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This is a song I wrote in 1974. It is a continuing work in progress since then. I have re-worked in several times over the years but I've not been able to match the original demo back in 1974 recorded with the band Angel Oak mostly because of the great harmonies in that version done on the bridge. It didn't make the cut on our album but I always thought it was a good song. This current version is the beginning of another revision and at this time contains a scratch lead vocal, no harmonies and lacks an instrumental break I am working on for just before the bridge. This is the first ever version to contain a piano or strings, thanks to BIAB. I'm pretty excited about how the piano fits. Decided to post to see if any on the forum may have other suggestions as well. ****** Song Summary ************* Key=C , Tempo 105, Length (m:s)=3:32 Style is _12STACS.STY (Slow 12-String Ac. w/band (85RS)) MelodyCustom Synth is Hi-Q 049 01 Strings, Ensemble, Chamber SampleTank.tgs RealTracks in style: ~700:Bass, Electric, PopHalfNotesPush Ev 085 RealTracks in style: ~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085 RealTracks in style: ~1118:Guitar, 12-String Acoustic, Strumming Ev 085 RealTracks in style: ~363:Pedal Steel, Background Ev 085 MIDI SuperTracks in song: 2061:Strings, Rhythm PopCountry Sw 120 RealDrums in style: NashvilleEven8^5-a:Snare, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride ******************* https://soundcloud.com/charlie-fogle/this-time-love-wasnt-blind
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Nice work Charlie!! Great feel! I love the vibe, and I love your vocal. Sounds like a little Grateful Dead influence. I might try putting a little verb on the vocal but just a touch-the very dry sound suits the song and your voice. Great work. Take care. Greg
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Pretty good. I don't think I've heard this song before. I like the laid back feel to the song. The way this came out I don't think harmonies would add anything. Instrumentaion choices are good. I didn't hear the steel track but the strings pad on the last verse is a nice touch.
I'm hesitant to try and imagine how the finished production will sound since I like this version so well.
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Nice country style and lyrics. Enjoyable song. Cheers.
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Way to go Charlie... this proves that music has no age. 1974, you say? Well, this sounds good to me. Good old Country style.
Very well done!
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Hi Charlie, Nice country style and lyrics. Enjoyable song. Ditto. Guenter
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Thanks to all for listening and commenting.
- Greg - The vocals are doubled with reverb on one track and the volume lowered under the dry vocal. I'm usually heavy handed with effects but will likely give more presence to the reverb vocal. Thanks for listening.
- Jim - the steel track was removed and replaced with the strings. I overlooked removing it from the list.
- RichMac - Thanks for listening. Wrote this song so long ago there was still some country left in country music. The BIAB piano track reminded me of Charlie Rich style.
- MikeK - I appreciate you taking time to listen and comment.
- Boehm - Thanks. I'm trying to retain the originality of the song and use BIAB real tracks to make it more contemporary.
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Charlie,
A good grouping of tracks for this. Your vocal is very nicely recorded - with a nice intimacy to it - just right for the song.
IMO, the piano ought to be brought out more and the acoustic guitar pulled back a little. That piano is so very nice.
I enjoyed the song. It's still going through my head - like I've known it a long time - that's a great quality.
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This is the second heartbreak song i have heard today. I like the tune and the interlude .."you used to be..." Was a nice change. I can almost hear it modulating to another key after that to lift it even further. Great choice of styles for the sentiment.
-Patrick
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Hi, Charlie !
I like everything about your
tune ! Could have been a
tune for Jimmy Reeves ?:))
Cheers
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Hi Charlie ...
My (Alan's) daughter lives on Hilton Head Island. South Carolina is a very pretty area!
Very nice traditional country song. we enjoyed the chord progression on the chorus. I worked on a song from 1978 until 2004 ... so I know what you mean about the process! Nice listen ...
All the best,
Alan & Di
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I appreciate you guys stopping by to listen.
- Floyd - Thanks for your comments. This song is very much a work in progress and I posted to get some insight from the group to help it along. I agree with your suggestions and will adjust the piano and guitar.
- nobillis - Thanks for your kind comments. Like you, the bridge has always been my favorite part of the song.
- Dani - Thanks for stopping by and leaving your nice comment. I got to meet Jim Reeves when I was just a child. Hadn't written the song then - Fate - what can I say?
- Alan & Di - Thanks for listening. I've spent a lot of time in Hilton Head with my work before retiring. It's quite a place with many celebrities and big corporate CEO's and the like living there. I'm up the coast from there living on the old family farm near Myrtle Beach. I grew up in the Charleston area.
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Lovely Charlie! There's something about your music really makes me feel at home. Cheers.
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- RichMac - I really appreciate your kind comment and thanks for listening. BIAB has become a treasured gift of retirement for me and the ability to interact here on the forum with people on an international level is a very important part of my BIAB experience.
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Charlie, real nice traditional straight ahead country song. Good vocal and well mixed. I enjoyed it. Tom
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Thanks Tommy. I appreciate your comments.
Regards,
Charlie
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Hi Charlie, Like the traditional whispering Bill Anderson vibe. You know the old saying some songs are 10% inspiration and 90% perspiration. Heck, it might have been ol' Bill that said it - he's been writing a long time.  Josie
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Thanks for listening Josie.
In this instance, it was 100% desperation! My wife was still sleeping and I was wanting so much to do a vocal track that I couldn't wait any longer for her to wake up so I was trying to be quiet.
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I like the flow of the arrangement the way it is here. The lyrics don't feel rushed or crowded so I don't hear a dire need for any kind of brake in the flow of the narrative.
much enjoyed!
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Gruveride, glad you enjoyed the song and I appreciate your comments on the lyrics and flow.
Regards,
Charlie
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