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Hi All, Here's something a bit different. This called STORY. A passing glimpse in the city lights Underneath the neon sky Hard to see the look in her eyes If she was looking at all He reached for his phone to call It rang her like a bell One more night One more story to tell A beam of light from the midnight moon Lights the dark but it’s gone too soon Around the corner in another room She sits waiting at the bar And listens to an old guitar As he heads out for the well One more ride One more story to tell The sun is rising in the east They talked about making peace And the things they liked the least How the time and years can drift The simple moments that always slip Down into the wishing well One more dawn One more story to tell From a whisper to a shout The days ahead are now in doubt All the birds are flying south The storm in rolling in He watches her leave again A failure to compel One more glance One more story to tell The constant ticking of the clock A cold platform is getting dark An empty train is about to park Plenty of room to spare He wishes she was standing there To undo this farewell One more chance One more story to tell Some days the song writes you Words and music all in view They try to get a message through Communication fades Only the silence remains Like a never ending spell One more day One more story to tell BIAB Tracks: 2474: Bass, Acoustic, Held Ev 085 1943: Synth, Rhythm, EuroDance Strings Ev 120 2267: Synth, BellPad, Rhythm 80sPopPads Ev 085 Organ, B3 Background Pop Ev 085 2448: Guitar, Electric Background, PopDreamyBrent Ev 085 RealDrums: UrbanPop Ev GoodGirl 1 Kck1, b:Clap As always - thanks for listening! Bob
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I love it Bob! you paint such great pictures with your lyrics! I also like the way you don't overproduce your work with too much instrumentation which allows the vocal/lyric content take center stage! And speaking about vocals, this one is excellent! Glad to see you contributing on a regular basis! Take care, Torrey
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Thanks for the word pictures. You took me on wonderful ride. Most enjoyable. Thanks Bob. Rob4580
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With this song you set such a strong mood, and this was further enhanced by the vocals. Everything about this was superbly done. Thanks for taking the time to share it with us!
Cheers, Ember
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Dire Straits meets Willy DeVille after the switch blades are binned!
Cheers rayc "What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe
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Torrey,
I appreciate that - thanks.
I am also enjoying your latest one - you are making some really great music!
Bob
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Bob, Another well-written song (as expected). Loved how you changed to tag lines each verse. Another solid production (as expected). Nice use of BIAB to get a "current" sound... Another impassioned vocal (as expected). Another good mix (as expected). Really like this (as expected) fj
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Rob,
I appreciate that - thanks.
Bob
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Just blew my ear drums out ,as i am listening to other showcase posts !! , as i posted on Floyds song , a bloody advert !!.
No more sound cloud for me , i waited and another came on !!.
sorry never heard your song.
Thanks
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Sorry beatmaster - can’t say I have had that experience yet. Maybe something new with SoundCloud.
Bob
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Bob, this is an outstanding song. Great vocal backed by an amazing band, everything is perfect. Loved the lyrics.
This is your best to date IMHO.
Two thumbs up.
Me, it's not about how many times you fail, it's about how many times you get back up. Cop, that's not how field sobriety tests work.
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Bob
Superb work, really nice songwriting.
Very nice backing track choices enhances the song well.
Lovely lyric and your wonderful story telling vocal.
Peter
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"The simple moments that always slip Down into the wishing well"
"Some days the song writes you Words and music all in view"
Just two favs from so many great lines. There's enough rhymes here to last most folks for many songs.
Beyond the fine write and vocal lies a really wonderful band. The way you can use more "modern" tracks to get such a broadly appealing Americana sound is most impressive.
Janice wanted to especially mention how well you used those guitar fills.
Excellent!
J&B
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Ember,
That is very kind. Thanks.
Bob
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Ray,
Thanks for listening.
Bob
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You are a master storyteller and create such perfect music with which to tell them, Bob. Outstanding lyrics (as always). This song reminds me so much of another Bob who writes great story songs.
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Hi rsdean,
Very intimate composition that commands attention from start to finish. Your very original voice captures the attention. And the very pleasant guitar solo. The sentimental atmosphere is very present. I appreciated.
Kndly regard Derochette alias JaniJackFlash
Kindly regards Derochette alias JaniJackFlash
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Floyd,
Thanks very much - I appreciate that.
Bob
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Bob, Very good lyrics and performance! I like your choice for airy backing. "Different" in a good way. Easy listening. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
Misha.
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Mario,
Thanks very much.
Bob
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