Rough draft of the first try with BB 2019 - 02/24/19 07:05 PM
Hi guys,
https://soundcloud.com/planobilly/cyber-space-rough-draft-2
Cyber Space
You Look So Cool
You Look So Hot
Are your Just
A Cyber Bot?
You Make Me laugh
You Make Me Cry
You Make Me Sad
And I'm Wondering Why
I'm Living Here With You
In Cyber Space
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Your On My Phone
Your In My Head
Facebook Telling Everyone
I'm Dead
You Make Me laugh
You Make Me Cry
You Make Me Sad
And I'm Wondering Why
I'm Living Here With You
In Cyber Space
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Hear Me Cry Out
On The Twitter Feed
You Make Me laugh
You Make Me Cry
You Make Me Sad
And I Wonder Why
I'm Living Here With You
In Cyber Space
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I can't live
without my phone
don't you dare
leave me alone
You Make Me laugh
You Make Me Cry
You Make Me Sad
And I Wonder Why
I'm Living Here With You
In Cyber Space
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I took out the line that could be considered controversial.
Metal Bass line from BB
Some rhythm guitar from BB
Drums are just reference at this point
Vocal is seriously over driven
I wanted a simple guitar solo but perhaps this one is too simple???
Should I create a guitar solo bridge line and then create a ending with a ad lib vocal line?
Thanks,
Billy
https://soundcloud.com/planobilly/cyber-space-rough-draft-2
Cyber Space
You Look So Cool
You Look So Hot
Are your Just
A Cyber Bot?
You Make Me laugh
You Make Me Cry
You Make Me Sad
And I'm Wondering Why
I'm Living Here With You
In Cyber Space
---------------------------------
Your On My Phone
Your In My Head
Facebook Telling Everyone
I'm Dead
You Make Me laugh
You Make Me Cry
You Make Me Sad
And I'm Wondering Why
I'm Living Here With You
In Cyber Space
----------------------------------
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Hear Me Cry Out
On The Twitter Feed
You Make Me laugh
You Make Me Cry
You Make Me Sad
And I Wonder Why
I'm Living Here With You
In Cyber Space
----------------------------------
I can't live
without my phone
don't you dare
leave me alone
You Make Me laugh
You Make Me Cry
You Make Me Sad
And I Wonder Why
I'm Living Here With You
In Cyber Space
------------------------------------
I took out the line that could be considered controversial.
Metal Bass line from BB
Some rhythm guitar from BB
Drums are just reference at this point
Vocal is seriously over driven
I wanted a simple guitar solo but perhaps this one is too simple???
Should I create a guitar solo bridge line and then create a ending with a ad lib vocal line?
Thanks,
Billy