A new spoken word song from me. I used the _QUASAR.STY style from Band-in-a-Box, but without the drums and organ. Brutally honest feedback welcome! :-)

Prayer (by James Delsono, on YouTube)

Lyrics:

1st half: the Lord's Prayer;
2nd half:

Our Father, Lord, the one that waits for us, away,
That art above in heaven, so far from us today,
May hallowed be Thy name, may it but blessed be
When people understand the love you have, and see.

Your heavenly Will be done, and may Your Kingdom come
May all this manifest on Earth as well as Heaven,
May You the bread of grace forever give today
May we to forgive sins have strength to do, I pray,

Even as You forgive the sins of those who've erred
Against You ... from temptation keep us safe, oh Lord,
Deliver us from evil, Thy name but blessed be
"Amen" may say all voices that do in Thee believe.