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Posted By: jannesan White Night - 01/12/23 01:22 PM
White Night

I wrote the chords and melody for this song 5 years ago. It was gathering dust, until I decided to use the song for a Christmas song contest, so I wrote the lyrics that in mind, although I tried to avoid any direct references to Christmas or human culture around. Instead, I tried to have fable magic of winter in it... it was tough task to write, so the story may be a little mess, but I hope I manage to deliver even a tiny bit of that magic to you smile

BIAB provided, once again, great instruments for my arrangement. Unfortunately, another BIAB release without Bagpipes/Uilleann pipe RTs frown Wouldn't it be nice to have as many flute/pipe/wind instrument RTs as there are guitar RTs? Well, at least there was one new world instrument erhu which suits the song very well as the voice of the northern wind. I guess I have to overuse erhu as the bagpipe replacement during this year wink

I'm not quite sure about the correct bodhran pronunciation, but I used one suggestion I found (bow-ron)...

RealDrums:
BodhranCelticJig^2-Brushes
BodhranTradJig: a: Bodhran b: BodhranTradJig
Shaker68Nanigo[single]

RealTracks:
#1161:Bass, Acoustic, CelticJig Sw 110
#3915:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm ContradanceJig68 Sw 120
#1163:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm CelticJig Sw 110
#3543:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm CelticJig68Picking Sw 110
#2860:Guitar, Nylon, Rhythm Mariachi68 Sw 110
#2724:Guitar, Nylon, Fingerpicking PeruFestejo68Melodic Sw 120
#4381:Erhu, Background SimplePentatonic Ev 060
#3187:Fiddle, Soloist, CelticJigAndy Sw 110
#3766:Vibes, Rhythm PopSwing Sw 110

Vocals: Synthesizer V Natalie (lead), Synthesizer V Weina (lead+backing), Synthesizer V Asterian (backing)

Mixed in Cakewalk by BandLab

Lyrics:

The reindeers are restless
the wolves sowing fright
the pastures are petrified
in the polar night.
Gales are gathering
clouds are strengthening
crystals start scattering light.
Swirls in the skyline
a crow on a deadwood pine
wait for the wizard in white.

White is the night when winter comes
the change of season quiets the drums
hides the tracks of hunted preys
lightens up the darkest greys
slows the stream of vanishing days.
Calms the grieving piccolo
mutes the lonely trumpet blow
requiems now covered in snow.
White is the night when winter comes
the voice of the northern wind hums.

The fairies are fretful
the woods feeling blue
magic is mortified
hideaways are few.
Hardships confront a gnome
dreaming in monochrome
the softhearted underworld sound.
Tears of a leprechaun
are beating on his bodhran
breaking the spell that has been bound.

White is the night...

Yet no sign of a sled
but bells breaking the still
elves relish in red
head down the hill.
Beings joining the joy
myths, magic and glee
a rapt smile of a boy
chosen to see.
------------------------------
Janne
Posted By: Bass Thumper Re: White Night - 01/12/23 01:48 PM
Janne, you are a master lyricist indeed and you have a command of the English language few of us have.
Very enjoyable listen and the feel and synth vocals remind me of one of my favorite bands, Renaissance/Annie Haslam.
I wonder if you were inspired by them.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XtSQFewjDD0
Posted By: vicarn Re: White Night - 01/12/23 02:31 PM
Fabulous lyrics.
Fabulous production.

Vic
Posted By: TuneMonger Re: White Night - 01/12/23 04:24 PM
Wow, Janne, this was superb! Best lyrics ever! I was concerned the erhu's distinctive sound might distract but it was fine. I think I've mentioned to you in the past that Native Instruments has a uilleann pipes in Kontakt - you may already know that. Lotta Celtic Woman in this track, which I love. Fantastic work!
Posted By: David Snyder Re: White Night - 01/12/23 08:12 PM
This is really special Janne!

What a great sound!

And yes, I have been dreaming of some bag pipes, too!

smile

P.S.

Wait, I found them. In Sample Tank!!

Should have known!

And they sound fabulous!

smile

Attached picture Good Old Sample Tank.jpg
Posted By: dcuny Re: White Night - 01/13/23 01:17 AM
Cool alliteration! I like it! laugh

As others have already said, it sounds great!

Small nit - the plural of reindeer is reindeer. Generally, anyway. English can be weird. Apparently some dictionaries have it both ways. And if enough people start using it that way, it becomes official.

However, there are two pronunciation problems in Tears of a leprechaun

These should be t ih r z and l eh p r ih k ao n

I'd trust Google before SynthV. Click the link, and then the speaker icon in the left side to hear it pronounced. At least, the way I pronounce it, so it must be right! wink

https://translate.google.com/?sl=en&tl=ja&text=tears%20of%20a%20leprechaun&op=translate

Interestingly, Google doesn't pronounce bodhran the Irish way.

Anyway, very poetic!
Posted By: BabuMusic Re: White Night - 01/13/23 11:02 AM
Yeow, I love the opening. Reminds of a favorite band The Pentangle. Love the vocals, the melody and the whole production. Dang, I absolutely love this song, Janne. Excellent choices of instrumentation and the perfect mix, but I keep coming back to how good that melody is.
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/13/23 03:43 PM
Originally Posted By: Bass Thumper
Janne, you are a master lyricist indeed and you have a command of the English language few of us have.
Very enjoyable listen and the feel and synth vocals remind me of one of my favorite bands, Renaissance/Annie Haslam.
I wonder if you were inspired by them.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XtSQFewjDD0


Thanks BT for your too kind comment smile "Master lyricist" sounds very over-exaggeration, but I will certainly hang that badge on my wall laugh

You introduced me to Renaissance already in my "The River Of Eternity" song comment thread, and I thank you for that. Hadn't heard them before, but now I have been enjoying many of their great tracks like Ocean Gypsy, Grandine Il Vento and Ashes Are Burning. So this song wasn't inspired by them, because it was written long time ago, but maybe some new songs will be smile

Janne
Posted By: Brad Williams Re: White Night - 01/13/23 03:44 PM
This a great one! I absolutely loved that intro, and the writing - superb! Great job Janne.
Posted By: Deej56 Re: White Night - 01/13/23 05:23 PM
Janne,

Funny how a song bed can hang around for years until something finally clicks lyrically . . . glad this one finally came together because it’s a good one. Great intro, and what follows is equally impressive. The Vocaloid is really, really good. The mix is just great all the way through. Outstanding work!

All my best,

Deej
Posted By: Scott C Re: White Night - 01/13/23 11:09 PM
Really cool song Janne. The lyric was excellent but the backing band was stellar. Loved the little trills in the background. Well done..
Posted By: MarioD Re: White Night - 01/14/23 08:16 PM
Janne, I agree with everything that has been said thus far.

I will add that you are a great lyricist and master at those artificial voices.

Two thumbs up
Posted By: rayc Re: White Night - 01/14/23 08:28 PM
Well done.
Your song reminded me of Steeleye Span - particularly their Wintersmith (Terry Pratchett) album
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=COgJyvPKk0Q&list=PLGlwCFtYTAIp3dVhMI2Y5uxHPFXZeInIv&index=5

but is uniquely you & yours.
Well done.
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/15/23 02:01 PM
Originally Posted By: vicarn
Fabulous lyrics.
Fabulous production.

Vic


Thanks Vic, I'm glad to hear you liked my song fabulously smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/15/23 02:12 PM
Originally Posted By: TuneMonger
Wow, Janne, this was superb! Best lyrics ever! I was concerned the erhu's distinctive sound might distract but it was fine. I think I've mentioned to you in the past that Native Instruments has a uilleann pipes in Kontakt - you may already know that. Lotta Celtic Woman in this track, which I love. Fantastic work!


Thanks for your very kind compliments smile Well, best lyrics is a relative concept wink Yes, I know that there are many uilleann pipes choices outside BIAB, I think I have already used NI's pipes you mentioned and also Garritan's World Instruments. But authentic RT pipes would be easier to work with... and they would make me happier smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/15/23 02:18 PM
Originally Posted By: David Snyder
This is really special Janne!

What a great sound!

And yes, I have been dreaming of some bag pipes, too!

smile

P.S.

Wait, I found them. In Sample Tank!!

Should have known!

And they sound fabulous!

smile


Thanks David for your nice feedback smile Yes, I found them also in my ST3, thanks for letting me know. Another one to try while waiting for new PGMusic RealTracks.

Janne
Posted By: tommyad Re: White Night - 01/15/23 03:24 PM
Janne, very well written lyrics. Those voices are terrific. Well produced and the mix is excellent. This is a lot of fun to listen to, Tom
Posted By: nevnbron Re: White Night - 01/15/23 05:15 PM
Very evocative - sensitive production - nicely subdued vocals - tricky to get lyrics to fit snugly in 6/8 but you managed it well
Posted By: B.D.Thomas Re: White Night - 01/16/23 04:36 PM
This is different from the normal songs we hear here, and in a very positive way.
Amazing work. Good use of, well, everything.

Originally Posted By: jannesan
another BIAB release without Bagpipes/Uilleann pipe RTs

That's good!
I think I read somewhere that their original purpose was to strike fear into the enemy ... that's what they're good at grin
Posted By: BlueAttitude Re: White Night - 01/17/23 10:54 AM
Hi Janne,

Excellent lyrics! Man, I wish I had a fraction of your skills in that department.

Love the track, great intro and choice of instruments. And your vocalists are doing a fine job for you also!

Good one, enjoyed.
Posted By: RnAM Re: White Night - 01/17/23 01:30 PM
Hi Janne,

Very, very beautiful.
Great composition, wonderful music.
And you really are very good at using those vocals.
Awesome job!

Rob and Anne-Marie
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/17/23 05:02 PM
Originally Posted By: dcuny
Cool alliteration! I like it! laugh

As others have already said, it sounds great!

Small nit - the plural of reindeer is reindeer. Generally, anyway. English can be weird. Apparently some dictionaries have it both ways. And if enough people start using it that way, it becomes official.

However, there are two pronunciation problems in Tears of a leprechaun

These should be t ih r z and l eh p r ih k ao n

I'd trust Google before SynthV. Click the link, and then the speaker icon in the left side to hear it pronounced. At least, the way I pronounce it, so it must be right! wink

https://translate.google.com/?sl=en&tl=ja&text=tears%20of%20a%20leprechaun&op=translate

Interestingly, Google doesn't pronounce bodhran the Irish way.

Anyway, very poetic!


Thanks David for your kind and valuable feedback smile Glad you liked the alliteration and find the lyrics poetic smile

Sorry that I was so careless with my lyrics, I saw that this Microsoft browser complained about "reindeers", I should have found out why... but on the other it complained also about "bodhran" so I thought that it just didn't know those words. I should cross-check all my different sources, including also dcuny laugh I have changed the reindeer and "tears", but I didn't change leprechaun, because I didn't find another source that used ih, sorry to disappoint you wink

Janne
Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm Re: White Night - 01/18/23 09:07 PM
Stellar work with the lyrics and the rhythm of the melody, which is extremely appealing. Bagpipes or not, I like the instrumentation and can't imagine the song any other way. Great song!
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/19/23 02:52 PM
Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Yeow, I love the opening. Reminds of a favorite band The Pentangle. Love the vocals, the melody and the whole production. Dang, I absolutely love this song, Janne. Excellent choices of instrumentation and the perfect mix, but I keep coming back to how good that melody is.


Thanks Marty for your positive feedback smile Glad you love the song and the melody, I'm surprised that people seem to like it that much.

Hadn't heard Pentangle before, but I did now and sounds like a very nice orchestra, kind of acoustic Celtic rock, I really like the sound of that female vocalist. Thanks for pointing out them.

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/19/23 02:53 PM
Originally Posted By: Brad Williams
This a great one! I absolutely loved that intro, and the writing - superb! Great job Janne.


Thanks Brad, nice to hear your kind compliments smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/19/23 02:55 PM
Originally Posted By: Deej56
Janne,

Funny how a song bed can hang around for years until something finally clicks lyrically . . . glad this one finally came together because it’s a good one. Great intro, and what follows is equally impressive. The Vocaloid is really, really good. The mix is just great all the way through. Outstanding work!

All my best,

Deej


Thanks Deej for your kind words smile Well, I forced myself to write the lyrics for that melody and the band, it was basically just hard work and not much inspiration, but glad to hear everything is impressive smile

Janne
Posted By: Birchwood Re: White Night - 01/20/23 11:20 AM
Hi Janne,

I am very glad you brushed up this dust gathering song. Man, what a wonderful song it is!
Very nice, say magical lyrics sung by the most wonderful performance of an AI-Lady.
I had a smile on my face during the song. I enjoyed it very much.
Absolutely top notch.

But to get that lady sings the way you wanted her to, must have been a lot of work!

Hans
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/21/23 02:28 PM
Originally Posted By: Scott C
Really cool song Janne. The lyric was excellent but the backing band was stellar. Loved the little trills in the background. Well done..


Thanks Scott, I appreciate your very positive feedback smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/21/23 02:30 PM
Originally Posted By: MarioD
Janne, I agree with everything that has been said thus far.

I will add that you are a great lyricist and master at those artificial voices.

Two thumbs up


Thanks Mario for your thumb ups and heartwarming compliments blush

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/21/23 02:33 PM
Originally Posted By: rayc
Well done.
Your song reminded me of Steeleye Span - particularly their Wintersmith (Terry Pratchett) album
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=COgJyvPKk0Q&list=PLGlwCFtYTAIp3dVhMI2Y5uxHPFXZeInIv&index=5

but is uniquely you & yours.
Well done.


Thanks Ray for your nice comment smile I have somehow missed Steeleye Span, sounds very interesting folk rock, I'm listening to them right now, thanks for mentioning them.

Janne
Posted By: Janice & Bud Re: White Night - 01/21/23 06:06 PM
Magical and creative!

Your lyric reminded Janice of some of the best fairy tales she read as a young girl, both the write and the colorful images in the books.

The singers shine (excellent work) and that’s a great band you assembled.

Love the bodrans ... and the entire mix.

Enjoyed it!

J&B
Posted By: Torrey Bliss Re: White Night - 01/22/23 08:07 PM
Janne,

There's a lot going on in this, but it all sits in its right place and sounds good to me! It's a wonderful sounding tune with a super good melody!

Thanks, T
Posted By: PROJECT M Re: White Night - 01/23/23 12:50 PM
Hi Janne
Really cool song
The intro is great
The background track is super arranged
Excellent sound and great vocals
I like it very much
Many greetings
Andi ;-)
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/23/23 04:01 PM
Originally Posted By: tommyad
Janne, very well written lyrics. Those voices are terrific. Well produced and the mix is excellent. This is a lot of fun to listen to, Tom


Thanks Tom, I appreciate your kind feedback, especially about the mix and the lyrics smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/25/23 01:47 PM
Originally Posted By: nevnbron
Very evocative - sensitive production - nicely subdued vocals - tricky to get lyrics to fit snugly in 6/8 but you managed it well


Thanks for your kind and insightful feedback smile It wasn't an easy task to get the lyrics flow easily so I'm very glad you appreciate the end result smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/25/23 01:55 PM
Originally Posted By: B.D.Thomas
This is different from the normal songs we hear here, and in a very positive way.
Amazing work. Good use of, well, everything.

Originally Posted By: jannesan
another BIAB release without Bagpipes/Uilleann pipe RTs

That's good!
I think I read somewhere that their original purpose was to strike fear into the enemy ... that's what they're good at grin


Thanks BD for your positive approval smile Well, you don't have to fear at least this year, because on the day PGMusic introduces bagpipe RTs, I will fill my new songs with them wink

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/25/23 02:03 PM
Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Hi Janne,

Excellent lyrics! Man, I wish I had a fraction of your skills in that department.

Love the track, great intro and choice of instruments. And your vocalists are doing a fine job for you also!

Good one, enjoyed.


Thanks Dave for your kind comment smile I usually write too many words, I appreciate your skillful way of writing lyrics simpler to understand smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/27/23 03:25 PM
Originally Posted By: RnAM
Hi Janne,

Very, very beautiful.
Great composition, wonderful music.
And you really are very good at using those vocals.
Awesome job!

Rob and Anne-Marie


Thanks Rob and Anne-Marie for your kind feedback smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/27/23 03:26 PM
Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
Stellar work with the lyrics and the rhythm of the melody, which is extremely appealing. Bagpipes or not, I like the instrumentation and can't imagine the song any other way. Great song!


Thanks ES for your supportive comment smile Glad you liked the rhythm of the melody, it wasn't easy to make it sound natural.

Janne
Posted By: dani48 Re: White Night - 01/28/23 01:41 PM
Hi, Janne & Co !


This is absolutely a most magic tune
with mysterious sounds that evoke
the hauling of wolves around me
in the deep of the night out there
in the snowy and ghostly moonlighted
forest !

It is one of your absolute best
and a masterpiece !

Cheers
Dani
Posted By: floyd jane Re: White Night - 01/29/23 05:21 PM
Sounds really cool
An excellent mix
Vocals are really well done
A good write
Enjoyed

Fj
Posted By: PeterF Re: White Night - 01/29/23 05:45 PM
Janne

Quite magical. Evocative, and melodic.

Great use of the Synth V vocalists.

Beautiful backing tracks and a unique sound for the forum - I agree with earlier posters hearing those influences.

Superb.

Peter
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 01/30/23 04:48 PM
Originally Posted By: Birchwood
I am very glad you brushed up this dust gathering song. Man, what a wonderful song it is!
Very nice, say magical lyrics sung by the most wonderful performance of an AI-Lady.
I had a smile on my face during the song. I enjoyed it very much.
Absolutely top notch.

But to get that lady sings the way you wanted her to, must have been a lot of work!

Hans


Thanks Hans for your wonderful comment smile Glad you enjoyed my little tune.

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 02/01/23 04:45 PM
Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Magical and creative!

Your lyric reminded Janice of some of the best fairy tales she read as a young girl, both the write and the colorful images in the books.

The singers shine (excellent work) and that’s a great band you assembled.

Love the bodrans ... and the entire mix.

Enjoyed it!

J&B


Thanks Janice & Bud for your heartwarming comment smile Glad to hear my lyric reminding of fairy tales, it was hard work to write such a short story in a song, luckily I didn't have to write a book smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 02/01/23 04:46 PM
Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Janne,

There's a lot going on in this, but it all sits in its right place and sounds good to me! It's a wonderful sounding tune with a super good melody!

Thanks, T


Thanks Torrey for your pleasant feedback smile Glad you liked the melody.

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 02/01/23 04:47 PM
Originally Posted By: PROJECT M
Hi Janne
Really cool song
The intro is great
The background track is super arranged
Excellent sound and great vocals
I like it very much
Many greetings
Andi ;-)


Thanks Andi, I appreciate your listening and kind words smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 02/05/23 01:55 PM
Originally Posted By: dani48
This is absolutely a most magic tune
with mysterious sounds that evoke
the hauling of wolves around me
in the deep of the night out there
in the snowy and ghostly moonlighted
forest !

It is one of your absolute best
and a masterpiece !

Cheers
Dani


Thanks Dani for your wonderful review smile I wish I could make an animation based on your magical description wink

Janne
Posted By: chulaivet1966 Re: White Night - 02/05/23 02:46 PM
Howdy Janne....

This is very creative write, good lyrics and has an appeal all it's own.
Everyone else has covered the qualities of this one.
Lots of imagery which is what attracts me first to a song.

Well done!

Carry on....
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 02/06/23 04:11 PM
Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Sounds really cool
An excellent mix
Vocals are really well done
A good write
Enjoyed

Fj



Thanks Fj, I appreciate your pleasant feedback smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 02/07/23 04:56 PM
Originally Posted By: PeterF
Quite magical. Evocative, and melodic.

Great use of the Synth V vocalists.

Beautiful backing tracks and a unique sound for the forum - I agree with earlier posters hearing those influences.

Superb.

Peter


Thanks Peter for your generous feedback smile

Janne
Posted By: Leon1 Re: White Night - 02/07/23 10:19 PM
Wow, Janne, this is excellent. Super melody, mix and instrumentation and the vocal is scarily good (they're coming for us :)). Love it.
Regards,
Leon
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 02/09/23 04:40 PM
Originally Posted By: chulaivet1966
Howdy Janne....

This is very creative write, good lyrics and has an appeal all it's own.
Everyone else has covered the qualities of this one.
Lots of imagery which is what attracts me first to a song.

Well done!

Carry on....


Thanks for your very pleasant comment smile

Janne
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 02/10/23 01:49 PM
Originally Posted By: Leon1
Wow, Janne, this is excellent. Super melody, mix and instrumentation and the vocal is scarily good (they're coming for us :)). Love it.
Regards,
Leon


Thanks Leon, I appreciate your heartwarming comment smile Yes, those vocals are so good that I wonder should I ever sing myself again, it is just so easy to let the synthesized vocalists take care of the task.

Janne
Posted By: animarorecords Re: White Night - 02/12/23 03:18 AM
Janne,

As everyone has already said, this song is great.
A super lyrics for Christmas.
Innovative rhythm.
Nordic, fairy tale-like melody.
Many special music instruments.
And wonderful AI synth vocals.
They all are super first class.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Posted By: jannesan Re: White Night - 02/12/23 12:17 PM
Originally Posted By: animarorecords
As everyone has already said, this song is great.
A super lyrics for Christmas.
Innovative rhythm.
Nordic, fairy tale-like melody.
Many special music instruments.
And wonderful AI synth vocals.
They all are super first class.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi


Thanks Shigeki Adachi for listening and commenting, that was very kindly said about my song, really made up my day smile

Janne
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