Hi my biab's friends,
Two years ago, I composed Turn turn the world with the following realtracks:
String Quarted NA 2335 Rhythmic PopHall Ev 085
Baustin 6 Render RealTrack Guitar 1-
Riff 2 2650 Guitar Electric Background DreamyPopBalladFillsBrent Ev 085
At the time, I found this composition a bit bland and not to post it on this forum. In the last few days I decided to color it with different vst woodwind instruments and choirs and review the mix with ozone9.
Finalized, I can finally offer it to you. If you have the time or the desire, all your comments are welcome. Thanks in advance.
Link to my composition:
https://soundcloud.com/user-318966631/turn-turn-the-worldLink to my other compositions:
https://soundcloud.com/user-318966631
I thought this was great! Love the way you used those bells - very catchy beginning, and once caught, I remained that way throughout the melody. I really liked the way you built the melody sound by sound. The ending was nice too. They started a commercial right after the conclusion of your piece, so they may have cut a bit of the sound off, but it did sound as though it had suddenly stopped ringing at the very end, which was probably something you hadn't intended. Very nice music.
Hi Brad,
I'm glad that you like this instrumental melody. Thank you very much for your encouragement which really makes me happy. Especially since I am aware that my style is a bit atypical on this forum.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
You had me with the bells at the beginning...and you can never go wrong with Dreamy Brent...very nice arrangement and melodic movement...the choir or whatever it was ion the background gave it a lovely feel and peaceful vibe...I really enjoyed this!
Great intro with the bells, that is so important to get the listener's attention right away. And you kept the interest nicely, which can be hard to achieve with an instrumental. Terrific work!
Derochette,
Those bells are outstanding—so clear in the mix, giving a lot of depth and atmosphere. Really pretty composition—engaging, and crystal in the production. Outstanding work!
All my best,
Deej
The unexpected opening set the tone (no pun intended) for what turned out to be a very emotive piece. The BIAB tracks provided a most suitable fabric on which to embroider and interweave the various VSTs. Masterful music-making.
If this was bland before, it's certainly not now.
The instrumentation and arrangement kept me engaged through the whole song.
Nice!
Hi Jani
Very cool song
Sounds damn good
Top sound and a great background track
Makes fun to listen
Many greetings
Andi ;-)
Derochette,
Beautiful instrumental. Great opening. I like how the composition progresses. Excellent use of synths. One minor thing, and that is probably a matter of taste, I think that drums are a little "thin" compared to the rest of the instruments. This is a random idea, but have you thought about using simpler percussion on this, such as tambourine? In any case, this is a good tune. Thank you for sharing.
Misha.
Very evocative. A lovely instrumental that keeps the listener engaged throughout.
Excellent.
Peter
This is lovely.
Your selection of tracks, the arrangement and the mix are outstanding.
It has a very dreamy cinematic feel -- would make a great film track.
We’re glad you revived this instrumental!
J&B
Hi firesong,
Thank you very much for this nice comment. I love bells and always try to incorporate them into my compositions. Thanks again.
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Derochette
alais JaniJackFlash
Hi TuneMonger,
Your comments to my wish are always friendly and I thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Derochette
alias janiJackFlash
Hi Deej56,
It is always a pleasure to read you. Thanks for the nice comment.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Derochette,
Great work. Love the strings and how you delayed the persussion coming in.
The chorus gives a "Middle Earth" feel.
Great job.
Hi Ghostgum,
Biab's realtracks are very well done. They are a precious tool in the realization of a composition and they adapt well to the sequence of chords that one chooses. Thank you for your nice comment which made me happy.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Really beautiful music.
The bells in the beginning sound like drops of water.
Love it!
Anne-Marie
Derochette,
Beautiful. Your compositions are always impressive.
fj
Hi dcuny,
Thanks dcuny for the nice comment.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Hi Andi,
Thanks for stopping by and commenting. For sound quality Ozone 9 helped me a lot.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Derochette,
Peaceful and uplifting- a beautifully crafted instrumental.
Very well done!
Robert
Hi Rustyspoon,
thank you for your comment and advice. I will review the percussion. Thanks again for commenting.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Hi PeterF,
thank you for your comment and encouragement.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Beautiful song with a nice theme that builds very well.
When the choir comes in it almost sounds like a movie track of an Ennio Morricone western movie.
From the mix, I would give the drums a bit more bottom end, but the rest is really well balanced.
Wow really nice song. Loved the bells. Guitar was so pretty. Lovely melody. Love this Jani...
Clear melody...you've avoided the trap of delay on the lead that can swamp things with overlap etc.
The drums seem a little loud but I'm not listening through an accurate system.
Nice ending too.
Well done.
Oh, so good! Everyone mentioned the bells and I'd like to chime in on that too. Everything in that mix adds the perfect ingredient for this soaring beauty, Derochette. Such a good composition. Brilliant use of BiaB. I really like where your music takes me.
Hi Janice & Bud,
It's always a pleasure to read you and thank you for your nice comment.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Hi BassThumper,
Thank you for the nice comment that makes me happy.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Hi RnAm,
Thank you very much for your comment like drops of beautiful water.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
I love the atmosphere, beautiful and top quality productions of your works.
Thanks for posting.
Always such a treat!
Derochette,
This is a special piece. Very beautiful from start to finish.
Bob
Derochette, this is an outstanding piece of music, your best to date IMHO.
Super intro and ending as well as everything in between.
Outstanding mix.
Loved it.
Hi floyd jane,
I'm really happy that you like my composition because you are a reference for me on this forum. A big thanks.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Hi Robertkc,
I think this is the first time you've commented on one of my compositions and I'm delighted with your comment. And thank you very much.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Beautiful melody, nicely morphing arrangement with very cool start and ending and what an excellent backing band to support all of that! Bells sound great, and I love those choir voices. Has some Eastern vibe, which is also very nice.
Janne
Hi B.D. Thomas,
Thank you for stopping by and commenting. You are right about the drums. Thanks for your advice
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Hi Scott C,
It is always a pleasure to read you. Thank you for your appreciation.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Hi rayc,
You are right about the drums. I will review my copy. Thank you for your wise advice.
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Deroochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Beautiful piece. Nicely textured instrumentation. I like the different bits you add throughout that heighten my interest.
Hi BabuMusic,
It gives me great pleasure to read you. Thank you for your appreciation and warm encouragement.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Hi David,
When I read you, I think back to your superb song dedicated to your dad. Thank you for your nice comment.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Derochette,
Very soothing song.
Tubular bells, woodwinds, choirs, string, etc., all are used very effectively.
I think your orchestrations are always great.
This song is no exception.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
Hi rsdean,
Thank you very much for your nice comment.
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Derochette alias JaniJackFlash
Hi MarioD,
It is always a pleasure to read your comments. Thanks.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Hi jannesan,
I'm glad you listened to my composition. And thank you for the nice comment.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Hi Ezekiel's Storm,
Thank you very much for your nice comment.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Hi animarorecords,
It is true that the colorization of a composition by different instruments has an important effect on the appreciation of a musical piece. Thank you for commenting and liking my composition.
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Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash