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When My Woman Makes Loves To Me



*** The lyric is a bit risque and somewhat suggestive. If you are easily offended by that, no hard feelings if you pass on it. However, the lyric is "clean". ***



I posted this 6 or 7 years ago. Since then, I've done a little massaging - I made the bass a little more crisp and backed the vocal off just a tiny but and soften the vocal reverb. Open to any and all comments. Thanks in advance.

Also, I'm unsure which genre is more appropriate: Smooth RnB or Lounge Jazz. I lean to Smooth RnB. Any thoughts?

I no longer have the list of backing tracks. They disappeared in that computer meltdown I've mention on other songs. But other than the vocal, it's all BIABv12.5. Thanks in advance.



When My Woman Makes Love To Me

(c) 2013 Alan D. David, BMI
(Key of eb)


(v1)
Erotic whispers, I ask her if she'd dare
Lips tracing boldly, I kiss her everywhere
Her breath is heavy, as I make my move
Her body answers when I find my groove
I'm taken to a place beyond the ecstasy
She satisfies my every fantasy

CHORUS

When my woman makes love to me
My soul breaks out in fire
She never leaves me
With an unfulfilled desire
She won't refuse me
She gives me what I need
It's passion with no limits
When my woman makes love to me

INSTRUMENTAL VERSE

CHORUS

When my woman makes love to me
My soul breaks out in fire
She never leaves me
With an unfulfilled desire
She won't refuse me
She gives me what I need
It's passion with no limits
When my woman makes love to me

(v2)
Her touch is tender, her passion oh so strong
She lets me have my way, cuz I won't do her wrong
Our bodies melding, as two turn into one
And when we're finished, the loving's still not done
She whispers in my ear
Says it's the best it's ever been
And she can't wait to love me once again

CHORUS

When my woman makes love to me
My soul breaks out in fire
She never leaves me
With an unfulfilled desire
She won't refuse me
She gives me what I need
It's passion with no limits
When my woman makes love to me
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I vote for Smooth RnB. Real nice listen, and I think the mix sounds right-on.
Lyrics are solid, and develop/maintain the "heat" of the story.
Liked it a lot!

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Yes that is beyond suggestive. Definitely not sex drugs and rock and roll, more of a sultry sexy vibe, and very bold. I vote Soul, like Al Green. Love it.

I hope I'm not out of line with this, what you have is great but as I was listening this popped into my head... I could see the chorus being this, with the line "When my woman makes love to me" being repeated with harmony. That would hammer in the hook, and make it more of a sing-along chorus.

When my woman makes love to me
My soul breaks out in fire
When my woman makes love to me
With an unfulfilled desire
When my woman makes love to me
She gives me what I need
It's passion with no limits
When my woman makes love to me

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Alan, I don't care what genre you place this in this is absolutely an outstanding masterpiece! Love the groove and your vocals. Outstanding lyrics and mix.

This may be your best to date.


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Alan

Smooth, engaging and very listenable.

Enjoyed the song, production and vocal.

Nicely done.

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Alan you made me blush. :-).. Loved this song. Super vocal and loved the lyric. Well done


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Smooth RnB sounds good to me, I can almost smell the mix of sweat and perfume. The band is perfect for the mood, especially nice sax, reminding me of 80's night radio. Passionate voice redeems the promise of the title.

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Alan,

The re-do sounds good. Bass sounds good and the vocal sits in the mix well - crisp, clean without being too-up-front.

I like the way you used the synth pads.

A good listen.

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Great song, great lyrics, good singing, liked it a lot. I felt like the chorus was yearning for some kind of harmony or doubling. Maybe you could use the RT oo-ahs. Whatever, I still enjoyed it and yes, it was a sultry tune!


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We remember this song. Thanks for the opportunity to hear this tweaked version.

I rarely copy other's comments but, man, did Janne nail it.

"Smooth RnB sounds good to me, I can almost smell the mix of sweat and perfume. The band is perfect for the mood, especially nice sax, reminding me of 80's night radio. Passionate voice redeems the promise of the title."

That!

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Originally Posted By: Tano Music
I vote for Smooth RnB. Real nice listen, and I think the mix sounds right-on.
Lyrics are solid, and develop/maintain the "heat" of the story.
Liked it a lot!


Thanks so much, Tano! I appreciate the kind words. Wishing you the very best. Be safe ...

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Originally Posted By: Frankp
Yes that is beyond suggestive. Definitely not sex drugs and rock and roll, more of a sultry sexy vibe, and very bold. I vote Soul, like Al Green. Love it.

I hope I'm not out of line with this, what you have is great but as I was listening this popped into my head... I could see the chorus being this, with the line "When my woman makes love to me" being repeated with harmony. That would hammer in the hook, and make it more of a sing-along chorus.

When my woman makes love to me
My soul breaks out in fire
When my woman makes love to me
With an unfulfilled desire
When my woman makes love to me
She gives me what I need
It's passion with no limits
When my woman makes love to me


Hi Frank ...

You're never out of line when making constructive comments, offering suggestions or comments in general. With very few exceptions, most of us here appreciate all that.

Your suggestions are good. If I ever get a chance to redo this one, I'll definitely use them. Wishing you the very best. Please be safe ...

Alan

PS: Glad you joined us here on the Showcase Forum. I've enjoyed your music.


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Originally Posted By: MarioD
Alan, I don't care what genre you place this in this is absolutely an outstanding masterpiece! Love the groove and your vocals. Outstanding lyrics and mix.

This may be your best to date.


Thank you Mario! I always enjoy your take on things. And I seriously appreciate your constant support.

Best to you & yours ...

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Originally Posted By: PeterF
Alan

Smooth, engaging and very listenable.

Enjoyed the song, production and vocal.

Nicely done.

Peter


Hi peter ...

Many thanks for the listen and very nice words. My replies are rather short as my wife is having serious health issues again. wishing you the best. Be safe ...

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Originally Posted By: Scott C
Alan you made me blush. :-).. Loved this song. Super vocal and loved the lyric. Well done


Hi Scott ...

Yes, it is a bit suggestive. But I'm delighted you took a chance to listen. Glad it works for you. Thanks for letting me know. Best to you. Please be safe ...

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Originally Posted By: jannesan
Smooth RnB sounds good to me, I can almost smell the mix of sweat and perfume. The band is perfect for the mood, especially nice sax, reminding me of 80's night radio. Passionate voice redeems the promise of the title.

Janne


Hi Janne ...

I also lean towards Smooth RnB. And, I have to say, this is one of my all-time favorite reviews. Thanks you so much! You put a huge smile on my face. Again ... thank you!!!

Best to you & yours ...

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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Alan,

The re-do sounds good. Bass sounds good and the vocal sits in the mix well - crisp, clean without being too-up-front.

I like the way you used the synth pads.

A good listen.

fj


Hi Floyd ...

Sure appreciate all that! The pads just kinda fell into place ... didn't have to do much with them. they were just about right fresh out of the box!

Take care and be safe ...

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Originally Posted By: TuneMonger
Great song, great lyrics, good singing, liked it a lot. I felt like the chorus was yearning for some kind of harmony or doubling. Maybe you could use the RT oo-ahs. Whatever, I still enjoyed it and yes, it was a sultry tune!


Hello TM ...

Good to hear from you. I appreciate your time to listen and reply so nicely. I agree with you about the harmony on the choruses. And yes, I v=could go back and add some of the ooh-aahs. I just might do that ... thanks!

Glad you enjoyed it. best to you. Be safe ...

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Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
We remember this song. Thanks for the opportunity to hear this tweaked version.

I rarely copy other's comments but, man, did Janne nail it.

"Smooth RnB sounds good to me, I can almost smell the mix of sweat and perfume. The band is perfect for the mood, especially nice sax, reminding me of 80's night radio. Passionate voice redeems the promise of the title."

That!

J&B


Hi Guys! (Guy & Gal?)

Well, you quoted one of my very favorite reviews in quite a wqhile. I'm delighted to hear you agree with Janne. Thanks for passing that one!

Wishing you the very best. Please be safe ...

Alan


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Alan, you old dog!!! Teddy Pendergrass has nothing on you!! Just teasing. This is really well done.....very nice arrangement and mix!! Take care. Greg

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