Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Mix sounds good.
Good job on the drums.
I thought the Bass was somewhat "indistinct". Since you were more or less showcasing it (and the amp), I was expecting a bit more "punch" from it. But that did not distract from (or affect) the overall sound.


I believe it was you who commented on the riding the cymbals thing on the first version. This was a case of copy and paste until I got the parts where I wanted them, and the whole ride the crash is gone.

Yep.... I agree on the indistinctness of the bass. I will certainly get that figured out as time goes on. The new bass track was my legitimate excuse to repost this.... (LOL) but I do need to work on the details a bit. I likely won't repost it if I even rework the bass line.... it's done.

Thanks for your time


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