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Posted By: jannesan One - 04/30/17 02:11 PM
One (Audio)



This song has a simple message, kind of a reminder to myself also: small thoughtful words can be of great importance to someone and one true fan is more valuable than number of listeners or likes in the social media.

Thanks again to Miira for her great vocals. At first I thought that this song would not fit her voice, but she managed to sing so well that I don't have to look for another singer.

RealDrums: Rock Modern Sync
RealTracks:
Electric bass: #1849
Acoustic guitar: #793
Electric guitar: #2448 (DI+Amplitube 3), #2444, #795, #796, #2756
String quartet: #2334
Acoustic piano: #1422

Vocals: Miira (audio harmonies used in chorus parts generated by BIAB)

Mixed in Adobe Audition 2017

Video edited in Premiere Pro, animations done in After Effects, chord video naturally exported from BIAB smile

Lyrics:

You don't need a crowd to praise you
when you play guitar
You only need one to tell you
how important you are
you only need one to find you
among brighter stars
to show you your worth
you are her caviar.

Often I look for more favor
but I am too blind to see my own greed
one is enough for the blessing of life
I already have what I really need.

You don't have to live from the likes
of the virtual mind
you only need one whose feedback
is thoughtful and kind
you only need one who follows
the path you've designed
who's honest and real
and won't leave you behind.

[Chorus]

I still cling to the fleeting moments
those time grains in a sandglass,
I should seek the rare things
that won't go with the first tide
dissolve when decades pass
but stay by your side.

Are you the one not afraid of
throwing herself out off the safe ground?
Are you the one who wants to dive deep
knowing there's a pearl waiting to be found?

-
Janne
Posted By: PeterF Re: One - 05/01/17 06:33 AM
Janne

Very nice composition and a clever video clip.
Excellent work all round.

Peter
Posted By: 44kfl Re: One - 05/01/17 11:02 AM
Cool song!

I love where the melody and chords go

some unexpected but beautiful turns

very nice vocals

Super mix, super song

enjoyed the video too

Kenny
Posted By: Scott C Re: One - 05/01/17 11:47 AM
Super song and video. Loved the vocal and backtrack well done
Posted By: Al-David Re: One - 05/01/17 01:14 PM
Hi Miira and Janne,

Very nice song with an interesting chord pattern. Miira has such a lovely voice. And yes, this song is a perfect fit for her voice. Everything works so good in this recording - the backing tracks, the chord pattern, Miira's voice - everything.

We enjoyed this very much. Best to both of you,

Alan & Di
Posted By: Greg Johnson Re: One - 05/02/17 02:52 PM
small thoughtful words can be of great importance to someone and one true fan is more valuable than number of listeners or likes in the social media................AMEN!!! This is beautifully done!! I think Mira is perfect for it. It has sort of a Cranberries vibe. Very pleasant, very melodic, and well arranged/mixed. Excellent job with this one!! Take care. Greg
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/02/17 02:55 PM
Originally Posted By: PeterF
Very nice composition and a clever video clip.
Excellent work all round.

Peter


Thanks Peter for your kind words, and thanks liking also the video smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/02/17 03:01 PM
Originally Posted By: 44kfl
Cool song!
I love where the melody and chords go
some unexpected but beautiful turns
very nice vocals
Super mix, super song
enjoyed the video too
Kenny


Thanks Kenny for your nice feedback, especially about the vocals and video smile I'm really glad you found the chord turns beautiful smile

Janne
Posted By: RnAM Re: One - 05/02/17 05:21 PM
Janne,

This is very nice! Miira's voice and way of singing strongly reminds me of the female singer of the cranberries (Dolores).
Good and thorough musical arrangement.

Rob
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: One - 05/02/17 10:12 PM
Janne, beautiful song! Great sound all around with excellent vocals and I really like those chord changes in the chorus (very creative and melodic) Thanks, Torrey
Posted By: Joe -PG Music Re: One - 05/03/17 03:23 PM
Hi Jannesan, Beautiful work with this! Great form and lyrics too. A really great reminder for everyone doing creative work too. Thank you for sharing this with us! smile
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/04/17 01:11 PM
Originally Posted By: Scott C
Super song and video. Loved the vocal and backtrack well done


Thanks Scott for your kind words, especially about the video and vocals smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/04/17 01:15 PM
Originally Posted By: Al-David
Hi Miira and Janne,

Very nice song with an interesting chord pattern. Miira has such a lovely voice. And yes, this song is a perfect fit for her voice. Everything works so good in this recording - the backing tracks, the chord pattern, Miira's voice - everything.

We enjoyed this very much. Best to both of you,

Alan & Di


Thanks Alan & Di, I'm really glad to hear you liked the song and Miira's voice smile And mentioning the chord pattern, twice, makes me happy also wink Hope you to hear more songs from you, too.

Janne
Posted By: animarorecords Re: One - 05/05/17 10:21 PM
Hello, Janne

Very good song as usual.
Very nice melody with very nice chord progression.
I especially love the bridge melody.
Mira's vocal is very very pleasant.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/06/17 07:12 AM
Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
small thoughtful words can be of great importance to someone and one true fan is more valuable than number of listeners or likes in the social media................AMEN!!! This is beautifully done!! I think Mira is perfect for it. It has sort of a Cranberries vibe. Very pleasant, very melodic, and well arranged/mixed. Excellent job with this one!! Take care. Greg


Thanks Greg for commenting and quoting my words blush Interesting reference to Cranberries, I haven't listened to them much before, but now I'm going to. Glad to hear that you think Miira is perfect for this.

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/06/17 07:15 AM
Originally Posted By: RnAM
This is very nice! Miira's voice and way of singing strongly reminds me of the female singer of the cranberries (Dolores).
Good and thorough musical arrangement.
Rob


Thanks Rob for liking smile I'm now listening to new Cranberries album, so hopefully I can hear the connection between Dolores and Miira.

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/06/17 07:18 AM
Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Janne, beautiful song! Great sound all around with excellent vocals and I really like those chord changes in the chorus (very creative and melodic) Thanks, Torrey


Thanks Torrey for your positive words smile Nice that you mentioned the chord changes, I always try to have something that doesn't follow the usual paths.

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/07/17 04:29 PM
Originally Posted By: Joe -PG Music
Hi Jannesan, Beautiful work with this! Great form and lyrics too. A really great reminder for everyone doing creative work too. Thank you for sharing this with us! smile


Thanks Joe for commenting and liking the song and its message smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/07/17 04:34 PM
Originally Posted By: animarorecords
Very good song as usual.
Very nice melody with very nice chord progression.
I especially love the bridge melody.
Mira's vocal is very very pleasant.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi


Thank you Shigeki for your kind comment smile I'm pleased you liked the chord progression and the bridge melody - I'm satisfied with it also, because it is bit unusual, but still close to my own style.

Janne
Posted By: rsdean Re: One - 05/07/17 05:00 PM
Janne,

Great song! Love the rhythm in this - excellent job!

Bob
Posted By: Noel96 Re: One - 05/08/17 08:10 AM
Janne,

I really enjoyed this. I'm a fan of Miira's singing and she really does this justice. It's an excellent melody and it seems to me that you've arranged it with a great deal of thoughtfulness and musical strategy.

Another fine song for your catalogue!

All the best,
Noel
Posted By: David Snyder Re: One - 05/08/17 12:33 PM
Awesome.

If you want one fan you have one--me! smile

I loved this.
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/08/17 01:10 PM
Originally Posted By: rsdean
Great song! Love the rhythm in this - excellent job!
Bob


Thanks Bob, I appreciate your comment smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/08/17 01:18 PM
Originally Posted By: Noel96
I really enjoyed this. I'm a fan of Miira's singing and she really does this justice. It's an excellent melody and it seems to me that you've arranged it with a great deal of thoughtfulness and musical strategy.
Another fine song for your catalogue!
All the best,
Noel


Thanks Noel for your kind comment, first class feedback wink I'll let Miira know her singing has another fan smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/08/17 01:22 PM
Originally Posted By: David Snyder
Awesome.

If you want one fan you have one--me! smile

I loved this.


Thanks my fan for loving my song smile

Janne
Posted By: gruverider Re: One - 05/09/17 05:13 PM
Wonderful write! Great chord progression!

I would like to hear her vocal a touch hotter in the mix. It's so well sung.

And the electric guitar (mid-left) sounds great.

much enjoyed!
Posted By: jannesan Re: One - 05/10/17 01:49 PM
Originally Posted By: gruverider
Wonderful write! Great chord progression!

I would like to hear her vocal a touch hotter in the mix. It's so well sung.

And the electric guitar (mid-left) sounds great.

much enjoyed!


Thanks for your kind feedback smile I hope to learn more about mixing so that I can make her vocals hotter one day wink

Janne
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