Unfortunately this song could be applicable to about any period of history. There are just more pesky people in need of repenting nowadays and the weapons are bigger.
Definitely has a cool Johnny Cash vibe . . . love that ticking time bomb effect you’ve got going. I wouldn’t say a protest song, but certainly a compelling reminder of humanity’s darker side. Nice work!
Ohh Jim, So true and sad. At first sight, seems that tune like this was effortless for you, but I am certain it was the opposite. I guess that's the magic in writing good song, so it listens easy, yet carries a lot of weight. Clock ticking theme was a very clever move!
P.S. People hear J.Cash presence... I hear more of Leonard Cohen. You and I probably share same "sad song" week
Bravo!!! Superb job. Wish I could write like that. Maybe one day I will.
Sad, sad message, but the truth often hurts, so no complaints (as it were) about any of it. If the shoe fits ...
Loved the ticking clock effect, also.
Oh, and one last thing: don't know about Johnny Cash, Leonard Cohen or whatever ... this sounds AUTHENTIC and original, 100% ... and that's what I think matters. This is not Cash or Cohen, in my humble and profane opinion ... this really is you, that's how it comes across to me.
Hard - no point, even - to analyse this by taking it apart and talk about its "components", as it were. It's the whole thing that leaves one feeling like one's swallowed a dose of truth - which is, again, a very healthy and sobering thing to do from time to time. Great stuff - thank you.
Excellent lyric. As said, this could apply to almost any time any any "high" civilization in history. What marks our time as the time of this song is that we know what we do and what that does to the planet.
Very well done - simple in it's delivery, but very powerful at the same time - the mark of a well executed song. It displays strong songwriting skills, and really sets a dark mood perfectly.
You should be proud of this one - thanks for sharing
Unfortunately this song could be applicable to about any period of history. There are just more pesky people in need of repenting nowadays and the weapons are bigger.
But we can always dream...
Thanks for sharing.
J&B
Thanks for your comments & support... Yes I agree... We can always dream.
Definitely has a cool Johnny Cash vibe . . . love that ticking time bomb effect you’ve got going. I wouldn’t say a protest song, but certainly a compelling reminder of humanity’s darker side. Nice work!
Ohh Jim, So true and sad. At first sight, seems that tune like this was effortless for you, but I am certain it was the opposite. I guess that's the magic in writing good song, so it listens easy, yet carries a lot of weight. Clock ticking theme was a very clever move!
P.S. People hear J.Cash presence... I hear more of Leonard Cohen. You and I probably share same "sad song" week
Thank you for sharing this!
Misha.
Thanks Misha... I actually worried this tune would not be well received... Thank you for your encouraging comments!
Well put by Misha: " it listens easy, yet carries a lot of weight" I like the mood of foreboding your voice carries to match the lyrics. A good, well crafted song.
Bravo!!! Superb job. Wish I could write like that. Maybe one day I will.
Sad, sad message, but the truth often hurts, so no complaints (as it were) about any of it. If the shoe fits ...
Loved the ticking clock effect, also.
Oh, and one last thing: don't know about Johnny Cash, Leonard Cohen or whatever ... this sounds AUTHENTIC and original, 100% ... and that's what I think matters. This is not Cash or Cohen, in my humble and profane opinion ... this really is you, that's how it comes across to me.
Hard - no point, even - to analyse this by taking it apart and talk about its "components", as it were. It's the whole thing that leaves one feeling like one's swallowed a dose of truth - which is, again, a very healthy and sobering thing to do from time to time. Great stuff - thank you.
Thank you James... For your encouraging comments... They are always extremely appreciated.
Excellent lyric. As said, this could apply to almost any time any any "high" civilization in history. What marks our time as the time of this song is that we know what we do and what that does to the planet.
Thanks Ray... I’m glad you enjoyed the listen... I imagine you insightful comment is very close to the unfortunate truth!
Really interesting Jim!! I think you could call this a protest song. I really think the earth/clock ticking thing between verses is interesting. Nice job!! Take care. Greg
Very well done - simple in it's delivery, but very powerful at the same time - the mark of a well executed song. It displays strong songwriting skills, and really sets a dark mood perfectly.
You should be proud of this one - thanks for sharing
Thanks Deryk... I really appreciate your kind comments & support.
Well put by Misha: " it listens easy, yet carries a lot of weight" I like the mood of foreboding your voice carries to match the lyrics. A good, well crafted song.
Robert.
Thanks Robert... Your support & comments are always appreciated.
Nice song, though very dark, Jim. And that clock... I remember we discussed it, because of the clock in one of my songs. But in your lyrics we're closer to the edge... But I like the intriguing way you brought it.
Really interesting Jim!! I think you could call this a protest song. I really think the earth/clock ticking thing between verses is interesting. Nice job!! Take care. Greg
Thanks, Greg... I'm pleased you enjoyed the song and thanks for the comments.
Nice song, though very dark, Jim. And that clock... I remember we discussed it, because of the clock in one of my songs. But in your lyrics we're closer to the edge... But I like the intriguing way you brought it.
Hans
Thanks Hans... I really appreciate your continued comments & support.
Jim, you put across in a very few lines a message that speaks to a lot of people and that shows that you really know what your doing! Every tune you put up here always seems to connect! Thanks for your work! Torrey
Jim, you put across in a very few lines a message that speaks to a lot of people and that shows that you really know what your doing! Every tune you put up here always seems to connect! Thanks for your work! Torrey
Thanks Torrey... Comments like yours & others really make sharing songs worthwhile!
Definitely has a cool Johnny Cash vibe . . . love that ticking time bomb effect you’ve got going. I wouldn’t say a protest song, but certainly a compelling reminder of humanity’s darker side. Nice work!
All the best,
Deej
Hi Jim,
I'm a bit late getting to this one.
As I was reading through the comments, I came across Deej's and he said everything that I was thinking so I thought I'd quote him.
It's a sad thing that so much of humanity seeks to define itself by power and greed rather than tolerance and generosity. Maybe one day the good guys will stand tallest!
Definitely has a cool Johnny Cash vibe . . . love that ticking time bomb effect you’ve got going. I wouldn’t say a protest song, but certainly a compelling reminder of humanity’s darker side. Nice work!
All the best,
Deej
Hi Jim,
I'm a bit late getting to this one.
As I was reading through the comments, I came across Deej's and he said everything that I was thinking so I thought I'd quote him.
It's a sad thing that so much of humanity seeks to define itself by power and greed rather than tolerance and generosity. Maybe one day the good guys will stand tallest!
All the best, Noel
Thanks Noel... Your listen & comments are always appreciated... I'm believing some day the good guys shall stand tallest!
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