. The harmonies were playing in my head so it was fun to finally hear them with his final vocal which he sang so beautifully. It was also nice to find a mandolin RT that played off the bongos really nice with a just a little editing. It was kept purposely simple instrument wise to stay true to the underlying folk vibe. Bob choosing the ethereal sound when he did the final mix added an air of freshness I thought was a nice touch.

It was a fun collab after not doing one together for a while. We'd been planning on doing a new one for some time.

Oh yeah, no pitch correction, no harmonizers - (not that there's anything wrong with that) - this one - true to the genre - is all us. <grin>

Thank each of you again for all of the positive feedback, Bob and I appreciate it very much.

Josie
Posted By: cubanpete Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/08/14 02:55 AM
Nicely done Bob, very enjoyable all around.

Mike B.
Posted By: floyd jane Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/08/14 02:58 AM
Bob and Josie,

Nice. I really like the song. Bob, one of the things I really like about your lyrics is I don't think I've ever seen (heard) you use a cliché line - they are always so fresh and so original and so packed with images. These flow like the river you are crossing...

The production presents the song perfectly. Good mix.

The vocals are wonderful. Bob, one of your best vocals, I think - a lot of heart. Josie, your harmonies are delightful.

A great listen, guys!

floyd
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/08/14 12:40 PM
Tom,

Thanks - Josie did an incredible job on the harmonies and arrangement. Appreciate the kind words.

Bob
Posted By: olemon Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/08/14 01:48 PM
You ever have that reaction to something, you love it, but you don't quite know how to say that?

What a wonderful display of song-craft. The vocal performances are poetic too.
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/08/14 04:20 PM
Mike,

Thanks so much.

Bob
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/08/14 04:21 PM
Floyd,

Thank you - we really appreciate that!

Bob
Posted By: Sundance Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/09/14 12:41 AM
Thank you Scott what a nice thing to say. We appreciate it.


Josie
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/09/14 03:56 AM
Really nice vibe!! A little Dylan, a little Springsteen, and something else besides. Love the harmonies and the emotion! Keep it up. Take care. Greg
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/10/14 12:38 PM
Greg,

Thanks so much - we're glad you enjoyed it.

Bob
Posted By: F.M.M. Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/10/14 02:16 PM
hi rsdean great job guys love the back ground vocals great lead vocal wish I could sing thanks for sharing eric
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/11/14 12:22 AM
Eric,

Thanks very much for listening and the kind words.

Bob
Posted By: Al-David Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/11/14 12:53 AM
BHi Bob & Josie ...

Wow, we really enjoyed that! The percussion and the harmony vocals were awesome. the rest of it was pretty danged good, too! Thanks for a terrific listen and three minutes of great entertainment!

Al & Di
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/11/14 03:13 PM
Thanks Al, we appreciate that!

Bob
Posted By: RnAM Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/12/14 12:45 PM
Hello Bob,

We like the song, especially the harmonies.
We were wondering about the percussion used in your song, are these also realtracks? If so, which one did you use?

Regards,
R & AM
Posted By: Kemmrich Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/12/14 09:26 PM
I love the percussion in this one. Super excellent recording, the vocals sound great. Nice write and collab for sure. You all make a mighty fine team. Well done. Nice job in selecting the instrumentation, too -- the mando sounded just right for this tune.
Posted By: Sundance Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/13/14 01:53 AM
Rob and Anne-Marie,

Thank you. Bob and I appreciate it.

You'll find the percussion in BossaRockPerc.

Josie
Posted By: rsdean Re: Come Across The River Border - 05/13/14 10:42 AM
Hey Kevin,

Thanks so much for listening and the kind words.

Bob
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