I have just realized a songwriting problem that I've never had. My new song is in the Key of E and in the opening chord verse I sing an E NOTE, but it is against a G#m chord. Someone told me that it clashes and I realized the notes in the G#m are G#m, B and D#. So the E I am singing is clashing with one of the notes in the chord. I've tried playing a different chords there and it doesn't sound great. I've experimented with playing a g#m with NO 5th and that seems to sound okay, however I don't think Band In A box with allow me to do that (I'm using realtracks). Any thoughts on what I can do here? I'm also using EZKEYS and it gives the option to take out notes from the chord (as it's midi based). the 2nd verse of the song the piano comes in as well.
Never noticed this problem before.
The problem comes in on the words PATH and GROWN here and then in the same part of the song in the 2nd verse:


https://soundcloud.com/happyrondrums/even-the-hardest-heart

Any thoughts appreciated!

Last edited by HappyRon; 11/20/20 10:39 AM.

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